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I think it's too wide. The area where it just fades off is kind of distracting from the focal' date=' so I suggest narrowing it down a bit.

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Really? I thought the width was fine. =/ Oh well. Anything else?

 

Bad lightning imo.

Looks LQ too.

Bad perspective too.

 

Lighting is actually nice. =P I thought it worked well.

LQ? Explain. It really doesn't seem that LQ.

Perspective as in Compo? Yah, but I plan on maybe fixing that. Any tips?

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Lightning has to actually come out of somewhere.

imo it feels lq.

A good perspective has to have a good focal.

Also work a bit more on the depth. Blurring close objects also helps depth.

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I think it's too wide. The area where it just fades off is kind of distracting from the focal' date=' so I suggest narrowing it down a bit.

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Really? I thought the width was fine. =/ Oh well. Anything else?

 

 

 

All that I have left to say is change the font style of your text so that it's a little bit more clear on what it actually says. I know it says "raiN" but I would suggest that it be more readable. Maybe even darken the text a bit so that it doesn't look like it's just imprinted there.

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