NeoDemonX Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Saruto finlly got the the village gates and couple of Jonin started to felling Saruto to the the hospital. When he got their he want to the desk. The nurse saw and said "What happen". "I don't know but he needs a Medical-nin now". Then a group a of Medical-nin and took the boy to a room. As their were doing that Saruto walk out the door. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Zetsubou remains unconscious has it was placed to the medical ward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 [align=center] Bantyo Chuckled To Himself As He Walked Around The Leaf Village Forest "This Body Is. . . An Improvement, The Human's Soul Hase Gone, Leaving Me Full Conrtol Of The Body" After An Hour Bantyo Stoped, And Jumped Into a Tree, Landing On The Tip Of The Tree With One Foot, And Then He Started To Meditate[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 In the medical ward Zetsubou started to wake up as his eyes started to open wide. He turned his head as he saw a nurse bring food next to the bed. "Crap....actually food." The nursed nodded as she walked away. Zetsubou reached over grabbed the loaf of bread and started to eat it. "Great food." He stuffed the piece of bread into his mouth and remains laying in bed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 OOC ok Untouched lets but where are you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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NeoDemonX Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Saruto never mind what he did so he keep walk in the Leaf Village forest to chear his head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Name: Akima Hatake Age: (14-20 please our characters are kids!) 17Gender: Male Appearance: (in spoiler) [spoiler=Click Here] Ninja Rank: Chuunin Leaf/Blood: (if Blood tell if you wish to be the leader first come first serve) LeafVillage: (if Blood name former village) KonohagakureWeapon: (optional Max 3 unique weapons) Kusanagi BladeElement: (Max 2 unless you have rinnegan) Wind' date=' WaterTailed Beast: Nine-Tailed Fox -1800Jutsu: (in spoilers) (Max 25 Jutsu) [spoiler=Jutsu'] [spoiler=Wind Release]Wind Release: Blade of WindWind Release: Spiraling Wind BallWind Release: Drilling Air BulletWind Release: Godly Wind From The MountainsWind Release: Great Breakthrough Wind Release: Verdant Mountain’s Violent WindWind Release: Violent Wind PalmWind Release: Whirlwind FistWind Release: Wind Rock BarrageWind Release: Rasenshuriken [spoiler=Water Release]Water Release: Thousand Flying Water Needles of DeathWater Release: Water Prison TechniqueWater Release: Destructive Rapid TorrentsWater Release: Exploding Water Colliding WaveWater Release: Five Feeding SharksWater Release: Grand Waterfall TechniqueWater Release: Tearing TorrentWater Release: Water Dragon Bullet TechniqueWater Release: Water Fang BulletWater Release: Water Shockwave [spoiler=Other]Multiple Shadow Clone TechniqueGreat Clone ExplosionBringer-of-Darkness TechniqueRasengan Bloodline Trait: (Only one and cannot be overpowered) (I’ll tell you if it is overpowered) (Cannot activate unless 2 stars)(You may create your own and have a set of jutsu to go with it!!) Gyakagan - (Bloodline Trait created as a result of Obito’s Sharingan merging with Kakashi’s DNA that was passed down to his descendants it allows the user to know the opponent’s moves before they do.)[spoiler=Kekkei Genkai Jutsu]Time Paradox - Allows the user to loop time and cause an elimanative paradox by bringing his opponent's past form into the present and in order to fix the paradox reality erases both of them from existence. (This Technique costs a little time to prepare and a lot of chakra to use. It causes fatique equal to Kakashi's use of the Mongekyo Sharingan.) Bio: (needed) At the age of 7 Akima mastered the Shadow Clone Technique, and at the age of 10 activated his Gyakagan and decided to honor his ancestor Kakashi Hatake by mastering Kakashi’s personal technique the Lightning Blade even though it is a lightning element technique and his chakra elements are wind and water. Ok first thing your Time Paradox Jutsu for the Gyakagan is a little overpowered, you say you can erase both opponents past and present from existance, that means you kill them, Godmodding!!! Maybe if you changed it saying that It paralized, or Froze them, or something like that it would be fine. But as is you can kill anybody just like that with little damage to yourself. Second in order to get the 9 Tailed Beast/Kyuubi you must first pay the price. Fix those and then accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 --I think it might be an illusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 ooc: If it was an illusion it would be acceptable, but It wasn't meant for that as he Pmed me explaining a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Name: Akima Hatake Age: (14-20 please our characters are kids!) 17Gender: Male Appearance: (in spoiler) [spoiler=Click Here] Ninja Rank: Chuunin Leaf/Blood: (if Blood tell if you wish to be the leader first come first serve) LeafVillage: (if Blood name former village) KonohagakureWeapon: (optional Max 3 unique weapons) Kusanagi BladeElement: (Max 2 unless you have rinnegan) Wind' date=' WaterTailed Beast: Nine-Tailed Fox -1800Jutsu: (in spoilers) (Max 25 Jutsu) [spoiler=Jutsu'] [spoiler=Wind Release]Wind Release: Blade of WindWind Release: Spiraling Wind BallWind Release: Drilling Air BulletWind Release: Godly Wind From The MountainsWind Release: Great Breakthrough Wind Release: Verdant Mountain’s Violent WindWind Release: Violent Wind PalmWind Release: Whirlwind FistWind Release: Wind Rock BarrageWind Release: Rasenshuriken [spoiler=Water Release]Water Release: Thousand Flying Water Needles of DeathWater Release: Water Prison TechniqueWater Release: Destructive Rapid TorrentsWater Release: Exploding Water Colliding WaveWater Release: Five Feeding SharksWater Release: Grand Waterfall TechniqueWater Release: Tearing TorrentWater Release: Water Dragon Bullet TechniqueWater Release: Water Fang BulletWater Release: Water Shockwave [spoiler=Other]Multiple Shadow Clone TechniqueGreat Clone ExplosionBringer-of-Darkness TechniqueRasengan Bloodline Trait: (Only one and cannot be overpowered) (I’ll tell you if it is overpowered) (Cannot activate unless 2 stars)(You may create your own and have a set of jutsu to go with it!!) Gyakagan - (Bloodline Trait created as a result of Obito’s Sharingan merging with Kakashi’s DNA that was passed down to his descendants it allows the user to know the opponent’s moves before they do.)[spoiler=Kekkei Genkai Jutsu]Time Paradox - Allows the user to loop time and cause an elimanative paradox by bringing his opponent's past form into the present and in order to try to fix the paradox reality freezes both of them in time. (This Technique costs a little time to prepare and a lot of chakra to use and it causes fatique.) Bio: (needed) At the age of 7 Akima mastered the Shadow Clone Technique, and at the age of 10 activated his Gyakagan and decided to honor his ancestor Kakashi Hatake by mastering Kakashi’s personal technique the Lightning Blade even though it is a lightning element technique and his chakra elements are wind and water. ooc: edited and sending points now also where are we? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 ooc: everyone has just entered in their own fashion. Hayate is at his house sleeping while his father is on a classified mission. Kenji was being chased by unkown ninja, trapping the ninja in a hole kenji looked over into the hole and got hit with a fire style jutsu that burnt his leg. When Kenji was able to move again he decided to leave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 --We need more blood >_> also well I am in the hospital as I am a poor person who can't find anything to eat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 ooc: who's his father? and is Kenji his younger brother?ic: Akima was walking around the Leaf village and got really bored "I think I'll go train." he went off to training area 13. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Akima was walking around the Leaf village and got really bored "I think I'll go train." he went off to training area 13.[align=center]Bantyo Entered The Leaf Village After Knocking Out The Gate Guards "Luckly I Am 'Safe' Here" He Muttered Looking At His Blood Village Headband "Also A Good Thing I'm A Sort Of 'Ally' To The Leaf' date=' So I'm 50% Safe. . . "[/i'] He Walked Toward Training Area 13 And Saw Akima "I Wounder If He Would Spar. . . " [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Zarkus heard something a while away, and got up. He saw Bantyo and Akima about 1 mile away from his area."Hm. I guess it was a bad idea to kill these guys... so close to a training area. Hehheheh."He ran away as fast as he could. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 In his deep and long sleep he remained still in the medical bed. His eyes are twitching showing signs of a nightmare. In his mind and dream he appeared in a black world or dark and nothingness. Zetsubou was right there in the middle of it as he was nervous as a dark ominous appeared. "Yes it seems you final was able to see my world within you." The ominous voiced broke in a cynical laughter. Zetsubou fell over on the dark ground as he started to move backwards. "Who....who....are...y.o..u.?" He backed up against a tall demon as Zetsubou looks straight at the beast. The demon grabs Zetsubou by his shirt. "Ha ha ha, I am the whole and I am nothing, I am you. Now I shall be taking you into darkness." The demon started to fade as darkness started to engulf the body of Zetsubou. "No.no...nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!" In a quick second he woke up from his sleep almost screaming. He was breathing heavily realizing where he was. He looks around. "Crap this is the leaf, I need to get out of here now." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 ooc: fine untouched if you want to fight okic: Akima noticed someone coming while he was practicing his taijutsu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 [align=center]Bantyo Walked Out Of A Bush And Over To Akima "You There," He Said Proudly "I Wish to Fight You" He Added, As He Undid The Knot On His Headband And Re-Tied It Around His Arm "What Do Ya Say, Kid, Youngen, Verse And Old Lion?"[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Zarkus decided against heading back to the villiage. "I need to watch a good fight anyway, so..."He hid behind a bush where Bantyo and Akima were fighting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Zetsubou after realizing where he was he jumped out of the bed and headed for the entrance of the hospital. He got through the doors as he ran into the street. "Crap I hate the villages, I need to get out of here." He continues to run past several building with many people watching the boy run. The gate of the leaf is coming in site. "Yes finally I can get out of here soon." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 ooc: I gotta go my parents are kicking me off sorry I'll be back tomarrowic: Akima looked at Bantyo "I accept." he took a stance and prepared for Bantyo's attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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.Requiem Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 --I just noticed, your grammar sucks. Zetzubou got through the entrance of the leaf as he ran toward the forest. He got to the path of the forest unrealized he ran straight to the training grounds. He stopped in the middle of it looking around. "Where am I now?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 [align=center]Bantyo Turned Around And Noticed Someone Who Looked Lost "What On Earth? You There, Need Any Help?" He Asked Walking Over To Zetzubou[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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