Azmodius Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 I wasted like half my day on thisCNC. I think I improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Whats with the arm at the back, and its okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Umm can you remove the text it makes it look bad and its kindaf distracting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 BOMP IT> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 I think it is cool and futuristic 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kay. Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 SSS'NICE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 ^ Don't spam dood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 ...that's not spam, he was complementing your banner, or whatever it is. Anyways, it look's good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 BUPM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marly Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 ITT: We don't know what CnC is. No/Very little flow.The focal is good.Needs moar depth.Don't add the overlay-ed render in the back, it takes away from the focal, and if you had any, the flow. (Unless, of course, it was going with it)I didn't notice the text at first, xD use either all lowercase or all caps when it comes to text in sigs. Making The Text Like This Usually Distracts The Viewer From The Focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 ITT: We don't know what CnC is. No/Very little flow.The focal is good.Needs moar depth.Don't add the overlay-ed render in the back' date=' it takes away from the focal, and if you had any, the flow. (Unless, of course, it was going with it)I didn't notice the text at first, xD use either all lowercase or all caps when it comes to text in sigs. Making The Text Like This Usually Distracts The Viewer From The Focal.[/color'] Thinking of taking out the arm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 BUMPUS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 I saw the stock for this sig. I don't know if you render it or not, but it looks like you use a stock or image. I don't like the hand behind him and the second one. The hand looks like it is from some other render. I like what you did to the BG. It looks good, but i think you overdid it IMO.There is nothing that distracts the focal and that is good. There is some blending, but not much flow. You are getting better, but just keep trying! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 1.) The arm is distracting, amputate2,) Focal is nice3.) Lighting is ok4.) Depth is meh5.) The arm takes away from the flow Points lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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