Enma Ai Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 [align=center]Okay, here is Version 3 of my new Structure Deck. Rate, Hate & Comment Give Good and Constructive Criticism/ Compliments ^_^ Oh and gimme lots o' REPS LOVE! Render = Blood Rose[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 I still see some yellow around the box. Structure deck logo sucks. Seems better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Yeah, faint yellow thing on the outside, and the proportions are odd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 i didnt notice the yellow on PS because of the colors of the blank canvas. And Marvel, what do you mean by proportions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 The shape on how it looks, might want to look at an acutally box. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 proportions = angling, you wouldnt draw a person with a freakishly large head. Is it meant to be cuboid, or meant to have a slight slope at the top? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Here is a real Structure Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Here is a real Structure Deck. In that case,you got it all wrong:1.The structure deck logo needs some work,not just copy-paste the same one over again,use some pentooling stuff to edit it to it is exactly the same length as the text,even if you aren't going to sell these2.The Structure deck logo and text in the front is too high and the text should be in caps3.The front 5ds logo is too small4.you got the text effects wrong,try making it flat with a light border,not as it it was 3d5.missing Pojo.com logo on the side (jk) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Ok, i will keep working on it. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andinator Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 it looks like one of those structure deck ones. also, gimme the template again, theres some stuff i gotta do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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