Navras Posted May 12, 2009 Report Share Posted May 12, 2009 OOC: why am i denied? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted May 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2009 --codypops, you deserved what Untouched said. Untouched new character, accepted. Note: codypops, he said that because of your first RP post. It should have been longer. Golnax, you were denied because your example wasn't long enough. "So, Texy... How do you feel about... Tifa and Aerith...?" Yuffie asked girlishly, "I think that Tifa is a little aggressive, and I think Aerith is way too calm. But you on the other hand, can be angry, sad, happy, calm, everything that a normal human should be able to be." Telexia said happily. Yuffie giggled and blushed. "So, why do you ask?" Telexia asked curiously, with his hair blowing in the wind. Yuffie couldn't help but admire and gaze at Telexia, it was the perfect moment. "Now. I have to tell him now!" Yuffie thought to herself. "Well.... Telexia... I was asking because..." Yuffie blushed shyly, and continued. "I lo--" Yuffie looked up, to see Telexia slapping around a bunch of Dragoon Nobodies. Yuffie sighed, and said sadly, "Nevermind..." Yuffie sighed again and ran to help Telexia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kefka~ Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 (in TWTNW Zeke was walking towards the Memory Skyscraper, he didn't know what it was but something was drawing him closer to it, memories raced threw his head..... you know not of its power..... the keyblade can only be controled by one...... are you worthy of such power? you'll never defeat what's inside of you...... as he walked closer he had the feeling he was being followed, he turned to see multiple dusks coming from behind him, he formed his two keyblades in his hands and turned to all of them) Zeke: heh, guess some just can't wait to die! (darts towards the nobodies) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted May 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 --New Rule: No script-speak. As in, RP the way you did in your example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kefka~ Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 --script is usually how i rp, but i'll try to stop, if i start it again though, it's cause it's a force of habit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted May 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 --Okay then, if anybody else has a habit of script, please pm me to let me know. Thankyou for informing me Stein, as I wrote my RP posts here in script for the first while, and when I tried to stop, it was hard. I understand ^~^. "Hey... Telexia..." Yuffie said, as they were now sitting in Twilight Town, where Roxas, Pence, Hayner, and Ollette sat when they were children. "Yes?" Telexia looked at Yuffie, his blue eyes gleaming, his hair blowing in the wind, shining no longer restricted by his headphones, as he had removed them. Yuffie couldn't stop staring at his blue eyes, they were shining like the blue Struggle sphere when you look to the sun through it. "Hello? Earth to Yuffie?" Telexia called to her, snapping his fingers infront of her face. "Huh?! Oh, sorry Tex." Yuffie apologized sincerely. "So, what were you going to say?" Telexia asked, once again his eyes gleaming. "Well... Telexia..." Yuffie said girlishly, blushing, and holding her hands together and swinging them. "I lo--" Yuffie opened her eyes, to see Telexia gone, and on the ground beating a couple of Neoshadow Heartless. Yuffie sighed, disappointed and said "Nevermind..." Yuffei sighed again, and jumped down from the clock tower to help Telexia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Navras Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 OOC: i added two or three sentaces, am i accepted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kefka~ Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 After Zeke took care of the nobodies he put his keyblades away and continued to walk threw TWTNW. "What's missing?" he asked himself."Why does nothing feel right?" "Maybe because you don't have a purpose in existing." Zeke turned around. Standing some feet behind him was a hooded figure in a black robe. "What's that supposed to mean?" he asked while facing him. "You don't know who you are, why you're here, or why you're even holding the keyblades you have. Face it you're a wreck." "Shut up!" Last Judgement and Rapture formed in Zeke's hands. "I don't need someone telling me that i don't matter." The figure just laughed. "Then come. Prove to me you exist. Prove to me that you mean something." --that better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted May 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 --Golnax, once somebody is denied, they are DENIED. But still, your grammar, spelling, and punctuation could use major tune-ups. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Navras Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 OOC: well that sucks.And as far as my grammer and puntuation goes, I'll do the same thing to you that I do to everyone else. If you have not noticed, this is perfect english in writing. I choose not to write this way all the time to save time. I'm writing a book, I know how to write.but thank you for the info anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Name: Kirimono MurusagaSide: KeybladerWeapon(s):[spoiler=Destiny Key] [spoiler=Prophecy Oblivion] Limits: 1. Destiny Light Form2. Oblivion FormAppearance: Keyblade Names: Destiny Key, Prophecy Oblivion.Home World: World of PropheciesLimit Weapons: Destiny Oblivion, Prophecy KeyRP Example: Many days have passed since the making of Alliance XV. After leaving his home world, he was sent to find Sora and end this new alliance once and for all. He searched every world he can, but he couldn't find Destiny Islands. His only link to Sora is the Disney Castle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 --Umm, that isn't a RP Example, that's a bio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Name: Cirno. Side (Alliance, Keybladers, or Neutral): AllianceWeapon(s) (Keyblader Max:2,Alliance Max:1,Neutral Max:3): Ice Sword-Cannot find an image currentlyLimits:Ice FormAppearance:[spoiler=] Keyblade Names: N/AHome World (Doesn't have to be Disney): GensokyoLimit Weapons:Ice Sword. Ability's gained (If allowed): Can shoot ice crystalsRP Example (Atleast one paragraph): Does it have to be this character? If not[spoiler=]Lucas stepped cowardly towards his enemy. He looked up, and saw his ugly face. He ran back, hoping he would go easy on him. When his opponent attacked. He tried to dodge it, but was to late. He was hit down. "Ow. You monster!" He yelled. "I'll make you pay for that!" He yelled and charged at his opponent, not thinking about the consequences. When he got up close, he lunged at his opponent. His opponent merely brushed him off like a bug. He stood back, saddened at his defeat. "I will become stronger!" He said to himself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 --Finally a villain! Accepted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 --Umm' date=' that isn't a RP Example, that's a bio.[/quote'] OoC: Well, what does an RP example look like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DsoloB Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 (NOTE THAT THE BIOGRAPHY IS MY IDEA)Name:SteveSide: NeutralWeapon: Katana(Ninja's Sword) Limits: Dual Weapon (gives him double speed), Blood Dance (his wing spreads out and he kills people without a second thought)Appearance:Keyblade Names:N/AHome World:Castle OblivionLimit Weapons: RP Example: "Here we are," said Steve as he walked up to Castle Oblivion. One year ago, he saw the young Keyblade Master Sora enter the doors to his home. He watched as Sora defeated the Organization members plotting there. He also saw Riku defeat the Underground members (Zexion and Lexaeus). Three Darkside Heartless came and attacked Steve. Steve pulled out his Katana and struck each Darkside down with bloodlust in his Red eyes. "5,000th heartless today. A new record," Steve muttered to himself. He put his Katana back in it's sheath. He fell asleep on a tree until he heard a strange sound, the sound of a ship, approach him. Bio:He was born as a Nobody in Castle Oblivion that had control metal. He hated his own kind and decided to become a universely-known mercenary. He has a Katana with a red Handle and Sheath. He gets strong by fighting at least 1,000 Heartless a day (as a Nobody, Heartless chase him around as they are mortal enemies). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 --It is physical impossible to fight 1,000 Heartless a day as if somebody were to do that all of the Heartless would disappear in a mere year. Also, go read the plot, it's TWENTY YEARS after Sora defeated Xemnas. It is physically impossible for your RP example to work, and, there are no trees in Castle Oblivion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemaniac92711 Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 Name: Geffrey/RoninSide (Alliance, Keybladers, or Neutral): KeybladersWeapon(s) (Keyblader Max:2,Alliance Max:1,Neutral Max:3): Their Keyblades and their SpiritsLimits: they have no clue what that is.Appearance: Pale skin, red Hair, red t-shirt, blue jeans, with blue/hazel eyes.Keyblade Names: Angel's Sword/Deamon's BladeHome World (Doesn't have to be Disney): Digital World/Real WorldLimit Weapons: They Have no clue what that is.RP Example (Atleast one paragraph): Torn apart by the fact his other chased away his parents and after his adventure in the digital world he decided to see if any more of his video games were real and he tested Kingdom Hearts first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted March 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 Don't necrobump >.>. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemaniac92711 Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 Don't necrobump >.>. Necro-whosywhatzit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Don't necrobump >.>. Necro-whosywhatzit? (((It means to post on an old thread. LOCKED.))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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