Alastar Rainford Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 FireThe warm embrace as when love is madeIceThe sweet sweet pain when she rakes her nails down my backWaterThe perfect flow of when I whisper words in her earWindThe force which Binds us as we come togetherEarthThe solid fragment of ground we lay uponLightThe shining glow in our eyes when we kissDarkThe aftermath of it all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 uhmm hello anyone here :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 I am now! Whats up Haruki? How yah been?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 a lil love sickHaven't talked to my girlfriend in since Thursday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 =.= bumpis anyone else alive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 15, 2009 Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 Let the blood and sweat drench though your teeth as a sword is stricken down threw the strands of your sinful veinsLet time take its toll on your bones structural stature you so cherish with your waysLet your dear brain rot as your crying eyes see your lasting memories go astrayAnd let the beating heart stop your life so you can finally erode away --did I scare everyone away....last bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted August 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2009 Let the blood and sweat drench though your teeth as a sword is stricken down threw the strands of your sinful veinsLet time take its toll on your bones structural stature you so cherish with your waysLet your dear brain rot as your crying eyes see your lasting memories go astrayAnd let the beating heart stop your life so you can finally erode away --did I scare everyone away....last bump Don't know where everyone else went but I'm still here. I'm just lacking any inspiration right now. Nice job here though....even if it is a little creepy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted August 17, 2009 Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 lately i've been writing alot of poems so i though i'd post them here to see what you all think so here they are....3 more will be added here maybe tommrow or today....[spoiler=“Morning Sun”]In the morning sun' date=' I catch a gimps of sun light,All the dreams fade away into tomorrow,I lay in bed waiting for the sun to worm my face,As the first rays of light hit the earth I awaken from the nightmares from the void… ok please teel me if this one's ok because i think i should just deleat it.... [spoiler=the call']“The Call” Someone if they can here me please help me,I need someone to get me out of the depths of the darkness,In the hallways of middle school I set here in a class room alone,While everyone else talks with their friends I’m here with out you,Panicking writhen my heart it flows threw,Where are you I scream, I here no answer the other students louden their voices,I scream one more time for your name, Still no answer I sink my head in disappointment,As I sink down into my chair I lower my head slowly,Until the bell finally rings I get to see our smiling face,Though only for a split second,My pinking heart stops until the next class starts… [spoiler=my heart beat]“My Heart Beat”As once again I’m pulled closer to you,My heart beats faster and faster,As your long arms wrap tightly around me,My arms wrap around you to,Please tell me…can you feel my heart beat agenst yours,As someone else enters the room, you quickly back away from me again, We both gaze into each others eyes knowing I must leave,You bring me back to my home sad and quite,Durning the night as I gaze up at the harvest moon in the dead of night only to here the cars going by, As I’m writing this poem for you I stop to wonder,Can you still feel my heart beat agenst yours? [spoiler= “Secretes of High School”]This is my last year here as a 8th grader,The deep dark secretes that I here,I’m for sure to fail, I use to think that high school was soupose to be fun,Now that the 8th grade teachers explain it to me I fear in terror,Right know I wish to never have been born,Or to just drop dead so I don’t have to live in fear anymore,The deep dark secretes of high school will forever be half hidden form my eyes… >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted August 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2009 lately i've been writing alot of poems so i though i'd post them here to see what you all think so here they are....3 more will be added here maybe tommrow or today....[spoiler=“Morning Sun”]In the morning sun' date=' I catch a gimps of sun light,All the dreams fade away into tomorrow,I lay in bed waiting for the sun to worm my face,As the first rays of light hit the earth I awaken from the nightmares from the void… ok please teel me if this one's ok because i think i should just deleat it.... [spoiler=the call']“The Call” Someone if they can here me please help me,I need someone to get me out of the depths of the darkness,In the hallways of middle school I set here in a class room alone,While everyone else talks with their friends I’m here with out you,Panicking writhen my heart it flows threw,Where are you I scream, I here no answer the other students louden their voices,I scream one more time for your name, Still no answer I sink my head in disappointment,As I sink down into my chair I lower my head slowly,Until the bell finally rings I get to see our smiling face,Though only for a split second,My pinking heart stops until the next class starts… [spoiler=my heart beat]“My Heart Beat”As once again I’m pulled closer to you,My heart beats faster and faster,As your long arms wrap tightly around me,My arms wrap around you to,Please tell me…can you feel my heart beat agenst yours,As someone else enters the room, you quickly back away from me again, We both gaze into each others eyes knowing I must leave,You bring me back to my home sad and quite,Durning the night as I gaze up at the harvest moon in the dead of night only to here the cars going by, As I’m writing this poem for you I stop to wonder,Can you still feel my heart beat agenst yours? [spoiler= “Secretes of High School”]This is my last year here as a 8th grader,The deep dark secretes that I here,I’m for sure to fail, I use to think that high school was soupose to be fun,Now that the 8th grade teachers explain it to me I fear in terror,Right know I wish to never have been born,Or to just drop dead so I don’t have to live in fear anymore,The deep dark secretes of high school will forever be half hidden form my eyes… >_>well....there are quite a few spelling errors and the last three poems stanzas contain different amounts of lines. Other than that they are dark and depressing as usual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 thanks but is anyone live here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted September 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 thanks but is anyone live here? lol I am always on it's just I ran into a huge lapse of inspiration so I don't have anything to post. There also seems to be lapses of inspiration all around as no one else has posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 same here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 hm well this sucks then....wait.....oops heh heh :oops:i forgot to post these[spoiler=Dreams]“Dreams”Dream…what are they,Are they playful lands or creatures that take you on journeys,Dreams to me are nights savors,They open up a whole new world for me to explore,Dreams crate my Imation for me to daydream tomorrow,Maybe to others their just you imagine when your asleep, When people say that around me,I get frustrated and I think no their wrong dreams are more then just an image in your head, I live off dreams and my friends…my real friends,Their the only reason I’m alive today,I’d done suicide long ago if I didn’t have them in my life, So I hope how ever is reading this that you have good friends, your dreams and hope ahead of you,For if your family hates you like mine does you need something to hope on…. [spoiler=My Sanctuary]“My Sanctuary” In the middle of the night,My dream wings set out to flight,To the world of dreams,In Serpico were I belong,Were my Reala is and my friends,We all join together for our journeys to begin,With all of our hored pastes we become family in a way, Aaron the annoying,Zerkciese the kind,Nights the silent,Dowling the noblest,Reala the cutest,And me Midnight the 2ed deadliest, All of us form our family…of nightmarens,To stop any evil that tratens our home land,May it be the fire lord, Brunis, or anyone else,Where here to STOP and KILL them! [spoiler=Sorrow]“Sorrow” Sorrowful sweet disrepair flows writhen me,I know you hate my poetry,But this is the only way I’ll be hared,By maybe you and maybe someone others, You remind me sometimes of my mistakes, The time with the computer and know with swear words,I watched you laugh with our other friend, While I sat at another lunch table falling apart…crying and morning for you both to be their with me, At recurs I swore around a teacher then your usual sweet voice swipes into disapointment and disgrace towards me,When this happens I wish I was never even born or that I never even moved schools,Then you joyfully jab me in the rib cage to make me laugh again, Only to hide the pain behind me eyes even more, Know in Ms. Jonas’ room I regreat writing this poem for you,I regreate and hate this gift of obsession I have for writing,Please read or lesson to the rest carefully if you still are, I don’t want you to feel bad for me or to care for me anymore,At least I know you’ll maybe forgive what I’ve done… [spoiler=Fridays Parting]“Friday‘s Parting”Time…the fastest thing on this plant,It draws closer towards the end of day,The final hour before I can’t see you for a few days,The last minute before tears swell in my heart,The very last breath we share together,The last walk threw the middle school hallways, The bell rings…we part from each other,I go into the sea of people, You wait for the teacher to come,I try to look back just to see your face one more time,But I was forced threw the doorway before we could even make eye contact, Know class has begun I sigh in disappointment,Knowing I won’t see you, Suddenly time slows class seems endless,Tears form in my eyes,My face red,Tears of sorrow tinkle down my cheek,Know it’s the 2ed day of loneliness,I long to see you again,I mess you… [spoiler= Anthem for tonight]“Anthem for tonight”Boo running down my arm,The wound caused by all you jerks,All the pain and hateful words has finally drove me insane,I laugh as the blood runs more and more down my arm, I draw closer into the deepths of the void,Deeper and deeper into the darkness,Away from love blinded by anger and hate,This is your anthem for tonight, You all say this crap to me to make me look like a fool,But who’s the one with friends,Real friends not some other low lives that make other people hate their lives, Or at least to the point of suicide,Real friends are the ones who want you to keep living,This is everyone’s anthem for tonight, Why I ask…why do you toucher me,What did I do to you,Why am I the victim here,I didn’t unease you did I,This is my prayer for tonight, Can’t you see the pain in my eyes,The pain you caused since 8th grade began,Don’t you know how much pain you caused me,This is the 7th and 8th grade anthem for tonight… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted September 23, 2009 Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 ok come on people if anyone's alive hello? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted September 24, 2009 Report Share Posted September 24, 2009 Hopeless is the meaningLet them pour their last breathDeath is only a moment of timeUntil the time of Judgement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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