Toxic-skull Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 crud...oh well maybe next time i'll win, good job sid ^_^ Hey' date=' glad to see that this club is still going strong! Thanks for keeping it up Duckmasta! You're doing a great job! ^_^[/quote'] yay your back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Hey' date=' glad to see that this club is still going strong! Thanks for keeping it up Duckmasta! You're doing a great job! ^_^[/quote'] Well i'm glad your back, even if it may only be temporary. I hope to be able to read more of your poetry in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Hey' date=' glad to see that this club is still going strong! Thanks for keeping it up Duckmasta! You're doing a great job! ^_^[/quote'] Well i'm glad your back, even if it may only be temporary. I hope to be able to read more of your poetry in the future. I wish I had more time to do so. I'll have lots of free time in August though! ^_^ Anyways, let's all discuss our favorite poets! Mine is probably Robert Frost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Poetry to me is like music. I don't have a favorite author, only favorite poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 I've lost my mind,My tears are falling,They are lost in the rain,I cut my arm bleeding,Pain is washing my face,The beast I've become,What have I done,The fear building,Anger raging,Vegeance burning,Why do I live,Time will come unto me,My wrath will be sort. Just a poem about how i'm feeling right now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Haha back with another part to Forever in a dream.. Just for reminder ...Forever in a dream... The fire setsThe water calmsThe light dimsThe sounds disappearThe imagination collapsesThe mind enters activenessThe body dives downThe mind takes overThe body is wrapped in chainsThe world full of destruction disappearsThe users happiness replaces allThe Door slams shutA new universe createdPress on your luck .:Uplifting Current:. You sore through the landGrasping the air with your handsAnd land on a beach with shifting sandThe ocean waves calmly swing back and forthThe life around it slowly moves onBut you remain unchanged and unseenYou wait till night which has no moonOnly to be consumed with the worlds darknessYou never sleep but waitThen you wonder where is the lightOnly for a light to show up in the waking hours which shatter ones soul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Haha back with another part to Forever in a dream.. Just for reminder ...Forever in a dream... The fire setsThe water calmsThe light dimsThe sounds disappearThe imagination collapsesThe mind enters activenessThe body dives downThe mind takes overThe body is wrapped in chainsThe world full of destruction disappearsThe users happiness replaces allThe Door slams shutA new universe createdPress on your luck .:Uplifting Current:. You sore through the landGrasping the air with your handsAnd land on a beach with shifting sandThe ocean waves calmly swing back and forthThe life around it slowly moves onBut you remain unchanged and unseenYou wait till night which has no moonOnly to be consumed with the worlds darknessYou never sleep but waitThen you wonder where is the lightOnly for a light to show up in the waking hours which shatter ones soulwow i really like these two 1st one i think is deep and really well put good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Haha back with another part to Forever in a dream.. Just for reminder ...Forever in a dream... The fire setsThe water calmsThe light dimsThe sounds disappearThe imagination collapsesThe mind enters activenessThe body dives downThe mind takes overThe body is wrapped in chainsThe world full of destruction disappearsThe users happiness replaces allThe Door slams shutA new universe createdPress on your luck .:Uplifting Current:. You sore through the landGrasping the air with your handsAnd land on a beach with shifting sandThe ocean waves calmly swing back and forthThe life around it slowly moves onBut you remain unchanged and unseenYou wait till night which has no moonOnly to be consumed with the worlds darknessYou never sleep but waitThen you wonder where is the lightOnly for a light to show up in the waking hours which shatter ones soulwow i really like these two 1st one i think is deep and really well put good job.seconded! Sry i haven't been on in awhile, I was at Otakon. It was fun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I kissed my catBut he Scratched backSo I set a fireThere be no more cat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emonessex Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 I kissed my catBut he Scratched backSo I set a fireThere be no more cat Shame on you for killing the cutest animal out there. The neko gods shall strike you down lol. (I joke.)Forgive me for not posting very often, it's a busy part of the year here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 I kissed my catBut he Scratched backSo I set a fireThere be no more cat Shame on you for killing the cutest animal out there. The neko gods shall strike you down lol. (I joke.)Forgive me for not posting very often' date=' it's a busy part of the year here.[/quote'] its ok. I haven't been posting lately cause my friends have been spending way too much time at my house. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 to keep this alive here are my thoughts as of an hour ago My Heart unfoldsMy Mind unravelsMy Stomach tightensMy Mouth stuttersMy Mind yells in excitement and sorrowI wish She were hereI wish I were thereI wish We were nearVoices,Voices!!They keep coming these Voices!!Its Not right they sayYou can Not love herYou a ChristianShe a PaganIt will Only lead to more SinBut I want to Hold herI want to Care for herI want to Make her HappyBut What The Hell Can I Do!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Ever notice, the day when everything is right. Everything goes right? You feel happy all day, everything passes in the right direction. Passing everything as if it was a green light. Feels simple. Feels like you've felt it before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 “Frozen Dream”Ice sickles alumant in the moonlight,Snow falls gently in the dead of night,The ice princess setting in her tower,Writing down the poetry of her life as the devilish king draws near,The penglum rises slowly as she is placed under it,The time of her death silences every person in the court yard,Forever shall the king be regretted and hate for his chose,The paper back in the princess’ room blows out the open window,Away threw the frozen hills to the warm summer lands,Past mystic forest to a summer kingdom in the room of her lover,He sets their staring at the window until he hares the paper fly under his door,He looks over his shoulder all of the icy blue paper takes form of the ice princess,She never really died only her body, Though forever the prince of warmth and the princess of ice be together in love in secret… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I apologize for not being on in a while i went to a convention and i've been busy with other stuff in rl. Hopefully i should be on more often. to keep this alive here are my thoughts as of an hour ago My Heart unfoldsMy Mind unravelsMy Stomach tightensMy Mouth stuttersMy Mind yells in excitement and sorrowI wish She were hereI wish I were thereI wish We were nearVoices' date='Voices!!They keep coming these Voices!!Its Not right they sayYou can Not love herYou a ChristianShe a PaganIt will Only lead to more SinBut I want to Hold herI want to Care for herI want to Make her HappyBut What The Hell Can I Do!![/quote']Go to her because love beats the living crap outta religion any day!Ever notice' date=' the day when everything is right. Everything goes right? You feel happy all day, everything passes in the right direction. Passing everything as if it was a green light. Feels simple. Feels like you've felt it before.[/quote']I always notice those days. They are the most enjoyable of all days and in so many ways.“Frozen Dream”Ice sickles alumant in the moonlight' date='Snow falls gently in the dead of night,The ice princess setting in her tower,Writing down the poetry of her life as the devilish king draws near,The penglum rises slowly as she is placed under it,The time of her death silences every person in the court yard,Forever shall the king be regretted and hate for his chose,The paper back in the princess’ room blows out the open window,Away threw the frozen hills to the warm summer lands,Past mystic forest to a summer kingdom in the room of her lover,He sets their staring at the window until he hares the paper fly under his door,He looks over his shoulder all of the icy blue paper takes form of the ice princess,She never really died only her body, Though forever the prince of warmth and the princess of ice be together in love in secret…[/quote'] So sad yet, so utterly revealing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 sad hmm....thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 A Word is as powerfull as all the guns in the world,A word strikes the soul, no flesh can stop it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 BurnDieI want you all to perishLet me ring that damned neckLet me stab you through the chestLet me crush your ribsJust funking dieGo stab your heart with a metal pipeGo walk yourself into moving trafficGo choke your neck with silver wireJust funking Die!! Life...lifeSomething served on a cold dirty platterRotting the body day by dayDecaying the bones which grow every minuteLife....lifeSomething given to you by the Holy GodAnd no matter what we do we dirty itBut is always being washed away bit by bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 .:Forever In a Dream:.-Nightmare-(Pt.3) Shattered GlassBroken BonesBloody SkullsOnce a beautiful placeNow taken over by war of manGun ShotsBurning BuildingsTerrifying CriesOnce a peaceful homeNow over run by destructionYou wear a uniform Which side are you on?Good?Evil?Or maybe Good or GoodOr just both EvilYou don't pick up your weaponBut you run into the middle of war Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 .:Forever In a Dream:.-Nightmare-(Pt.3) Shattered GlassBroken BonesBloody SkullsOnce a beautiful placeNow taken over by war of manGun ShotsBurning BuildingsTerrifying CriesOnce a peaceful homeNow over run by destructionYou wear a uniform Which side are you on?Good?Evil?Or maybe Good or GoodOr just both EvilYou don't pick up your weaponBut you run into the middle of war weird but Gratifying. I would totally be goodevil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 BurnDieI want you all to perishLet me ring that damned neckLet me stab you through the chestLet me crush your ribsJust f***ing dieGo stab your heart with a metal pipeGo walk yourself into moving trafficGo choke your neck with silver wireJust f***ing Die!! Life...lifeSomething served on a cold dirty platterRotting the body day by dayDecaying the bones which grow every minuteLife....lifeSomething given to you by the Holy GodAnd no matter what we do we dirty itBut is always being washed away bit by bit 1st Poem: Whoa... that's quite.... dour. 0_o 2nd Poem: I like this one. And, sadly, true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 sorry didn't know what mood I was in at the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 BurnDieI want you all to perishLet me ring that damned neckLet me stab you through the chestLet me crush your ribsJust f***ing dieGo stab your heart with a metal pipeGo walk yourself into moving trafficGo choke your neck with silver wireJust f***ing Die!! Life...lifeSomething served on a cold dirty platterRotting the body day by dayDecaying the bones which grow every minuteLife....lifeSomething given to you by the Holy GodAnd no matter what we do we dirty itBut is always being washed away bit by bit 1st Poem: Whoa... that's quite.... dour. 0_o 2nd Poem: I like this one. And' date=' sadly, true.[/quote'] I second his reply. I really can't think of anything different. I'm currently in the works of something so I'll put that up when I finish it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I really need to write a poem today. I'll try to do it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 lately i've been writing alot of poems so i though i'd post them here to see what you all think so here they are....3 more will be added here maybe tommrow or today....[spoiler=“Morning Sun”]In the morning sun, I catch a gimps of sun light,All the dreams fade away into tomorrow,I lay in bed waiting for the sun to worm my face,As the first rays of light hit the earth I awaken from the nightmares from the void… ok please teel me if this one's ok because i think i should just deleat it.... [spoiler=the call]“The Call” Someone if they can here me please help me,I need someone to get me out of the depths of the darkness,In the hallways of middle school I set here in a class room alone,While everyone else talks with their friends I’m here with out you,Panicking writhen my heart it flows threw,Where are you I scream, I here no answer the other students louden their voices,I scream one more time for your name, Still no answer I sink my head in disappointment,As I sink down into my chair I lower my head slowly,Until the bell finally rings I get to see our smiling face,Though only for a split second,My pinking heart stops until the next class starts… [spoiler=my heart beat]“My Heart Beat”As once again I’m pulled closer to you,My heart beats faster and faster,As your long arms wrap tightly around me,My arms wrap around you to,Please tell me…can you feel my heart beat agenst yours,As someone else enters the room, you quickly back away from me again, We both gaze into each others eyes knowing I must leave,You bring me back to my home sad and quite,Durning the night as I gaze up at the harvest moon in the dead of night only to here the cars going by, As I’m writing this poem for you I stop to wonder,Can you still feel my heart beat agenst yours? [spoiler= “Secretes of High School”]This is my last year here as a 8th grader,The deep dark secretes that I here,I’m for sure to fail, I use to think that high school was soupose to be fun,Now that the 8th grade teachers explain it to me I fear in terror,Right know I wish to never have been born,Or to just drop dead so I don’t have to live in fear anymore,The deep dark secretes of high school will forever be half hidden form my eyes… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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