Alastar Rainford Posted June 15, 2009 Report Share Posted June 15, 2009 The roses of war melt away your heartIt tears you part by partFirst the emotions go astrayThen your mind fades awayYour Memory becomes a blankUntill your body is put on a stake This is very interesting. What was your inspiration for this? Listening to too much Anti-war songs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 [align=center]To fight with bloodshed,To win at any cost,The fight changes you,You are a shining light,You are the path of destruction,The destiny of the God Arms... I invite you all to join my RP...God Arms, Ruler[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 [spoiler=Soul:]The soul is like a beast, locked in a cage-A cage of flesh, bone and muscle. The soul is like a drop of water in an ocean-An ocean of bodies and machines. The soul is like a pool of scirenity in a forest of temptation-A forest of lust, greed and envy. The soul is like a beacon of light in a land of darkness-A land where war and crime are ripe. The soul is like a ray of hope in a terrible world-A terrible world filled with perils and hazards. The soul is like a gorgeous bird which would astound the world-A world that would watch the bird in aww. The soul is like a beautiful butterfly-But only when the body is nomore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 .:Haruki to the World:. Oh how you fools do not understandHow darkness looms over all this soulless Earth How it continues to destroy your soulHow it cripples all of your tender bonesHow it rots your brains to pure extinctionAnd for the fools who lost all of their ThoughtThe darkness will forever make it rotOh how this tyranny will move forwardAs this chaos slowly takes us overAll you can do now is wait fro that timeThe moment of your pure destruction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 [spoiler=“Dusk”]Death until the dusk and we’re waiting,Ruined in the rust of our craving for blood,In the graveyard of insandy,We lay in wait,For our thirst to be satisfied, We are the night,We spread out in search for food in the dead of night,The moonlight above shows throw the dark clouds, As we hunt on the land below to survive… [spoiler=“Angel of Darkness”]In the dark corners of my room I set alone in darkness,Coiled up with tear streaming down my face,My head on my knees,Remembering what the world was done to me,With out the angel of chaos I fall apart,Separated by fate,Of the god awful world has chosen ,I’m lost in my own pit fullness and doubt,The dark souls creep into my weakness,I’m the angel of darkness slowly dieing from loneliness,The other is the angel of chaos the only one that can save me from myself… [spoiler=us]“Us”We…we are the writers and the dreamers that still have the strength to imagine.We are the believers that bring magic to this empty world,We are the to hidden writers for the ftcher of lituther We are the two of the greatest friends and will always remain as one… [spoiler=Who am i?]“Who am I”Who am I' date='Am I souse to be evil,Am I souse good,Am I the protector or the protected,Am I leader or the follower, Am I a writer or out of my mind, Do I have a peropes,Should I be how I am,Am I loyal,Am I a waist of life that was messed up,Should I be dead, Should I be in love,These are the hardest questions in life,I know even know I can even answer half of them,I guess I don’t know who I am or who I’m suppose to be anymore… [/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted June 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 [spoiler=“Dusk”]Death until the dusk and we’re waiting' date='Ruined in the rust of our craving for blood,In the graveyard of insandy,We lay in wait,For our thirst to be satisfied, We are the night,We spread out in search for food in the dead of night,The moonlight above shows throw the dark clouds, As we hunt on the land below to survive… [spoiler=“Angel of Darkness”']In the dark corners of my room I set alone in darkness,Coiled up with tear streaming down my face,My head on my knees,Remembering what the world was done to me,With out the angel of chaos I fall apart,Separated by fate,Of the god awful world has chosen ,I’m lost in my own pit fullness and doubt,The dark souls creep into my weakness,I’m the angel of darkness slowly dieing from loneliness,The other is the angel of chaos the only one that can save me from myself… [spoiler=us]“Us”We…we are the writers and the dreamers that still have the strength to imagine.We are the believers that bring magic to this empty world,We are the to hidden writers for the ftcher of lituther We are the two of the greatest friends and will always remain as one… [spoiler=Who am i?]“Who am I”Who am I' date='Am I souse to be evil,Am I souse good,Am I the protector or the protected,Am I leader or the follower, Am I a writer or out of my mind, Do I have a peropes,Should I be how I am,Am I loyal,Am I a waist of life that was messed up,Should I be dead, Should I be in love,These are the hardest questions in life,I know even know I can even answer half of them,I guess I don’t know who I am or who I’m suppose to be anymore… [/quote']All of them are excellent and I hope to read more of them. In the first one, third line, I believe you meant Insanity. It's still good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 yeah i did mean that still tying to perfect my spelling and i'm glade you like them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 [align=center]Undulating HordesWaiting For Their Next Live MealHunger Is For Flesh[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 So what are everyone's top three favorite Poems? Mine are:1. Jabberwocky - Lewis Carrol2. The Raven - Edgar Allan Poe3. Annabel Lee - Edgar Allan Poe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Where the sidewalk ends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Raven...can't think of anything else /.\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 [align=center]I know you have problems. I know you do.But if you dont keep laughing,You'll never get through.But from what i've seen,It can never be true.And judging by who you are,You'll blow right through.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emonessex Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 1. There Is No Frigate Like a Book2. Success Is Counted Sweetest3. If I Can Stop One Heart From BreakingAll by Emily Dickinson. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Raven...can't think of anything else /.\ diddo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 [align=center]I know you have problems. I know you do.But if you dont keep laughing' date='You'll never get through.But from what i've seen,It can never be true.And judging by who you are,You'll blow right through.[/align']Nice one sid!1. There Is No Frigate Like a Book2. Success Is Counted Sweetest3. If I Can Stop One Heart From BreakingAll by Emily Dickinson.I'll have to read those when i get back. P.S. I'm testing for the next rank tonight wish me luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Muay thai? Whas dat? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Muay thai? Whas dat? A martial art. Good luck Duckmasta :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Muay thai? Whas dat? A martial art. Good luck Duckmasta :3 Thanks I just got back and I'm glad to say that I passed. I'm now going to phase 2 of the curriculum. On the same note, Mr.Tray, The founder of the school, said that I was the embodiment of consistency, because I have been going an average of twice a week for 9 months and have lost 42 lbs. Which, to me, is a great honor coming from him. If you want to check it out they have online classes. here's the website http://www.tridentacademy.org/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 we'll here's more..of my sort of dark poems.....[spoiler=Escape from Death]Fire burning everywhere,The devil's laugh bounding in my head,My parents dead,I'm the only one left of my village,Dead bodies crowed the streets and alleys, None of my prayers answered, The satan stands in front of me with a bloody long sword,Fear bounding in my heart every second faster and faster,He readys his sword to swing at me,Before it's able to hit me, An angel comes from the havens to rescue me from this death,Inside the angel takes the hit,She yells to me run to a shelter,And that's how I'm alive up to this day... [spoiler=I am]I am the day dreamer and a writer,I am the darkness everywhere around you,I am that person over their in the corner looking for a purpose in this life, I am maybe the kindest or the meanest person you'll ever met depending how you treat me,I am that black father falling from the sky,But gets picked up by the breezy wind, I am a free spirit following my dreams,Just because i'm morbid or gothic that doesn't mean you can juge me,I don't give a fu** this is who I am... and just a quck question bast on my potry what type of witter am i? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Dulce et Decorum esIs my favourite, lest we forget the past, to repeat it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Look at what i've done.Eradication has just begun. As we sit,staring at the sky,I laugh loudly,and you cry. Now,I'll sit and wonder,About the many reasons,I still wander. Because all I have left,My mind,At the world's feet,And my heart. Can you hear it beat? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 [align=center]Freestylin' - I'm on a Boat Look at me.I'm on a boat.I'm glad to seeThat it can float.I hope you knowThe water's fine.It's wet, so?Just take a sip of wine. :P Idk[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 That was PWN. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 [align=center]Freestylin' - I'm on a Boat Look at me.I'm on a boat.I'm glad to seeThat it can float.I hope you knowThe water's fine.It's wet' date=' so?Just take a sip of wine. :P Idk[/align']I don't drink wine, only Santana Champagne because, it's sooooo crisp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Nothing on mine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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