Haseo Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Can i join! I have written some poems. I have posted my latest one in the General section. Here is a link: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-122765-post-2243062.html#pid2243062 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Can i join! I have written some poems. I have posted my latest one in the General section. Here is a link: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-122765-post-2243062.html#pid2243062 You are more than welcome to join! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Interesting poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Thanx for accepting me and glad you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 i like it to very inspirational... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emonessex Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 That's really beautiful, much better than anything I could do. (Also much longer)I particularly like these lines:'Each person is a storyA story that has many conflicts, friendships, deathsA story that cannot be replayedA one of a kind'That reminds me of a scene from the film Australia, in which Hugh Jackman's character, the drover, is explaining to Nicole Kidman's character, Lady Sarah Ashley, all a person really owns is his life, or story, and that he was trying to make it a good one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Converstation. Feel the breeze in the air. While you talk like shakespear, And say "he seems so fair"."Where?!" Your friend clair shares. "Uh.. on the street". There goes clair.You walk uptight and dont stand upright. You trip and fall down while feeling the sunlight. Fight your fright."Hi, my names mike" He writes."What? You cant talk?" "They said which would i rather have: Talk or walk?""I choose walk" "They said they made a mistake, and now i cant talk and walk. I have help to make me rawk."FACK. (Posted a friend of mine's poem. Kinda little tiny bit funnah.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 [align=center]Well here are two new pomes.... not that anyone eill commite on them but what ev.[spoiler=my filed of roses]“My filed of Roses”In my room at night,I lay in bed asleep,For of corse I dream but this time it’s not about nightmares or my guardian angel,This time I’m laying in a filed of black and purple roses, With miles and miles of hills covered in roses,Sparkling purple clouds floating above in the sky,The shining sun has gone down to dusk, I lay my head on the soft silky flowers, A gust of wind picks up some of the fallen padiles fly into the sky,I watch them glid throw the air and fall to land once again,The only thing that would make this dream ever better would be my guardian angel,No I’m just joking right know I’m happy in my filed of roses and clouds of laubby… [spoiler=me]“Me”When you looked me in the eyes 5 years ago what did you see,Did you see a scared little girl,When you look me in the eyes know…that were both in 8th grade what do you see,Do you still see that scared little girl,The very same one that wad nectided by her only true friends,But you were forced to by out stupid leader if you wish to say, After a week of seeing me suffer from the long school days without speaking a word to anyone,You finally had it with the leader you came over to me I remember…and you comforted me with your kind words of wisdom, You let me know that we would continue to be friends for a life time,Even if the leader moved away we would be better off,Know we still continue to be the best of friends,We are the diffusion of friends until the ends of time… [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 [align=center]Soul II My heart beating,My mind racing,My soul flying,The beauty present,The destruction a scar,The death numerous,The fights wrathfull,Death summoned,Horse ready,Must we annoint him and let him ride,Or will the shining soul,Fly across the world,Peace reighning,Let it be,Or,Be it let... Can i join please...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 wow. That was a very nice poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emonessex Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 [align=center]Well here are two new pomes.... not that anyone eill commite on them but what ev.[spoiler=my filed of roses]“My filed of Roses”In my room at night' date='I lay in bed asleep,For of corse I dream but this time it’s not about nightmares or my guardian angel,This time I’m laying in a filed of black and purple roses, With miles and miles of hills covered in roses,Sparkling purple clouds floating above in the sky,The shining sun has gone down to dusk, I lay my head on the soft silky flowers, A gust of wind picks up some of the fallen padiles fly into the sky,I watch them glid throw the air and fall to land once again,The only thing that would make this dream ever better would be my guardian angel,No I’m just joking right know I’m happy in my filed of roses and clouds of laubby… [spoiler=me']“Me”When you looked me in the eyes 5 years ago what did you see,Did you see a scared little girl,When you look me in the eyes know…that were both in 8th grade what do you see,Do you still see that scared little girl,The very same one that wad nectided by her only true friends,But you were forced to by out stupid leader if you wish to say, After a week of seeing me suffer from the long school days without speaking a word to anyone,You finally had it with the leader you came over to me I remember…and you comforted me with your kind words of wisdom, You let me know that we would continue to be friends for a life time,Even if the leader moved away we would be better off,Know we still continue to be the best of friends,We are the diffusion of friends until the ends of time… [/align] I really like both of these, especially the first one. Really superb job there. [align=center]Soul II My heart beating' date='My mind racing,My soul flying,The beauty present,The destruction a scar,The death numerous,The fights wrathfull,Death summoned,Horse ready,Must we annoint him and let him ride,Or will the shining soul,Fly across the world,Peace reighning,Let it be,Or,Be it let... Can i join please...[/align'] This is an interesting poem here. I've noticed that I'm the only one here who is constrained by form, so I applaud everyone here, you are all making really beautiful poems. I wish I had ten percent of the skill I've been seeing here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 thanks for the commite, if i just knew how to spell maybe then you guys could under stand the crap i'm writing half the time... oh well..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 I dont give a damn a bout spelling. Your pomes r teh stoffs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 thanks... i'm glad you like meh pomes ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted May 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 [align=center]Well here are two new pomes.... not that anyone eill commite on them but what ev.[spoiler=my filed of roses]“My filed of Roses”In my room at night' date='I lay in bed asleep,For of corse I dream but this time it’s not about nightmares or my guardian angel,This time I’m laying in a filed of black and purple roses, With miles and miles of hills covered in roses,Sparkling purple clouds floating above in the sky,The shining sun has gone down to dusk, I lay my head on the soft silky flowers, A gust of wind picks up some of the fallen padiles fly into the sky,I watch them glid throw the air and fall to land once again,The only thing that would make this dream ever better would be my guardian angel,No I’m just joking right know I’m happy in my filed of roses and clouds of laubby… [spoiler=me']“Me”When you looked me in the eyes 5 years ago what did you see,Did you see a scared little girl,When you look me in the eyes know…that were both in 8th grade what do you see,Do you still see that scared little girl,The very same one that wad nectided by her only true friends,But you were forced to by out stupid leader if you wish to say, After a week of seeing me suffer from the long school days without speaking a word to anyone,You finally had it with the leader you came over to me I remember…and you comforted me with your kind words of wisdom, You let me know that we would continue to be friends for a life time,Even if the leader moved away we would be better off,Know we still continue to be the best of friends,We are the diffusion of friends until the ends of time… [/align] I really liked the poems and despite the spelling mistakes, I could understand them quite well.[align=center]Soul II My heart beating' date='My mind racing,My soul flying,The beauty present,The destruction a scar,The death numerous,The fights wrathfull,Death summoned,Horse ready,Must we annoint him and let him ride,Or will the shining soul,Fly across the world,Peace reighning,Let it be,Or,Be it let... Can i join please...[/align']You are more than welcome to join and I enjoyed your poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 [align=center]Cries of angerTears of desperation,Will you be my salvation, My heart is burning,My mind is yearning,My soul is fleeting,Save me please, Time is wasting, The fire in my eyes,Is it all a lie,Why do I scream,Nobody hears me,[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 hm i quit like this poem it's very intriguing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 It is actually the begging of a song i am writing, but i wanted to see if it worked as a poem... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 sorry i havn't posted a poem yet, it's just that i don't have any inspiration now :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 It is actually the begging of a song i am writing' date=' but i wanted to see if it worked as a poem...[/quote']hm well it worked at a poem =) heh heh edit: i'm not really sure about this one despite my other poems...... [spoiler=What's left]What’s Left” What’s left when everything is destroyed,What’s left when all of your dreams have been broken,What’s left if you have had it with your life and your ready to end your life,What’s left when you suffer from loneliness that even your best friend fill, I’ll tell you…nothing,But endless pain and anginey,I’ll tell you it’s no fun to be in this state, When everything you chariest is gone,Their nothing left but…death… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emonessex Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 edit: i'm not really sure about this one despite my other poems...... [spoiler=What's left]What’s Left” What’s left when everything is destroyed' date='What’s left when all of your dreams have been broken,What’s left if you have had it with your life and your ready to end your life,What’s left when you suffer from loneliness that even your best friend fill, I’ll tell you…nothing,But endless pain and anginey,I’ll tell you it’s no fun to be in this state, When everything you chariest is gone,Their nothing left but…death… [/quote'] I really like this. One of the best I've seen on here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 hm thank you ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 I havent posted one in a while... Havent got any inspiration... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cacnea Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 Hmm, most of the poems on here a quite macabre...Well when i finally get my poem "Soul" back (i cant remember to poem of the top of my head) I'll post it, when i wrote it my teachers said they wouldn't believe i had wrote it if i hadn't wrote it there in front of them (which i did) that was when i was 12... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 [spoiler=What if i said][align=center]What if I said I loved you.What would you do? What if i said you were part of me.What would your expression be? What if I said I was there for you to cry on.What would you then think of me in the long run? What if I said that I'll always be there.What would you then think why frisking your hair? Why do I love him,Why do I hug him,Why does he love me?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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