The New Poets Laureate

[Toxic-skull]

hmm... i soupose i could writ about my past.... ok before the end of the day i'll post what i've written thanks u guys

[Duckmasta2020]

personally i right what ever comes to mind or what inspires me. In fact i actually do a lot of my better writing after training sessions. Physical exercise helps give the mind a boost.

[Sid.]

Cold doors and Chinese floors

Craze brothers in to wars

Who wave hammers like thor

Mothers who make do with chores

So beautiful yet so poor

Such, is the buyer from a store

Such, is why we want more.

 

not very good, i know.

Also, i propose we have a contest.

[Duckmasta2020]

Cold doors and Chinese floors

Craze brothers in to wars

Who wave hammers like thor

Mothers who make do with chores

So beautiful yet so poor

Such' date=' is the buyer from a store

Such, is why we want more.

 

not very good, i know.

Also, i propose we have a contest.

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it's decent but there are a few errors. I'm currently working on it and I'll get back to you toommorow on that.

[Sid.]

Awesome, i wanna get this club more active.

[Duckmasta2020]

Awesome' date=' i wanna get this club more active.

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same here i've just been so busy,l i've gotten maybe 6 hours of sleep in the past 4 days.

[Sid.]

What?! DAMN! SLEEP BRO!

[emonessex]

Any room for a writer of bad poems? Here's an example of my atrocity:

[spoiler=Addiction]Like unto air are you, my friend

Without you I am nothing

If you were to leave, I would meet my end

With you I feel like flying

You are like to a drug that I always need

Stronger than snow, are you my friend

Harder to quit than grass or speed

Far easier, to you, do I surrend

If you are the rain, then I am a flower

Dependent upon your sweet touch

When I feel forgotten, you have the power

To heal my soul and heart so much

When I am around you, I feel so high

In your absence, time passes slowly by

 

[Sid.]

Actually it was fantastic. But some of the people here may disagree. I would say your awesome.

[Duckmasta2020]

Any room for a writer of bad poems? Here's an example of my atrocity:

[spoiler=Addiction]Like unto air are you' date=' my friend

Without you I am nothing

If you were to leave, I would meet my end

With you I feel like flying

You are like to a drug that I always need

Stronger than snow, are you my friend

Harder to quit than grass or speed

Far easier, to you, do I surrend

If you are the rain, then I am a flower

Dependent upon your sweet touch

When I feel forgotten, you have the power

To heal my soul and heart so much

When I am around you, I feel so high

In your absence, time passes slowly by

 

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Do or do not, There is no try! *smacks you with cane* your more than welcome to join.

[emonessex]

Oi, what's with the cane? Initiation ritual or something?

[spoiler=Ivy]Her eyes are like green fire

Where she walks, so follows desire

Her hair is red-golden like the last light of day

In her path lies despair and dismay

And those who seek her never tire

 

Anyone here write novels/short stories?

[Duckmasta2020]

Oi' date=' what's with the cane? Initiation ritual or something?

[spoiler=Ivy']Her eyes are like green fire

Where she walks, so follows desire

Her hair is red-golden like the last light of day

In her path lies despair and dismay

And those who seek her never tire

 

Anyone here write novels/short stories?

 

lol. No it was a Yoda tribute and I should have put gimmer stick.

nice poem by the way. And no I have no talent in writing long stories.

[Jericho]

I was not at school for the last few days. I get back and go to english, I have to write a Haiku. Due like next tuesday, I do it then and there.

 

I fell in love with

Her magnamity. I was

shunned. I write of death.

 

I also wrote a concrete poem (poem in the shape of something). It's too long to remember, so I'll post it as soon as I get it back from the teach.

[Duckmasta2020]

I was not at school for the last few days. I get back and go to english' date=' I have to write a Haiku. Due like next tuesday, I do it then and there.

 

I fell in love with

Her magnamity. I was

shunned. I write of death.

 

I also wrote a concrete poem (poem in the shape of something). It's too long to remember, so I'll post it as soon as I get it back from the teach.

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cool I'd certainly like to see that. I once wrote one in the shape of the sobe lizard but I forgot where i placed it.....-_-'

[Toxic-skull]

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Oi' date=' what's with the cane? Initiation ritual or something?

[spoiler=Ivy']Her eyes are like green fire

Where she walks, so follows desire

Her hair is red-golden like the last light of day

In her path lies despair and dismay

And those who seek her never tire

 

Anyone here write novels/short stories?

i'm writting a novel! why though?, also i finally have written some poems and all in the same day....

 

[spoiler=pree school]

“Pree School”

Isn’t pree school suppose to be a fun time,

Ha! Yeah right pree school sucked,

When you’re the last one to get stuff gotten teased or had no friends,

That’s how I was treated up to 4th grade,

But I have moved on from school to school,

I’m know in 5th grade already made a new friend,

Know fueatcher time my friend that I was talking about was a boy and were going out know,

The frightening memories of pree school fade away slowly though sadly I will always remember my last year at my old school,

 

I was ran out of their by a 6th grader… his name was miles,

I believed in everything people told me at that time so… he said he was possed by a ghost,

He cold hearted guy chased me around until I head in the girls bathroom for the rest of the school year,

That’s I think a really sad had to go but I’m better off in my new life,

I finally have friends that accapt me for how I am and I hope I never see my haunting years ever again…

 

 

yes i know i have spellet almost every thing wrong so i won't be suprised when people say i suck at spelling and yes that's really waht happened to me:cry:

 

[spoiler=the realm of nightmare remake from old crappy one]

The Realm of Nightmare

In the darkness where the light doesn’t shine,

In the shadows you’ll find me setting on the cold unforgiving black floor alone,

In the deepest part of the void you’ll find my sole as black as midnight,

In the deeps of nightmare you’ll see that I love it here this is my home

In the realm of nightmare is where I have always been….

 

 

[spoiler=The Dark Life]

"The Dark Life"

Past the world of nightmare,

Past the fiery pits of he**,

Lies the deepest darkest place in the world it's called the void,

Only I dawl here for this is my new home,

Silent calm no talkative or screaming people to annoy me,

Past the floating flames and the mysticers mist,

 

Under the under growth in the graveyard,

I lay here in the void waiting...of something to happen,

I’ve been here for awhile waiting either for my dark sole to wither away into nothingness,

Or for my old life of joy to fade away with the rest of my memories...

 

 

[spoiler=Midnight the Nightmaren]

"Midnight the Nightmaren"

Throw the sorwling black clouds of the abis,

In the tranches od screaming nightmarens,

Lies a new bigging of the dark ages,

And the leader is...me my name is Midnight i'm the genral of all darkness,

In the city streets where humans dwail i lay in wait in the shadows in a alys,

Waiting for another helpless victim,

 

I sujust you wach your back if i catch you...yu'll be turned in to a nightmaren just like me,

When i was first caught by another i was striped of all laughter and joy,

It's just a useless stuped jester that the humans do for anacuse to make a weard face,

So look out humans beacuse Midnight lies in wait for you...

 

 

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[emonessex]

i'm writting a novel! why though?' date=' also i finally have written some poems and all in the same day....

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Hmm well just curious to see what other arts everyone is in to. I've done a few shorts before and I have plans for a novel at some point.

I wrote this just now. Stuff has got me down.

[spoiler=Failure]Trust me, I have failed

At the eternal game

That we mortals call Life

The mountains that I could not have scaled

Add to my burden of shame

All I know are failure and strife

 

[Jericho]

I was not at school for the last few days. I get back and go to english' date=' I have to write a Haiku. Due like next tuesday, I do it then and there.

 

I fell in love with

Her magnamity. I was

shunned. I write of death.

 

I also wrote a concrete poem (poem in the shape of something). It's too long to remember, so I'll post it as soon as I get it back from the teach.

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Near the bottom of last page. Don't want it to be missed.

[Toxic-skull]

i'm writting a novel! why though?' date=' also i finally have written some poems and all in the same day....

[/quote']

 

Hmm well just curious to see what other arts everyone is in to. I've done a few shorts before and I have plans for a novel at some point.

I wrote this just now. Stuff has got me down.

[spoiler=Failure]Trust me, I have failed

At the eternal game

That we mortals call Life

The mountains that I could not have scaled

Add to my burden of shame

All I know are failure and strife

 

ok poem pritty good know the novil so... are you starting one or.... what?

[Star Child]

I was looking everywhere for this. I'm back in this club!

[Toxic-skull]

[spoiler=pree school]

“Pree School”

Isn’t pree school suppose to be a fun time,

Ha! Yeah right pree school sucked,

When you’re the last one to get stuff gotten teased or had no friends,

That’s how I was treated up to 4th grade,

But I have moved on from school to school,

I’m know in 5th grade already made a new friend,

Know fueatcher time my friend that I was talking about was a boy and were going out know,

The frightening memories of pree school fade away slowly though sadly I will always remember my last year at my old school,

 

I was ran out of their by a 6th grader… his name was miles,

I believed in everything people told me at that time so… he said he was possed by a ghost,

He cold hearted guy chased me around until I head in the girls bathroom for the rest of the school year,

That’s I think a really sad had to go but I’m better off in my new life,

I finally have friends that accapt me for how I am and I hope I never see my haunting years ever again…

 

 

yes i know i have spellet almost every thing wrong so i won't be suprised when people say i suck at spelling and yes that's really waht happened to me:cry:

 

[spoiler=the realm of nightmare remake from old crappy one]

The Realm of Nightmare

In the darkness where the light doesn’t shine,

In the shadows you’ll find me setting on the cold unforgiving black floor alone,

In the deepest part of the void you’ll find my sole as black as midnight,

In the deeps of nightmare you’ll see that I love it here this is my home

In the realm of nightmare is where I have always been….

 

 

[spoiler=The Dark Life]

"The Dark Life"

Past the world of nightmare,

Past the fiery pits of he**,

Lies the deepest darkest place in the world it's called the void,

Only I dawl here for this is my new home,

Silent calm no talkative or screaming people to annoy me,

Past the floating flames and the mysticers mist,

 

Under the under growth in the graveyard,

I lay here in the void waiting...of something to happen,

I’ve been here for awhile waiting either for my dark sole to wither away into nothingness,

Or for my old life of joy to fade away with the rest of my memories...

 

 

[spoiler=Midnight the Nightmaren]

"Midnight the Nightmaren"

Throw the sorwling black clouds of the abis,

In the tranches od screaming nightmarens,

Lies a new bigging of the dark ages,

And the leader is...me my name is Midnight i'm the genral of all darkness,

In the city streets where humans dwail i lay in wait in the shadows in a alys,

Waiting for another helpless victim,

 

I sujust you wach your back if i catch you...yu'll be turned in to a nightmaren just like me,

When i was first caught by another i was striped of all laughter and joy,

It's just a useless stuped jester that the humans do for anacuse to make a weard face,

So look out humans beacuse Midnight lies in wait for you...

 

 

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[emonessex]

ok poem pritty good know the novil so... are you starting one or.... what?

 

I haven't actually started but I have some ideas written down..

 

This is for Shinku from Rozen Maiden' date=' which everyone should watch!

[spoiler=Ode to Shinku']You are cold

As the mistress of the night

Somehow bold

You insist you're always right

 

Never satisfied with Jun's service

You always ask more from him

Shinku

 

But 'neath your icy exterior

You appreciate and love him

Shinku

 

[Jericho]

He's the concrete poem I said I was gonna post. Just to recap, concrete poem --> poem in the shape of the subject. Mine was in the shape of a broken heart.

 

[spoiler=The Broken Heart]

How I dearly wish for love.

Alas, it remains unfound.

The poison feeding on my soul.

To stay alive my heart must be bound.

 

How I dearly wish for love.

The life of a hermit is depressing

How I beg for a companion.

One to love and hold at night, and lie, gently caressing.

 

But alas again! Alas I say.

Love is not for me.

Self contained, a simple life.

Destined to be lonely.

 

 

[Sid.]

Midnight: Your poems were great. I enjoyed reading them.

 

Emonessex: You had a very interesting poem("Failure"). I enjoyed that one.

 

Jericho: The one on the last page was brilliant, yet different. I never really liked the haiku, but it was great. The concrete one, i didnt quite get the ending.

[Duckmasta2020]

Midnight: Your poems were great. I enjoyed reading them.

 

Emonessex: You had a very interesting poem("Failure"). I enjoyed that one.

 

Jericho: The one on the last page was brilliant' date=' yet different. I never really liked the haiku, but it was great. The concrete one, i didnt quite get the ending.

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I apologize for not being on lately things have been a bit hectic at work this past week and I've had other important duties to attend to. but I second the above response.

[Toxic-skull]

Midnight: Your poems were great. I enjoyed reading them.

 

Emonessex: You had a very interesting poem("Failure"). I enjoyed that one.

 

Jericho: The one on the last page was brilliant' date=' yet different. I never really liked the haiku, but it was great. The concrete one, i didnt quite get the ending.

[/quote'] hm hm thanks i'm glad you like them ^_^ and think you for someone finally saying something about them.