The New Poets Laureate

[Duckmasta2020]

[align=center]Welcome to The New Poets Laureate! All former members are welcome.

 

First and foremost, I would just like to say that our former leader Raelen (whom we will miss very much) placed upon me the great duty of recreating this wonderful club. I intend to turn this club into one of the best out there! Without further ado, the rules[/align]

[align=center][spoiler=Club Rules] 1.follow all YCmaker rules

2. No spamming

3. No Flaming, meaning constructive criticism only.

4. Please be aware that swearing or otherwise offensive remarks are not tolerated.

5. Any complaints are to be sent to me via PM.

7a. Please note you must stay active in this club. this does not mean you have to post everyday but do not go a week without posting even a hello otherwise you will be removed.

7b. Please note the effects of 7a are not applicable if you have informed me of temporary leave of absence.

6.Please enjoy your stay at our wonderful club.

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[align=center]Joining is simple, just post that you would like to join and your in.

[spoiler=Members]1.Sid.

2. .:Haruki Adachi:.

3.~~HUNTER STEEL~~

4.Midnightwolf16

5. The omega

6. Avanz

7.Jericho

8.Emonessex

9.anime-manga lover

10.Haseo

11.Cacnea

12. Luxord

13. Supreme Gamesmaster

14. Max C.

15. Raelon

16.

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18.

19.

20.

 

That is all and I look forward to seeing all the wonderful poetry YCM members can create. We also welcome any discussions on any poem or type of poetry.[/align]

[Alastar Rainford]

After long wait i am back

to rejoin

[Duckmasta2020]

welcome back

[Sid.]

Alright, im back...

You may wanna PM most of the other members too ya know.

[Jace Beleren]

i'd like to rejoin here once again

[Duckmasta2020]

Alright' date=' im back...

You may wanna PM most of the other members too ya know.

[/quote']

 

I'm working on it i've been a bit busy between work and training this week.

[Toxic-skull]

i'll rejoin to

[Sid.]

Alright' date=' im back...

You may wanna PM most of the other members too ya know.

[/quote']

 

I'm working on it i've been a bit busy between work and training this week.

 

Thats alright.

 

[spoiler=Open your eyes]

Open your eyes, embrace the sunlight.

Crush your dreams, cause the night.

Crave an adventure, take a hike.

Find a oreo, eat a Klondike.

Want a love, dream of fights.

Feel the wind, fly a kite.

Hate something, walk uptight.

Open your eyes and love your life.

 

 

[Silent Omega]

I would like to Re-join.

[Duckmasta2020]

Alright' date=' im back...

You may wanna PM most of the other members too ya know.

[/quote']

 

I'm working on it i've been a bit busy between work and training this week.

 

Thats alright.

 

[spoiler=Open your eyes]

Open your eyes, embrace the sunlight.

Crush your dreams, cause the night.

Crave an adventure, take a hike.

Find a oreo, eat a Klondike.

Want a love, dream of fights.

Feel the wind, fly a kite.

Hate something, walk uptight.

Open your eyes and love your life.

 

 

 

I liked it though line 4 seemed a little out of place there and I couldn't really see how it led to the ending. Though it did remind me of the movie Yes Man.

[Sid.]

Line 4 kinda was stupid, but whatever.

 

People with closed eyes = Dont live life well and arent able to change

" " open eyes = Live life to the fullest and are willing to adapt wherever.

[Sid.]

[spoiler=Into the Streets]

As we move through the night,

Lamps and lights lit a battle,

Animal run and closely they approached,

Quietly peering through their eyes,

They stood looking.

We continued our journey,

Tapping our feet through the rock,

Blades constantly brushing our bare feet,

Dew silently tapping our legs,

We opened our hands,

And we clapped.

We clapped, onwards on the street.

 

 

 

^Experiment.

[Careless Whisper]

This is a day of mourning.

Powerless to fight back.

Angered that I am not deserving.

Denying the fact that I will one day siese to exist.

Bargaining with all that I possess for more time and a second chance.

Only to find myself in a pit of utter dispair.

Yet it is in this dispair that I will find and legidly learn to accept that

In this world there is only one inevital truth.

That death comes to us all equally,

and it makes us equal when it comes.

 

 

 

I'm in, you know me. I am the Captain, and Avanz shall walk among the poets once more, as just a careless whisper within the winds.

[Alastar Rainford]

...Forever in a dream...

The fire sets

The water calms

The light dims

The sounds disappear

The imagination collapses

The mind enters activeness

The body dives down

The mind takes over

The body is wrapped in chains

The world full of destruction disappears

The users happiness replaces all

The Door slams shut

A new universe created

Press on your luck

[Jericho]

Rejoining.

[Duckmasta2020]

[spoiler=Into the Streets]

As we move through the night' date='

Lamps and lights lit a battle,

Animal run and closely they approached,

Quietly peering through their eyes,

They stood looking.

We continued our journey,

Tapping our feet through the rock,

Blades constantly brushing our bare feet,

Dew silently tapping our legs,

We opened our hands,

And we clapped.

We clapped, onwards on the street.

 

 

 

^Experiment.

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Could you explain to me what it's about I'm a little lost there. Other than that it's decent but i'm sure you can do better.

 

This is a day of mourning.

Powerless to fight back.

Angered that I am not deserving.

Denying the fact that I will one day siese to exist.

Bargaining with all that I possess for more time and a second chance.

Only to find myself in a pit of utter dispair.

Yet it is in this dispair that I will find and legidly learn to accept that

In this world there is only one inevital truth.

That death comes to us all equally' date='

and it makes us equal when it comes.

 

 

 

I'm in, you know me. I am the Captain, and Avanz shall walk among the poets once more, as just a careless whisper within the winds.

[/quote']

Death, though it may be inevitable,

Should not be mourned

but celebrated for it signifies new beginnings.

welcome anyways.

...Forever in a dream...

The fire sets

The water calms

The light dims

The sounds disappear

The imagination collapses

The mind enters activeness

The body dives down

The mind takes over

The body is wrapped in chains

The world full of destruction disappears

The users happiness replaces all

The Door slams shut

A new universe created

Press on your luck

I quite like this one especially because I can see it so vividly. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

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Rejoining.

 

Welcome back.

[Careless Whisper]

This is a day of mourning.

Powerless to fight back.

Angered that I am not deserving.

Denying the fact that I will one day siese to exist.

Bargaining with all that I possess for more time and a second chance.

Only to find myself in a pit of utter dispair.

Yet it is in this dispair that I will find and legidly learn to accept that

In this world there is only one inevital truth.

That death comes to us all equally' date='

and it makes us equal when it comes.

 

 

 

I'm in, you know me. I am the Captain, and Avanz shall walk among the poets once more, as just a careless whisper within the winds.

[/quote']

Death, though it may be inevitable,

Should not be mourned

but celebrated for it signifies new beginnings.

welcome anyways.

 

HAHA! Death is what you interpret to be. A gateway into a second life, or a gateway into a better life, or even a gateway into an utter abyss of dispair. All living beings have their own perspectives of what death can be. Some mourn for death while some celebrate.

[Jericho]

I wrote these two a while ago.

 

 

 

Darkness, darkness, all consuming

Darkness, darkness, in me blooming

Darkness, darkness, deep inside me

Darkness, darkness, please just hide me

 

Pain and hatred gives me this

Pain and hatred gives me bliss

Pain and hatred make me feel

Pain and hatred all too real

 

 

 

 

If I would die tonight,

That would be alright.

Nothing left to do

But watch the sunset,

And see the rising moon

 

No reason to keep going;

Just want to jump out of a Boeing

And fall down to my fate.

You can't save me,

It's already too late.

 

 

[Duckmasta2020]

bump

[Toxic-skull]

I wrote these two a while ago.

 

 

 

Darkness' date=' darkness, all consuming

Darkness, darkness, in me blooming

Darkness, darkness, deep inside me

Darkness, darkness, please just hide me

 

Pain and hatred gives me this

Pain and hatred gives me bliss

Pain and hatred make me feel

Pain and hatred all too real

 

 

 

 

If I would die tonight,

That would be alright.

Nothing left to do

But watch the sunset,

And see the rising moon

 

No reason to keep going;

Just want to jump out of a Boeing

And fall down to my fate.

You can't save me,

It's already too late.

 

 

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wow i like the 2ed one a lot a little bit discreptive wich i like and seeing the moon rise and wach the sun set added good altitud to it ^_^

[Duckmasta2020]

I wrote these two a while ago.

 

 

 

Darkness' date=' darkness, all consuming

Darkness, darkness, in me blooming

Darkness, darkness, deep inside me

Darkness, darkness, please just hide me

 

Pain and hatred gives me this

Pain and hatred gives me bliss

Pain and hatred make me feel

Pain and hatred all too real

 

 

 

 

If I would die tonight,

That would be alright.

Nothing left to do

But watch the sunset,

And see the rising moon

 

No reason to keep going;

Just want to jump out of a Boeing

And fall down to my fate.

You can't save me,

It's already too late.

 

 

[/quote']

The first one was a bit eh. The second one was well done though.

[Sid.]

I dunno, just felt like spitting something.

 

WARNING. OPENING SPOILER WILL SHOW VULGAR WORDS. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.

 

[spoiler=Title Poem]

I have no title for this adequate poem.

The title will be a poem itself.

Something that'll knock your socks off, i'll show 'em.

Describes hatred, love, betrayal, and myself.

 

 

[spoiler=The Poem.]

I've been down this road before.

I've had my head under my shoulders.

I've crossed many places, many lands.

I've helped many people, made many fans.

 

Once i helped you, i could not stand.

My knees broke, my tears crossed my eyes.

You looked into me, and now you think i'll try.

I made you who you are, and now you defy.

Disprove what i think, dont lie.

 

You betrayed me once.

 

I tried to help you, put you on the top,

Sit you right next to me....

But you, you mother funker, you just gotta stop.

You used to be my friend, my humanity...

 

But now i cant open my eyes at you.

 

You knew what i knew, we were brothers...

Instead of me now, you hug her...

And i knew you were a geek once...

A freak who was so weak he couldnt even speak.

But i taught you to be who you are.

 

You betray me once, i'll hug you twice.

Make me cry my eyes and lick some ice.

Just so i can feel cold, like you.

I used to give you advice, you fool.

 

Now you travel with her, my only love.

Now you fly around with her, my dove.

 

I'll kill you again and again, you piece of sheet.

Kick your teeth into each other like funking bricks.

She liked me, but you took her.

What did you do to deserve her?

 

I talked to her tonight,

What a delight.

She told me you were a douche,

A total bag.

She told me your kiss like

A funking hag.

 

And you think she loves you.

But i see through that show she put on for you.

The TV aint shining so bright.

So turn it off and hold your arms tight.

 

Be great now,

Hold your head high and take a bow.

For i believe you will be better, and please the crowd.

Better in bed, make her wow.

 

Love her, please her.

For it is what i would want.

 

 

 

:/

This... is just a piece of a 100 piece puzzle.

...Probably wasnt good anyways.

[Toxic-skull]

no your wrong that was a really good poem i can't even write a long one like that... + i don't have anymore ideas for any pomes that is why i haven't posted any.....

[Sid.]

Think of something that happens in everyday life. Thats what inspires me.

[Alastar Rainford]

I think thisisjust me but I right down poems of what goes through my head every now and then