a chroniche of a wild maker. its from my site but its good

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intro to Chronical of a Wild-Maker

punkinbut on Mon 27 Oct 2008 - 23:48

 

.Hey is punkinbut here is the story of my long made form. As i went on and made my forum i made i so people would like it My first member was proto. "hey , i reallu hope this forum turns out to be good as i went on i made him a mod . i made him a mid becae he was my first memver. Then of corse BEESWAX joined. "hey this is pretty deserted"beeswax said. i told him he'll he will have to reach 320 posts to be a mod. he said" thats alot of posts" i told him he can take a 40 question test. he said.. no way .. then death by 8 ball.he was here for 1 post then he left and i never came back anyway. then clandld joined all he did was post his intro and then left. Then bvbo joined. he was on the site for a long time oh and he still comes on

 

Then poptartpimp joined th e site he was the first person to get to 2 stars on this forum.He goes on when he can. then superkill254 joined. he still oes on the web site. he goes on to help people to get entertainment."i love this site " he saidcthen killer92.0 joined so that is when i added more parts to the forum.then pepkill joined. he is on every week atleat. Then frenchy joined. he is banned for spamming. then of corse kayser joined. he is really nice to people. then our newest member develdog23 joined he really has not done much becase he joined today.

 

As i contuie i loved to he on my forum and update it . One day someone asked me i nedded to update my logo . so i though about doing it so i did it. then people complaed about getting to 2 stars. so i did that . then people argued about not enough places to post. i made alot more places to post. then peeps argued about lack of members. i tryed on ycm but they said no because it was not domain. so i am asking for my birthday to get it domain. i said i couldent. i was mad about that. so that is why people volenteered to gijve money but i said no.

 

the story contiued in................................A Chronical of a Wild-Maker 2

 

your fellow ycm maker,

 

punkinbut

[Kendo Fish]

I.....don't understand this story very much at all. I THINK it's about this forum's supposed history, but...are you REALLY the creator of the site? What exactly is going on? The story doesn't really make me want to keep reading much.

 

And by the way, what's a Wild-Maker?

 

Anyways, if you work on grammar and description, maybe excitement will build, and maybe this will bne a good story. For now, keep working towards that. :D