Azwolop Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 lol im not insulting yours man! you know i think its great! but still it aint nice too sit there and say flat out too me that mine is worse than yours. that's just harsh! and then when i say mines better than yours yoo flip out :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rscrash Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Calm down people! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted December 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 LOL yeah :P Back to the thread? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axiom_Nor Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 oooh burn' date=' don't get too cocky now, i know for a fact i could make mine better than yours if i actually tried :P seeing as how i made my 2 episodes in less than a day, and it took yoo at least 2 weeks too make one episode. It's kind of an achievment that someone thinks mines better than yours :D[/quote'] -.-.... DO I NEED TO CHANGE MY SIGNATURE OR SOMETHIN?! The only fckin reason I DON'T MAKE THEM AS QUICK AS OTHERS, isbecause I am CONSTANTLY BUSY WITH OTHER THINGS! And they are all masterpieces. You've seen other fan fics where each episode is 6.5 MS Word pages long? >_> yea, I have, Duel Monsters - The Third Legacyhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=546 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Great fanfic. Just hope someone new can read mine. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Write more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 Thanks for bumping it! XD Yeah-yeah.I know.The holidays were just a huge block of work fro me, nothing less :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 yeahh well if you loved me, and you loved YCM, you'd write more ....:P blackmail! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 XD Exactly. I'm writing it already, and 2.5 of the 7 pages are done :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Sfdp. Anyways, Spoiler next episode: Some of you may know it already, but in episode 4 the secrets about the Forgotten World will be revealed. Not all, of course, but a pretty bunch of them. Also, a new semi-head character will be featured, along with another one mentioned. Also, the duel system and the first duels are already known.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Poison Posted January 15, 2008 Report Share Posted January 15, 2008 NiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiceKeep it up Oldmaster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axiom_Nor Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 Hey, oldmaster, can you make a new one already? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axiom_Nor Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 Hey, oldmaster, can you make a new one already? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 I suddently remembered I have a fan fic lying here! XD Gotta continue working on episode 4 XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 This is really good and one of the best fanfic I've ever seen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Yaay, finally updated. EDIT: Okay, max post capacity reached, lol. Posting the next episode here: Episode 4: The (Final) Countdown Memory Flashback…A table was placed in Pegasus’ dark throne room. He and Mokuba sat and chatted, separated by dozens of royal dishes all around the table… Pegasus: ...and after driving that manager completely insane, I asked him to Duel for his factory. And he dueled me. Suffice to say I won… I always win…Kaiba: Not always, Maximillion. You know that I know who defeated you earlier, and you’re not going to erase that duel out of the memory of every duelist in the world! Because that was the greatness of Yami Yugi.Pegasus (standing up and smashing on the table): SILENCE! And you know, Mokuba, what I did to you before, and if you show unloyalty, I can do it again! *shows empty Yu-Gi-Oh card* Do not mention that name again!Mokuba’s face darkened:Kaiba: That’s not how you keep me under your command, Pegasus.Pegasus (smiling): That’s right, my friend. Think of your brother, hopelessly crawling around in the Forgotten World… Betray me, and you’ll never see him again! *evil laugh*Memory Flashback Ends Mokuba awakens out his nightmare, sweating and still with that laugh echoing in his head... Kaiba: I swear I will get you back, Seto. I swear I will. It’s morning in Kaiba Corporation. All duelists are set up, and the tournament is ready to begin. Jerry and Ryan meet in the cantina. Jerry: Good morning, Ryan! You slept well? *evil grin*Ryan: Yeah I did. For God’s sake. No trumpets this time!Jerry: Unfortunately not. I feel great without it, though. All is set up, and I’m ready to Duel!Ryan: Yeah, me too. You’d expect something great from this tourney, but so far I’ve seen nothing worth of participating.Jerry: Well, you saw my Duel. The poor examiner had a Deck based on flip-effects. Suffice to say none of them struck home, as my Medusa burned straight through them each time before he had a chance of flipping it! How was your Duel?Ryan: You were lucky you didn’t see mine. You should have bored yourself to death.Jerry: What did he run then?Ryan: Something called “Elemental Heroes”. You hardly can find anything that’s worse, seriously.Jerry: Hm? How long did the Duel take?Ryan: Two turns. That’s to that traded Rainbow City. Thanks man, it’s awesome.Jerry: No thanks ^^ Anyways, when will the Tournament begin?Ryan opened his mouth, but was interrupted by some information speaker: Voice: Participants of the Great Tournament, this is Jonathan Bodare from above. Can everyone please head to the entry hall?Jerry: C’mon! They’ll announce the statistics!When the huge mass runs to the big entry hall, a huge hologram of a knock-down system is seen. Bodare: Okay folks, let me explain the rules. As you see the Tournament will be held in a kind of knock-out system, with the exception that you are allowed to lose once in the first three rounds. You can only use one Deck, the same that was checked when you entered. The top seven participants will be announced the winners. And now, look at the hologram and search your face.The bottom 128 squares lightened up, showing 128 faces – Jerry and Ryan searched for themselves. Jerry: There! We’re side by side in the middle of the system!Ryan: But side by side means that, most likely, we get to Duel each other in the very beginning!Jerry: No… that won’t happen…Bodare: Now, the computer will generate the first 64 duels!The squares emitted a yellow line, twisting into those above them. However, Ryan’s and Jerry’s lines didn’t fuse with each other, but did that with the two duelists near them instead.The friends sighed, relieved that they don’t have to duel each other that early. Bodare: I will call the names quickly. Christopher Blyde versus Bob Bottlenecker...Jerry: You know, Ryan, I just thought about that how far we actually made it in those few days with our Decks…Ryan: I know what you’re trying to say. Even after all that net-dueling and studying the rules, we still perform very well.Jerry: Should this be a gift, you think?Ryan: Dunno. Maybe it’s hereditary? After all, my grandfather is the First Game King!Jerry: Well Joeys is as well, so it is possible…Bodare: …Samwise Burnison will Duel Ryan Sinden, Jerry Oldmaster against Sir George McKelly…Ryan: We know who to Duel now! Let’s go. On the way to their chambers, Ryan stopped suddenly and touched his stone around his neck. Jerry: Hm? What happened?Ryan: … I don‘t know… I heard some strange noise… and it was almost as it came out of my crystal…Jerry: Would that be possible?Ryan: I don’t know… let’s go on.The boys went around a corner, and saw a huge muscled guy walking towards a long man with a royal white smoking and black sunglasses, which seemed to match his azure hair pretty well. Muscled Guy: You are Goldmane, aren’t you? I am supposed to Duel you today… but if you will not come…. then the Duel will be far easier. You won’t turn up, will you?Goldmane laughed. Goldmane: What did you say? You want to make me miss a Duel so you can win instantly? What a cowardly soul you are. Seeing all those muscles, I had expected something greater… Campton Butcher, wasn’t it?The big man grinded his teeth. Butcher: Also very brave of you to saying such words. I can easily crash you into the wall now, you know that?Goldmane: I don’t think that, friend. I am so rich, my lawyers will rip you and burn your house to aches just because of threatening me. ;) But you could escape this cruel fate by duelling with me now….. and the loser won’t turn up in our real Duel, right?Butcher(thinking): I guess it will be all right…Goldmane raises his golden duel disk: Goldmane: Before you being too agile to start, let’s solve it the real way! *tosses a coin*Butcher: Uuuh…… tails!Goldmane: Wrong guess. I already know it’s wrong. I love gambling so much that I can sense with an amazing precision how the coin falls. *reveals coin and grins* See?Butcher: Go on and start then….Goldmane: You guessed that right, big boy.Butcher and Goldmane: DUEL!!!Goldmane: *draws 6 cards* Interesting. I think I summon this guy, Dice Champion’s Knight in Attack Position! (Dice Champion's Knight|EARTH|Level 4|Warrior|Effect Monster|1800 ATK|100 DEF| When this monster attacks or is attacked, roll a six-sided die. If the result is 1 or 2, the attack stops immediately. If the result is 3 or 4, your opponent may not activate Trap Cards during this Battle Phase. If the result is 5 or 6, increase this monster's ATK by 500 during Damage Calculation only.)A light armored warrior appeared on the field. Goldmane: I don’t have to fear you, but still I play a face-down for some defence.Butcher: You made a great mistake! *draws and looks at the card* HA! I activate Double Summon, allowing me to Normal Summon TWICE this turn! (Double Summon|Spell Card|You can Normal Summon 1 additional time this turn. You can only gain this effect once per turn.) And I summon two of these guys…. Chainsaw Insect! (Chainsaw Insect|EARTH|Level 4|Insect|Effect Monster|2400 ATK|0 DEF|If this card battles a monster, your opponent draws 1 card at the end of the Damage Step.)Two huge insects with lethal horns materialized. Jerry: Wow! Have you ever seen such a strong four-star, Ryan?Ryan: I don’t think I have…. amazing…. Butcher: HA! What a shame that nobody is around to see this Duel!Ryan: So they didn’t even notice us yet…?*Ryan and Jerry sweatdrop*Butcher: And now! Chainsaw Insect 1, attack his weak Knight!Goldmane: Ha! Face the power of gambling now! When Dice Master’s Knight is attacked, I may roll a dice, and something will happen according to the number rolled! I roll… A virtual die rolled over the battlefield, stopping with two dots on his up plane.Chainsaw Insect attacked Goldmane’s monster, but he dodged and swept with his sword around, driving the Chainsaw Insect back. Butcher: Huh? What happened?!Goldmane: It’s simple. See, the Dice Champion’s minions are born under some curse, that binds them to their own die which writes their fate. By rolling a 2 or 1 during an attack, the attack will stop, not doing any damage to anyone!Butcher: Whatever! I still have my second Insect! Attack!!!Goldmane: I won’t let you handle this that easy! I activate Enemy Controller! (Enemy Controller|Spell Card|Quick|Select and activate 1 of these effects: ● Change the Battle Position of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. ● Tribute 1 monster. Select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. Take control of it until the End Phase. )A shiny big console appeared and plugged into the Chainsaw Insect. Butcher: What the heck is that?! Video games?!Goldmane: Yes! My pride and joy! I command your monster to go to Defense Mode!Butcher: Aaargh!Goldmane: Hah! Now I guess it’s my turn again!Butcher: Like I have a choice… I’ll set one face-down card before that, though.Goldmane: *draws* Whatever. Now watch! I Tribute my Dice Champion’s Knight for this dude! Dice Champion’s Paladin! (Dice Champion's Paladin|WIND|Level 6| Warrior |Effect Monster|2400 ATK|1500 DEF|When this card is Summoned, roll a six-sided die. If the result is 1, return this card to your hand. If the result is 2 or 3, this card cannot be destroyed this turn. If the result is 4 or 5, increase the ATK of this card by 200 Points. If the result is 6, destroy 1 card on the field and no Trap Cards can be activated until your next End Phase.)A tall moustached man in green armour appears.Goldmane: Now, when he’s Summoned, I get to roll a dice again!A holographic dice appears again, rolls and stops on a “6”. Butcher: I guess 6 means that you’re very lucky?Goldmane: Oh, yeah, INDEED! Because of this awesome roll, I get to destroy 1 card on the field and you won’t be able to activate Traps this turn, either!Dark chains destroy Butcher’s Defence Position Chainsaw Insect and trap Butcher’s face-down card. Butcher: ARGH!!! Why mee-ee…. Now I can’t activate my Dark Bribe! Darn it! Goldmane: Got a good Spell negater trapped…. Aaaw… what a pity, just when I drew this! *activates card*A brain with two hands appears and attaches to Chainsaw’s head, which freezes, turns to Butcher and hisses violently. Goldmane: My Brain Control! (Brain Control|Spell Card|Pay 800 Life Points. Select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. Take control of it until the End Phase.) At the cost of 800 Life Points, I gain control of your Chainsaw Insect!Goldmane’s LP: 3200 (4000-800) Goldmane: And now, I will defeat you! Face the fury of Leonardo Goldmane! *laughs hysterically*Chainsaw Insect and Dice Champion’s Paladin both attack Butcher, slashing and piercing him with jaws and swords. Butcher: NO-O-O!!!Butcher’s LP: 0 (4000-4800) Jerry: Wow, a two turn victory!Butcher was thrown to the ground. He stands up, grabs his gear and runs behind the corner where Jerry and Ryan are, pushing them aside. Goldmane notes that and walks to them. Goldmane: Did you two watch the Duel? What an awesome victory, right?Ryan: Sure it was, sir! It was marvelous!Goldmane: Heheh. I knew that. Well, maybe you guys could learn something from that Duel. Well, see you on the battlefield! And remember, if you need some help when some guy is bullying you up, call Leo Goldmane!Goldmane walked away. Jerry: Wow, that guy SURE is a good Duelist! I may only hope we won’t have to fight against him on our road to the Top 7!Ryan: Do you think we will make it, Jerry?Jerry: Of course we will! We just need a bit of luck…Ryan: Alright then… auch!Jerry: Hm? Something wrong?Ryan: Didn’t you hear that? There was a sound that was so loud it hurt my ears!Jerry: I don’t know, Ryan… I haven’t heard anything…Ryan: Well, I’m sure you can’t hallucinate pain.Jerry: Whatever. Are you able to go on?Ryan: -.- it doesn’t hurt that much, Jerry…. Just make sure my ears won’t hurt tomorrow for some other reason!Jerry: *sweatdrop* Okay, okay, relax… Let’s visit the local card shop again! At that time, in the KC Library, Miranda and Gideon are chatting. Gideon: So what do you think of all this, Mira?Mira: To be sure, I do not trust this. At all.Gideon: Why that?Miranda: Because of the award. I think that letting a card be made just for you is a bit…. too great.Gideon: What? Like, there most likely is some trap or trick? Like, “NOT USABLE IN OFFICIAL DUELS” instead of the card’s number….Miranda: Theh. If that will happen, duelists will break KC off.Gideon: Still I think this will be pretty easy to win.Miranda: Of course. You heard about how I rendered the Examiner apart in my last Duel?Gideon: Examiners are nothing. Yours played a pretty good Gadget Deck, but you showed him all the corners of the entry hall!Miranda: *sighs* I just hope we get some real challenge.Gideon: The best Duelists in the world have came here.Miranda: We ARE the best duelists in the world, Gideon. Don’t be shy to say that.Gideon: Well, seeing as the real top is too old for Yu-Gi-Oh now, you may be right.Miranda: Of course I am. I just may hope fate won’t bring us against each other too early. In some dark desert-like place a man is seen dueling with a huge horde of zombies. The air is blood-colored in that place, with an orange sun, which is not fierce so you can look at it without pain and brown clouds. The duelist’s face is covered in the shadow of his white hair and the ruin he battles in. He slays the zombies with ease, taking him only one or two turns and losing almost no life points. Almost.His Life Point counter drops lower and lower and there is no end visible to the zombie Horde…The man grinned and whispered something…“This is not the end…” At that time, Ryan and Jerry sat down in the cantina, studying their new packs. Ryan: Let’s see… rubbish or rightful stuff? Hm-hm…. already have this… this one too… another Trap Hole, might come in useful…Jerry: No! Trap Hole ain’t good!Ryan: I know what you mean, but it’s still so damn good when your opponent Tribute Summons something great, and that behemoth dies because of a Trap Hole! Hereby I, OldMaster, bring my sincerest apologies because I let Ryan become a n00b. I will try harder next time. Back to action. Jerry: Whatever… what’s next? Oooh, shinyyy…Ryan: That’s a rare card! “Wrath of the Apocalypse”…Some man behind Ryan called to him: Man: Hey! That’s MY card!Ryan: Where are you talking about? I just got it from a pack! It’s not yours!Man: It’s mine, arrogant bastard!Ryan and Jerry clearly observed the man, He had pretty long brown hair and an old blue tasteless jacket, along with sunglasses on his forehead and long, multi-coloured jeans. His left jacket sleeve was ripped off and replaced by a Duel Disk. Man: I have lost the card just five minutes ago, when walking at least thrice behind your back! Clearly you’ve stolen it!Ryan: Hey! You cannot just take it for me! I’ve paid for the pack and this card is mine!Man: Then let’s Duel for it, chimp!Jerry (whispers): Ryan, this is just an obvious trick to steal that rare card of you! Don’t do something you’ll regret later!Ryan: Oh, I’m sure I won’t lose to that ape!Man: How did you call me?! Do you know who I am?!Ryan: I really hope NOT Mokuba Kaiba, right?The man got white of anger: if he wanted to eat eggs at that moment, he could eat them raw: they would get cooked on the road down his stomach. Man: I am Buckster, the gang leader of the “Dark Duelists”!! And now I will rip you apart in a Duel!!Ryan: Dark Duelists? Oh, I heard of you. Some high school fella’s which are too cowardly to Duel children on their own…. I’m surprised that you’ve actually got the guts of Duelling me alone…Right after Ryan said that, things got bad. Jerry felt that just a second before all the cantina visitors turned to Ryan and pierced him with their gazes: Buckster was not alone. Buckster: Those words… will be your last…Ryan and Buckster: DUEL!!Ryan: Okay, apehead! Challengers go first!Buckster: Oh, now we’re getting generous, eh?! Now we are being nice, eh?! The worse for you! *draws card* Hah! This is too great! Let me start the game with this: Final Countdown! ( Final Countdown|Spell Card|Pay 2000 Life Points. After 20 turns have passed after you activate this card (counting the turn you activate this card as the 1st turn), you win the Duel.) The cantina's area changes drastically. A strong gust blew when the ceiling extended upwards, the ceiling rising higher and higher until it just looked like a very long corridor. Somewhere upside a large comet was seen falling through the doorway. The comet almost reached the place where the ceiling was originally, when 20 fireballs appeared, stopping the comet in it’s tracks. Jerry hefts a sigh of relief. Buckster: After this, I activate the card known as “Dark Guillotine”! (Dark Guillotine|Spell Card|Divide your Life Points by 4. Halve your opponent's Life Points.)Ryan: Argh!!... Ryan’s LP: 2000 (4000/2) Buckster’s LP: 1000 (4000/4) Jerry: This is strange…he hurt himself a lot more. Why would he want that? Buckster: Guess what, chimp! I’m not done yet! Now, I activate this: Final Reinforcements! (Final Reinforcements|Spell Card|You can only activate this card when your Life Points are equal to 1000 or less. If you activate this card, you cannot Normal Summon this or your next turn. Special Summon 1 monster from your hand. This turn, you cannot perform your Battle Phase.) It allows me to Special Summon one monster straight from my hand! And I Special Summon Hexathrr, the Spawn of Chaos! A rotten smell hit Ryan’s nostrils. Ryan looked up and saw an awful looking, bloated demonic creature with a malicious grinning face. Suddenly, the creature let out a terrible cry and split into three formless piles of grey muscle, bone and fang, which in turn slowly grew onto the same demon. But now, there were three of them… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 not bad, but i've read better... your style of writing is refreshing though. you leav much to the imagination, something that i kinda like. when reading, its almost like i'm watching the show... and FISSURE never destroys 2 monsters... a few problems with the effects. typos...? overall, a job well done... btw, did you create your sig? i must say, it looks awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted May 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 Yeah, I did create the sig. The effects are blimey! I forgot about them yesterday evening X-XI must type them up right now. And thanks for reading! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 Nice episode OldMaster. Hope that Ryan doesn't end up a n00b, seriously >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted May 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 Lol, no he won't ^^You're welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 oh my good that was brilliant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Thanks a lot, Impact ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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