HollyMcKnight Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 ok and i am a damn good rper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 He is a pretty very good RPer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HollyMcKnight Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 except for resently the rps have been getting slower so i havent replyed as much as usual Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Topic anyone??        Whoever can read this say, "I read it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 He is a pretty very good RPer. The fact that almost all of his role playing posts hardly pass two lines discourages me from this fact, but eh.  Newtopic: Since this is a role playing organization, it would be a pretty good idea to begin organization of a club Role Play, to start this club off and see and get used to eachother's role playing styles. Any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Hey guys I have a new RP, want to join Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 All my posts are 3-8 lines. We need a role play that everyone will agree on.      Help me choose a color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HollyMcKnight Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 ok ill prove you wrong right there both from me in my escape from carnate island rp so your wrong about me again and stop trying to put me down cuz its not ganna do anything but rub off my sholder Leon closed his eyes and let his sanity slip as he did so his stamina got bigger,his size increased,and the only thing of him that was human was the shape of his body.He soon figured out that if he lets himself go insane that he will become a Marksmen just lick the one in front of him.The only difference was the one he was looking at was blindfolded.Leon roard then leaned foward and aimed the seven rifles on the turrent on his back.Then with one final step he fired all of the rifles at the same time killing the Marksmen in a flash of blood and light that came from the blow.Leon turns around and lumbers toward the D block showers.  Leon smiles"Try to make it to the basement if you get stuck call me."Leon attaches the blades then continues down the hall.Leon walks to the cafetera and looked around then he grabbed the radio"Rayne to get to the basement you need to go through the D-block showers and then head into the C-block but the showers will be either covered in puddles or will be dry so watch out for mainliners they will keep coming until the water is gone."Leon clips the radio on his side then head into the A-block. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 ^That's pretty good. Kind of clump, some grammatical mistakes, could be more descriptive, could have more spaces but it's still good. ^_^ Also, I wasn't attempting to "put you down" so to speak. I searched through some of your role playing posts, didn't really see much, and wished to help you improve on it. The first step to improving is to know your faults, is it not, and improve on them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HollyMcKnight Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 i no and my falts r im lazy and blind in one eye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 i no and my falts r im lazy and blind in one eye Er... blind in one eye doesn't look that relevant to role playing, but eh, it works. Still, if you can get through this "Lazy Barrier" then you can make some pretty phenomenal posts. Improving your spacing and grammar a little bit will be a good start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Sure!" Sarika said, smiling. "One sec. I'm just gunna see if I can find my luggage." She says. Sarika walks into the plane wreckage. She lifts up a piece of metal. "Yes!" She yelled. Sarika grabbed her bikkini. "Just gettin changed." Sarika said. She walked into the tent and sees Eisaka. "Can I please get changed? I'll only be a minute." She asked."Yea.. Sure." Eisaka said and walked out. Sarika walked out and jumped into the lake. "Ahh.. Nothin' like jumping in a lake." She said."Can I join in?" Skye asked."Sure!" Sarika answered.Skye was in her bikkini and jumped in. "Woah! It's a bit cold. Hehe!" She laughed. My longest post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HollyMcKnight Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 ok new topic rate my story Kallen: I'll make Lelouch fall for me, I swear.C.C.: Is that so? What have you accomplished thus far?Kallen: Uh... well... he held my face... in SEASON 1! Beat that!C.C.: And then?Kallen: H-He didn't do anything after that... (I wish he had)C.C.: Well, I kissed him twice.Kallen: Y-You what!? C.C.: See?*chu* *chu*Kallen: That's fraud! Didn't you force yourself on him?C.C.: My my, am I sensing denial here? My bond with him is stronger than steel.Kallen: Nooo! I won't accept it! He has feelings for me, that's why he did this back in episode 7!C.C.: Hmm.Kallen: See? You won't have it your way, C.C.C.C.: By the way, I rode him.Kallen: You... YOU WHAATTT!!!??C.C.: I mean, I rode with him.Kallen: Thank god.C.C.: Hey, you are exposing yourself.Kallen: Eh? EHHH?C.C.: Such a bad girl, Kallen. Don't expose yourself to our guests here.Xing Ke: Don't worry. I have no interest in developed women.C.C. and Kallen: o_OXing Ke: My heart is already stolen by...Xing Ke: Oh, Pardon me...Everyone: ...............Kallen: I have to act fast before this witch really gets to the prize.Preemptive strike!C.C.: Tobasco sauce.Kallen: Hey, stop getting in my way, you insatiable woman!C.C.: I'm open to a threesome.Kallen: What? Hell no!Lelouch: HELL YES!Kallen: What? This is your first dialogue and that's all you have to say?!Lelouch: Actions speak louder than words, babe. And thus the birth of Code Eross. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 *Dies laughing at the Code Eross story*Â Everyone has Potential to a certain extent, it is that some people like to take the Easy way, Those people that like taking the Easy way are called Lazy, others make fun of others for having Less potential, or seeming to have less potential than them, Those people are called Retards, Still others make fun of others for having lower potential, when they have lower potential themselves, Those people are called Elitists, I absolutely do not tolerate the lower two kinds of People Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Both All your stories are pretty good actually.. Keep writing. Well, I only joined this club to observe and rate. So good luck, people! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Will Check[align=center]They are like two or three layer pieces of footjuice mixed with f*ck on toast.[/align]They're Liek 30 Layers Beyach! 30 Layers of Brush and filter whoring and suckish text. =/ [align=center][/argument-which-I-owned-Cove-in-and-his-pieces-of-s***-which-he-calls-'banners'-but-are-more-like-turds][/align] FY!I've Gotten Better Now Anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negimalevolent Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 The story code eros was it? was quite good, but a bit too, love ocessed for my liking... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HollyMcKnight Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 ty the pics were hard to match up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Will Check[align=center]They are like two or three layer pieces of footjuice mixed with f*ck on toast.[/align]They're Liek 30 Layers Beyach! 30 Layers of Brush and filter whoring and suckish text. =/ [align=center][/argument-which-I-owned-Cove-in-and-his-pieces-of-s***-which-he-calls-'banners'-but-are-more-like-turds][/align] FY!I've Gotten Better Now Anyway. [align=center]I know. And now that you have' date=' just take another look at your previous banners.Now what do you think of them?[/align'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Lol, I Hear Ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 [align=center]Good. Also please honestly tell me how many layers there actually were?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 About 14 :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 [align=center]Honestly? And it does look to me like 3-4.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Ok Fine XDIt's Like 8 But Who Cares Anymore.-Back To Topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HollyMcKnight Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 ok i got a Q top three fav anime(Not including H3nta1) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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