Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Yes, this is one of my RPs I currently have and I just thought of making a Fanfiction, hopefully this one will get lots of readers and be a succes, Although I don't plan it to be. Please comment and rate, I don't care if you rant about how bad this is, I'm only 10 so this is about the best I could do... We actually have a Banner/Sig thanks to bobo144 [spoiler= Plot]Here's the plot of the story, just remember that it was taken from my RP, so it could be kind of confusing. The Legion of Past Secrets are the evil ones, in case you guys didn't know... The Legion of Past Secrets, they're...animals that hunts people who hides their deepest secrets, they even kill their own teamates if neccesary, They'll do anything to accomplish their goal, even if that means destroying all traces of the human life. What is their goal? Nobody knows...Some says they want to take over the lives of humans, but the truth will have to be taken from their leader, known as... 'Secret'. Humans have had several attacks since The Legion of Past Secrets appeared, many have died and many have suffered through something worse than death...turning into one of these...'creatures' that lies in the Legion. Few have survived attacks and say their attackers were several gray creatures who looked like a giant crab, with tentacles sliming out of their sides and rear. Being a human can be a pain in the A** but once you've joined 'The Exposers' you'll be unimaginably strong and fast. Joining this human rebel group makes you a bio-human, a human that has powers almost as strong as a god. The leader of this group is also unknown and is known as "M+". Being a Bio-Human may be fun, but there is a slight effect, every Bio-Human created is attached with a 'D+' chip that was created by M+, these chips can end a Bio-Human's life, simply by exploding the body or corpse, the chip is nicknamed the 'Suicid' (Su-i-kid). Now, the so-called creatures of The Legion of Past Secrets, are actually the spirit of a past human after their deaths. Their memories are called upon a forbidden locker, locked with 5 keys that were spread against 5 leaders, these leaders are... 'Secret', 'M+', 'J', 'Necro', and 'Blood'. These leaders have powers that could change the world if they were all together with the keys, Once all keys are inserted to these lockers, they open, but before I can tell you what happens next, I must tell you about the memories in the lockers, the dead bodies of the humans with no memories are summoned upon 'Secret's palace, he controls them and once the locker is opened, these dead corpses that were once humans will be set back in peace. These creatures have different forms depending on their memories...or the secrets [spoiler=Book 1][spoiler= Prolouge]The boy in the shadows looked in front of him, "Is this the right place, Akimoto?". The boy named Akimoto nodded, he wore a thick yellow jacket, goggles covered his eyes from the fierce wind, and he wore big boots on his feet with a blue jean on his legs. His face was nearly gone from the snow that fiercely blowed on the 5 children, "Yeah, we're here Michael, Takaharu Mountain...". The boy in the shadows stepped out, he had blue jeans, a bright red jacket, a scarf over his mouth, goggles on his eyes, and 2 big boots that covered his feet. "I thought you said this would be a beautiful sight..." complained another of the children, it was a girl who had a bright yellow skirt, a blue jean underneath, a dark green jacket and a scarf over her mouth. "Jay, are you sure Koruda read the readings correctly?" she asked, warming herself by rubbing on her chest by her arms. "Of course he did!" replied the girl called Jay, she wore a black jean, a light blue jacket and a scarf over mouth with gloves on her hands, she frowned. "Do you not trust me and Koruda, Julia?" "Well, I do!" replied Julia, "But you don't need to get so rough protecting your boyfriend!". Jay blushed violently, "He's not my boyfriend!!". A boy, possibly the one who was Koruda came up to Jay, he wore almost all black, he wore no jacket but a black coat and black jeans, "Relax...Jay...". "Koruda..." replied Jay, she took her scarf down and kissed Koruda on the lips. As they stopped Julia moaned... "When can you guys stop that?" Julia asked, annoyed. "It's not like you ever stopped that with Akimoto! Or Michael!" snapped Jay. Michael and Akimoto looked surprised at each other, then hey started to fight. "Damn you! You kissed Julia?!!" Akimoto shouted, punching Michael. Michael flew back and hit the icy wall, he felt blood drip from his mouth, "How about you?!!" he shouted back, then punched him back, the two continued fighting... "Jay, now look at what you've done..." moaned Julia, "Guys will you stop it?" The two boys stopped and looked at Julia, "So who do you pick?" the two asked in unison. "Well...I-" started Julia, she was interrupted as a loud bang could be heard, then another and another. "WHO DISTRUBED ME?!!" shouted a voice, it slowly walked to the group, it looked like a big and fat crab with tentacles that sprouted from it's side. Immediately, Akimoto took action and went in front of Julia, "Don't harm us...". The giant creature looked at Akimoto, "Hmmm, You're Akimoto Katawashi? Are you not?". Akimoto gulped, "Y-yes, Now how do you know me?" "You already know...'Secret'..." replied the giant creature. Akimoto looked down, hiding his eyes in the shadows, then turned to the others. "My identity is found out...I'm sorry...but I have to kill you!" he said, then his left arm formed a metal material, it formed into a sharp spear and pierced Julia's heart. Michael found tears in his eyes, he dropped to his knees and catched Julia's body as she closed her eyes and laid dead, Michael's eyes looked down, it was covered in the shadows, "Why Julia, Akimoto? WHY JULIA?!!!" he shouted. *** 20 years later *** A Man sat down at a dark room, his eyes glowed red and he sat down on a chair. The door opened and another man about 33 came in, "Say Michael, you're not still mourning, are you?" "I am and don't call me that, Like I said before...Koruda" replied Michael, he lowered his head to his hands. "Hey cheer up, and I'll be named 'Blood' to you know...We'll defeat 'Secret' soon, then we'll get revenge...M+" replied Koruda. [spoiler= Chapter 1: 5 Leaders]Blood (or Koruda) sat at a chair in the conference room, he had bandages wrapped around his arms, his hair was black, it reached to his neck and it pointed up. He wore a black shirt, with 2 swords by his side, he had a blue jean and he had a black mask, it only covered his mouth, he waited patiently for the others. After half an hour, another man walked in the room. He had a full mask, it was shaped as a black hawk, he had on a black cloak, which covered his body completely, and a hoodie on his back. "You're late..." Blood said. The man looked at Blood, "No, you're early...". He sat down across Blood, and watched as woman walked in, Blood smirked underneath his mask. The woman sighed and sat down next to Blood, "Sorry, dear...and Michael, I had to get a trainee out of the Revolt's mouth...". The woman had a slim body, she wore a black jean, a white t-shirt, and 2 guns were by her side. She had blonde hair that reached to her shoulders... Blood sighed, "The new recruits always seem to keep us apart...". The woman giggled and opened Blood's mask then kissed her. "Jay, Koruda, we have no time for flirting..." replied Michael (M+), "We need to discuss the mission...". "OK, jeez, don't take the rage of Juli-" started Blood, he was interrupted as Michael banged his fist on a nearby chair. "NOW, we will discuss the mission, we need to find whoever has the fourth key...". replied M+. "But Secret might be the one who wields it, it may be the power of those 2 keys that summons the creatures" replied Jay, she sighed. "We'll need a source, I know who has that kind of information..." replied Blood, "His name's Alex but he prefers to be-" "Necro..." finished M+, "I know him, he's the so-called warrior of the State of New York and Pennsylvannia, We'll need a plane to contact him, we're only in Japan, it will be a long trip...". "M+, you do know that Necro...kills anybody in 'his territory'?" replied J, "I don't like him, even his land is so...creepy...". "I've hired recruits to help us to him, this may be the hardest first mission you can ever get...". said M+. "Y'know, I've never seen him fight, before..." replied Blood, "I wonder if he's strong...". *** Albany, New York ***A man walked out of an old shed, he wore a cloak that covered his body, his hair was brown and it reached down to his cheek, it pointed downwards while at the top they pointed up. He stopped as he reached the road, several...things were walking slowly to him. He grabbed two blades from his cloak and pointed them to his sides, where the creatures were closing on him, he just smiled and licked his lips, almost as in...hunger. The creatures had red eyes, they looked like wolves, only larger and stood on two legs, Werewolves? Nope. They were now a few feet from the man as they stopped, "HeY, yOu LoOk DeLiCiOuS!!!" one of them said. They licked their lips and walked again, closer to them, about 5 feet, 4 feet, 3 feet- Slash. About half of the creatures had their bodies chopped in half, they howled in pain and their upper body landed on the ground. while the lower body was spurting out blood, it dripped down like rain, it splattered upon the sidewalk and down on the other creatures and even to the man. The blood was on his 2 sword, he carefully lifted one of them up to his mouth...and licked it. The other creatures were scared and nervous and backed away, slowly. The man rushed to them, then slashed their arms and legs off in a split seond, the screeched and landed on the ground, they were all dead except for 1, who was lying on the ground, half dead. Blood was literally everywhere on the sidewalk, it was spurted and splattered down, like rain, and the bodies of the creatures had large cuts and wounds that made their...disgusting organs spill out and spill more blood. "W- who are you?" the remaining creature asked, it coughed blood and felt his life drifting away. The man smiled... "I'm Necro..." [spoiler= Chapter 2: The New Recruits]M+ walked outside, J and BLood was by his side as they stopped iin front of 3 members. "You 3 must be the new recruits, have you 3 ever been on a mission?" M+ asked. They all shook their heads, "No, sir!" they said in unison. They looked proud of themselves, to be chosen for such an important mission, it was like a dream. "Introduce yourselves..." M+ replied. One by one they looked up, and looked either nervous or too proud. "I'm Alexis Ryder..." replied a girl, she had black hair, blue jeans, and a black shirt. She had a shotgun and a 52. caliber rifle on her hips. She looked calm and smiled at M+, he looked at the next recruit. "I'm Diomedes Xion, sir..." he said, he had a sort of gey-silverish color of hair, white pants, a black shirt and a red jacket, he looked serious, but a sort of proudness in himself. "The man who always speaks the truth..." replied M+, he turned to the last recruit, a girl. "I'm Agas Constetine, sir..." she replied, she had silver hair that reached to her shoulders, a mix of black and white dress, and she had no weapons, apparently. "Where are your weapons?" M+ asked, looking at her sides and around. "I use the art of spell casting..." replied Agas, M+ looked calm while the others looked dis-believeable. M+ nodded... "Sir, you possibly can't believe her?" replied J, she frowned at Agas. "Of course I do, at a time like this nobody jokes..." replied M+, "I bet Agas here is a high class mage...". So they all did their best to believe Agas, but secretly, they didn't, except for M+ and Diomedes who said "I don't rather believe you..." "Say, how are we supposed to get to Necro?" J asked, confused. M+ sighed, in his mask, then turned around. "We'll be traveling by plane, to New York, then we'll split up and search the cities in the State, I bet he'll be close to Albany..." replied M+. "Now, all of you should get prepared for the plane, you guys may not get out alive with these creatures, they're dangerous...but Necro is the worst..." They all grinned, "We can handle it!" they all said, in unison, proudly. M+ turned away, then looked at them. "Don't be so annoying..." he said, then they all frowned. ***** They all entered a large plane, the seats were empty, but they were greeted by a man who wore a black suit, a fancy white hat, and he looked old, very, very, old. He entered the pilot seat and made an announcement, turns out he was deaf, so he practically shouted... "ALL MEMBERS IN THE PLANE, PLEASE PUT ON YOUR SEAT BELT, WE WILL DEPART SOON!!" The new recruits covered their ears, while the leaders were used to it. "Hey, M+..." Agas said, "Don't you think he's kind of lo-" "Just ignore it..." replied M+, he grabbed the seat belt and put it on, so did the others. *** 7 hours later *** "Alright, we're here..." Agas said, she got up, and walked with the others outside. The old man walked behind them, "Mister M!" he shouted, M+ looked back to him. "What is it?" M+ asked. The old man walked to him, he took a deep breath then looked at him. "Don't you need me to guide you all to Mr.Necro?" the old man asked, he seemed to 'beg'. "No, we'll go ourselves..." "But you will need me..." "Do you know the way, Billy?" Billy, the old man, looked nervous, "Er, I...Of course not but I might be able to lead you to him..." M+ sighed, "We don't need your help, your too old for this, anyway..." "OH AM I?!!" shouted the old man, his voice now sounded deeper, he grabbed his face, he seemed to peel it off and another man was behind it. As he grabbed and peeled the fake skin away, the face of...Necro came. "Necro, how nice to see you..." M+ said, the recruits immediately got in front of the leaders. "We'll protect you!" Diomedes said, he grabbed his 2 guns, the 2 Desert Eagles, then pointed them to Necro. "That's right!" replied Agas, her eyes glowed red. "I don't think you would want to do that..." replied Necro, he grabbed two swords and pointed them behind him. "Or else, you want them to get killed..." he turned, and behind him was Alexis and J. [spoiler=Chapter 3: Seperation]Necro looked at the guys, evilly. "Still want to protect? You guys couldn't even protect these girls...". M+ just laughed, "HAHA, you think we would waste our time rescuing them?! Are you really that foolish?!!". Blood looked with dismay at M+, was he really going to leave them? "You can keep them..." M+ said and turned around. Necro looked uncomfortable, for 1 thing was his plan wasn't working, he had to do something else, so he rushed to M+, his sword by his side and pierced M+'s flesh, the blood poured on to the blade and Necro grinned, his grin showing several sharp teeth. M+'s Theme Song M+ turned to Necro, then looked at him, deeply. His eyes were noe bloodred, inside his mask, he grabbed the sword that had pierced his flesh and pulled it out. Then, he grabbed Necro's neck and squeezed it, hard. "HoW dO yOu LiKe It NoW?!!!!" he screeched. Necro felt the pain to be unbereable, while the recruits felt scared at theit leader. M+ choked him harder and Necro started screaming, "ARGH! Pleath!! Sc-Sc...Op!!". M+ turned him around, making him and Necro unseen, then he took off his mask, Necro seemed to scream and M+ threw him to the ground, then put his mask back on. He walked back to the recruits, "Let's go...". "What did you do to him?" They all asked, even J and Blood. M+ just laughed, and tuned him away. "Let me just say...he went to someplace worst than Hell or Heaven..." he said, then walked away. "Besides...that wasn't Necro, Necro's never like the way he acted, he must be a fake...". *** They all walked to the road, there were 6 different roads, and they each went to their own road, "Now, I'm sure you recruits will be alright?" M+ asked. "We'll be fine, sir!" they all replied, and turned away. Then walked at their seperate roads. *** Diomedes arrived in a broken-down city, "Great, couldn't be a more welcome city...where is this place?". He stopped at the middle of the city, or seemed to be, then looked around. He had that "Somebody watching" feeling and continued walking, then stopped as he heard a loud bang. He looked around, noboy, or at last, he thought. Another bang, then footsteps, he looked around, expecting something to appear and attack. And so it did... "C'mon!! Get over here!!" shouted a voice, then another voice, "You better do as the boss says!!". Diomedes looked back, of course, there were several creatures, they looked like a huge animals. Only they looked more mutated, maybe they were infected. The creatures were terroring a young woman, Diomedes sighed at the sight. "Saving time..." he said then walked over to them. *** Agas walked around an old city, the city was lively, though only a few were left on the street, as the sun set down and the shadows strectehed out. "Weird City..." Agas said, walking around the city. It wasn't really much of a sight to see, the city looked as if it was wasted on. The ones that passed Agas was usually gangsters or others that flirted with her as she passed by, lines like "Hey baby, want to get put out of the cold?" or "Why don't you spend a little time with me? It'll be fun...". She just ignored these flirts or rather...taunts by what she thought of, and continued. She stopped as a loud Ding-Dong went off, it was a clock. A large one came into view... "Huh, never seen this part of the city..." she said, and she was right, it was a part of the city that was broken down, it was the South part. Several gangs in hoodies walked up to her, she of course, just ignored them but they followed her until she stopped and walked around her. One of them got behind her and trapped her arms, "Where do you think you're going?" one of them asked, flirtingly. "Tch, you guys leave me alone..." Agas replied, bravely. They all laughed, and grabbed her. "No way..." one of them replied, there were about 4 of them. 3 grabbed her until she was tightly trapped by her arms, chest, and legs. The fourth one, possibly the leader, walked up to her and smirked. "Why don't you spend the night with me?" he asked, smirking still. "I'll say it one time only, NO" replied Agas. The leader smirked and began to grab her, rather, private parts. "Then maybe we should force you, huh?" he asked, he put off his hoodie and there was the face of something as ugle as the insides of a cockroach, another creature. *** Alexis walked around a different old city, a strange one. The people there was quiet, the cars made no sound either. Alexis felt a little bit scared but she was still brave, she stopped as she heard a sound,and looked back. A giant...thing was rushing up to her. *** M+ turned around, "What do you mean?". Blood sighed and explained again. "These creatures have a sense to...wreck a woman as they see one...while they bite Men and rip their heads off..." he replied. "Then I'll give my best regards to Agas, Alexis , and J..." replied M+, laughing at his own joke. Blood laughed too, it was good to see M+ so cheerful, but J moaned. "Like I'll get raped by a monster..." she snapped, but this made Blood and M+ laugh more. Then...they continued to walk until they arrived in the city, now this city was the strangest of all. This city was crawling with the creatures... [spoiler= Chapter 4: Bloodshed] Diomedes looked serious against the creatures, he walked towards them. They all smirked and walked to him, there were about 10 of these mutated animal like creatures, they all looked muscular and tough. Diomedes grabbed his twin Desert Eagles and pointed them to the creatures, they were unimpressed, in fact, they looked proud of themselves, maybe overconfident. "You're going to pay for disturbing our fun, kid!" shouted the largest one, their leader perhaps. Diomedes raised an eyebrow, he was so confident in himself, so sure that he would live. He shoot his gun, the bullet seemed to go in slow motion, then it hit point-blank on one of the creature's head, it dropped down in an instant, the blood poured down from it's head and scattered around. "Are you so sure?" Diomedes asked, he held his gun and aimed it at another one of the creatures. "9 left...". Then he shot, and again a creature was shot in the head, he fell down and the other creatures looked nervous. "8 left...". *** Agas smirked, her eyes glowed red and the creatures floated up in the air, they ridiculously swimmed around, and shouted. "GET US DOWN YOU LITTLE BI-" At that time, Agas had waved her arms and their mouths were zipped shut, they panicked so much they screamed so loud. Agas just kept smirking, "I'm just like the devil, aren't I?". She walked away, slowly, leaving the creatures shouting. As she got within at least 100 meters within them, she snapped her fingers and a blood-curling scream was sent, blood was splattered upon a building, and the bodies of the creatures were gone, like they were crushed then vanish. *** "1 left..." Diomedes said, he aimed his gun at the leader, who was on the ground, begging for mercy. "P-please!! I'll say sorry and won't do it again! PLEASE!!" the leader shouted, he scrambled away from Diomedes. "I'll give you 10 seconds, but before those ten seconds start I'll tell you something..." replied Diomedes, the creature nodded his head, and Diomedes continued. "1, I never give any mercy to anybody, and 2...". He shot the leader at the head, "I will never break that rule...". He walked away, the bodies of the creatures stood there, all in a pile of blood that streamed down from a bullet hole that was at the forehead. *** M+, J, and Blood stood in the street, they were covered by at least 200 of the creatures. Blood just smirked, "This is a great chance to feed...". The creatures rushed to the three, M+, J, and Blood. They were so calm, waiting for the creaturs to get close... As a few reached Blood, he grabbed one of them by the neck, and used it as a hammer as he swinged it around himself, knocking several creatures. He grabbed the one he threw as a hammer by the head and cracked it, by turning it 360 degrees as they heard the bone crack. "Do they really think we, 3 leaders, would be that weak?". J grabbed her gun and shot several creatures, they were all killed by one bullet. She seemed to turn into slow motion, as her gun repeatedly reloaded it self automatically, and she shot them at the head. They all fell to the floow and she blowed at her gun, "I'm guessing they do..." M+ stood still, as the left-over creatures rushed to him, he simple grabbed a sword and sliced any that was in range, BLood quickly came over to him and pulled his sword out, "Don't forget about me!". They stood there, calm, as the creatures left, possibly well over a hundred stilll, rushed to them. Both of them had a sword on their right hands, they looked fiercely at the creatures, then as they were all close, in a flash the creatures were dead. 悪魔スタイルスト点滅 "Demon Style; Flashing Strike!!!" shouted Blood and M+, in unison. That was the name of the move they had used to kill those creatures? Incredible. Footsteps were then heard, the three looked up in front of them, there was a figure in the shadows. "Who are you?!!" J asked, the man in the shadows laughed then walked out. "I...am Necro" [spoiler= Chapter 5:A Wrong Promise]"I am Necro!!" J and Blood looked shocked, they had never really seen Necro before. Except Blood who had just caught a glmipse of him before, but they were still shocked of him, his appearance, and his skills. Necro, he wore a cloak and hoodie that covered his face and body, he slowly reached for the cloak and pulled it off, he had wore a bright blue shirt underneath an old pair of shoulder armor and jeans on. His face shined handsomely at the three, as his dark-brown hair flashed upwards to the sky. M+ seemed patient, he was so calm at Necro, almost familiar. Necro flashed a smiled at M+, "You must be the 'legendary' M+?". M+ instantly looked down, "That is correct, and you are Necro, 'the survivor of Hell'?" He asked, jokingly. Necro laughed, then looked at M+, "You're idiotic, you know that? You were the one who freed Secret's power, weren't you?" M+ turned away, "I don't like to talk about that...". J and Blood looked puzzled, "M+, is there something you never told us?" Necro chuckled, "He won't tell you, but I will...." *** 20 years earlier *** There was really a flash of light that came out from Akimoto, or 'Secret', Michael dropped Julia's body and got up, "You bastard!". He rushed to Akimoto, and raised his fist. Akimoto dodged a punch from Michael as he punched, "Why do you fight, knowing your life would end?" He asked then punched Michael in the stomach. Michael flew back and dragged across the icy ground, "Koruda...Jay...Julia...I won't forgive you for killing them!!". He quickly rushed up to Akimoto again, and punched him again. AKimoto easily dodged it and kicked Michael up, then gave an uppercut, Michael flew high up, and landed down. He felt pain surging across his body, was this was fate led him to? Was this his death? Would he join Julia? No, he thought. He had to take revenge, he again rushed up to Akimoto, who looked confident. Michael punched at Akimoto, Akimoto was about to dodge it when he felt something, he felt so slow, and was punched at the stomach. Akimoto dragged the ground and he got up, quickly. He looked at Michael, and rushed to him, Michael did the same. There was another flash of light, and Akimoto dropped down to the ground, he was on his knees and Michael stood in front of him, he held a silver blade on his left hand and neared it on Akimoto... Akimoto looked down, "I guess I've earned this, But I was surprised you met my strength, and possibly exceeded...But I'm glad we met...as friends...". Michael laughed, evilly, "You think those words would spare you?". Akimoto shook his head, "No, but it was a heck of a life with you...". Michael raised the blade, then remembered everything that he had done with Akimoto, Jay, Koruda, and Julia. Akimoto closed his eyes, prepared to die, he heard Michael swing the sword, but no pain. He was still alive and he opened his eyes, Michael had forze his sword just a few inches from Akimoto's head, Michael turned away then walked. "You're sparing me?" Akimoto asked, a bit of surprise and regret in his voice. Michael turned back at Akimoto. "頭が悪い!" (English-Japanese: Baka) Akimoto looked up, surprised, that was what Michael used to say to him when they were both just kids, 頭が悪い (Translation: Stupid). "You think I'm sparing you? I'll kill you later...and I promise on that..." Michael added, a tear seemed to drop from his eye and dropped to the ground. Akimoto looked sad and shocked, was this Michael's way of sparing when he's mad and sad? He got up, and walked away *** "And that's all I could make out..." finished Necro, "I was watching this scene as an innocent watcher...". J and Blood looked sadly at M+, they were sad for him and that they were not there to support him when they were seperated. M+ looked down and chuckled, a bit of evil in his laugh. "But that was true...I am going to kill Secret...". [spoiler=Chapter 6: 'Secret' Revealed/Big Fight! part 1]The wind blew hard at top speed to a man, walking the town in a black cloak, a falcon mask, and a hoodie that covered the mask and head. He stopped, seeing 3 women walking down the road, he walked up to them, the women were old, about 60 and they carried shopping bags. "Excuse me, may I help you carry those?" the man asked. The old ladies looked at him, "Oh thank you, dear..." replied one of them, "But we can handle it...". The man grabbed the shopping bags from the three ladies, "I cAn HaNdLe It!". *** M+ walked in a room, J, Blood, and Necro behind him. They were in a hotel, It was in good shape, even as the creatures were the only ones there, they took good care of the hotel. M+ sat in a couch, J and Blood sat together and Necro sat by himself across from M+. "Necro, we have questions concerning you of the Key?" M+ said. Necro looked at him, "Of course, I have the key. Why do you think I have the power of Darkness?". M+ looked up, "I too have the power of darkness...". *** After briefing of plans *** M+ got up from his couch, "O.K., then. It's agreed?". They all nodded and M+ and Necro walked away. Blood and J looked at each other and then at M+ and Necro as they walked away. Then as they were gone they smirked. Blood and J kissed each other, their lips touched quickly and they instantly hugged each other. Both of them could feel their tongues fondle each other, and then as they stopped, they smirked at each other. Blood got up from his seat, J got up and bent to her knees, then opened Blood's zipper and licked his ** Private area **. As she stopped she got up and began kissing him again, sweat started to drop from their heads as they did their thing, they fell down on the couch and carresed each other, feeling pleasure spread throughout their body. *** M+ walked out of his room, it was night and Necro, J, and Blood was asleep. He went to the window which let him view the scene from the tall hotel. "I just wish Julia was still here..." he said to himself. *** Three bodies laid on the ground, blood splattered everywhere and the bodies' flesh was ripped. The man from earlier was behind the bodies, his mask had been opened, his mouth was full of blood, it seemed like he was rather in a 'eating' mood. The flesh of the three ladies had been shattered, their bodies were split apart and blood was slowly falling down. He smirked. "You ladies were delicious...". He put the mask on his face and walked away, he was in a happy mood and he felt delighted to have eaten. *** "What's secret doing?" asked a creature, he hid in the shadows, talking to another creature. "I think he's out for a feeding..." replied another creature. *** Secret's Theme Song M+ looked outside, he had pain inside himself, was he missing Secret? "NO!" M+ shouted, at the same time, the man before had said and wondered the same thing. "Do I need Michael?" The man wondered, he seemed to be Secret. "No, I'm his enemy..." the two said at the same time, then looked up. "I won't lose to the likes of you...For Julia!" *** Secret then took speed and ran at his full speed to an old city, "Michael..." *** "Akimoto..." said M+. *** "I'm going to beat you!" the both shouted in unison. TBC [spoiler=Chapter 6 part 2]The sun rose up, and everybody awoke. They got off their beds, then walked to the main room, where M+ was already there, already in deep thought. "You guys overslept..." M+ said. They all looked at the clock, "It's 6 o' Clock in the morning and you tell us we overslept?!!!" Blood replied. M+ nodded, and BLood and J did a facepalm. "Besides, you two have enjoyed your little 'sleep'..." snapped M+. Blood chuckled, nervously, "uh...Yeah...". *** 6 hours later *** The group walked out of the hotel, their plan was to travel to Africa, there was a 50 % chance that Secret or one of his 'pawns' was there, considering the high activity of releasing there. They stopped at an old stadium, as they passed it, there was a strange noise from it. "Let's go..." M+ said, they all walked in the broken-down building. They saw a man feeding on a woman, blood dripped from the man's mouth, he stopped and looked at the group. "Who is he?" Blood and J asked. "Akimoto..." replied M+. ***----*** "Akimoto..." replied M+. "So that's Akimoto, he's becomed a bloodthirsty beast...literally!" J replied back, she turned to the woman and felt a chill sent to her spine. The Backround Music Secret looked at the group, "Michael...Jay...Koruda...and....Necro?". M+ stepped forward, "We're not here for greetings Akimoto! We've came to stop you! Don't try to escape, I've already told my recruits to come here..." Secret chuckled, "Why would I try to escape?" he said, as he wiped the blood from his mouth. "This would be a good time to feed again...". First Encounter Secret slowly walked to M+, M+ walked to Secret. They reached each other and stood still. Then, Secret punched M+, M+ easily dodged it and landed a kick on Secret, who flew back and dragged across the ground and crashed on th stadium wall. He got up and rushed to M+, who tried to dodge it but dropped by a punch to the chest, Secret punched his face and M+ dragged the ground. Secret smirked and rushed to him again, this time, M+ side-stepped and dodged it, then did an uppercut to Secret who flew up and landed down with a thud, he quickly got up and found himself trapped by 12 M+s. "Doing a little Spell casting, are we now?!" He shouted, and grabbed his sword, it was a black-blade longsword with a golden hilt. He sliced one of the clones but it was a fake, and then another and another. Oh the blood splattered from the fakes!, Only 1 was left and Secret stabbed that one, blood dripped down to the blade and ground and M+ fell to his knees. Then...it dissapeared! Another fake, and the real M+, who was behind Secret, swinged his sword. Secret saw through this and jumped up, he landed on the sword, M+ could feel his sweat drop, then he threw the sword. The sword landed on the ground while Secret flew up and floated gently down, safe. Secret grabbed the sword and threw it back to M+, who catched it. "Is this too much for you?!" Secret asked, who was having the time of his life, without even a sweat. M+ shook his head... "No way...I...am...fine..." he replied, he could feel his energy run out and his body shake from the tiredness. He fell down to the ground, his vision became a blurr and he slowly drifted away. Secret laughed evilly and walked to him. J and BLood stepped forward, but Necro shook his head and put his arm in front of them. "M+, M+, M+...you weren't even as strong as before..." Secret taunted, he kneeled down beside him and he put his hand to his mask. He lifted M+'s mask off and looked at his face, "So this is what you looked like...I couldn't believe I actually loved that annoying brat, Julia...". Secret fondled M+'s cheek... M+ shrugged it off, "Shut up...you...gay jabroni!". This made Secret laugh, then he got up. "Well, we shall have our real fun later...". M+ shook his head, "No, we're going to end this right now!". This time, Secret shook his head, "No way, if we end this right now, I won't be able to perform Yaoi now won't I?". M+ was now enraged, first he hated Julia from the start and now he was flirting with him, "Shut the Fu-" he was interrupted by Secret who punched him by the cheek, "You're a waste..." he said and walked away... He stopped suddenly and walked back to M+. He kneeled down and let his face close on his face... Blood had nearly enough and pushed Necro's arm out of the way, and he rushed to Secret but was too late. Secret bit M+'s neck, like a vampire except...well he didn't suck blood, Secret got up and walked away. Blood got up to M+ and kneeled down beside him, "Michael! Are you alright?!!". As Secret neared the entrance, Agas, Diomedes, and Alexis appeared and they covered the entrance. "We won't let you pass!" Diomedes shouted. Secret chuckled. "Oh really?! Then fight..." replied Secret. Agas' eyes glowed red... "We will!" She replied. Secret chuckled. "Oh, not me...but your Boss!!". He turned around to the body of M+. M+ got up, his eyes glowed red and he put his mask back on, "I serve and command to Secret..." he said, he kept repeating this everytime someone replied to him. Agas, Diomedes, and Alexis looked shocked, did they have to fight their own Leader? [spoiler=Character app]Name:Age:Personality:Bio:Appearance:Willl he/she die:How?: (Answer only if you answered YES ^) Any other chapters are further into the Thread, here's a look-out, so you don't need to look through all the posts. Chapter 7: Page 4, 3rd post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 This is actually pretty good for a 10 year old, so i suggest you keep it up and we can see if it gets better :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Thanks, for your support. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Welcome, say, could you sneak Agas in? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Of course, but maybe I need to make a character app... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Sure, i'll fill it out ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 I put the application in the first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Exodia Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Hey dude, could you put in Alexis from the Deep Secrets RP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Sure, Sure, whatever. I can't work on the next chapter, until Soul Legacy made his chapter, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 good prologue especially for a 10 year old. anyway before i post an application of this fic, I have one question: how come there isn't a plot or some info of what the fic is about on this thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Actually, the plot is kind of in the RPs section, but I'll move it here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 that would be helpful, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 O.K...I'll be waiting for all characters, then I will make chapter 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Exodia Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Omega, could you start the RP? I'm having anticipation, & when I have it, I get crazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Here you go Omega: Name: Agas ConstentineAge: 21Personality: Serious, Strong and IntelligntBio: You Know Agas ;)Appearance: Can't find one.......Willl he/she die: NoHow?: N/A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 AWW, Just when I made chapter 1, I'll make another chapter soon with the characters and the RP can be started, Rushing Diamons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Oh thats ok, its an awsome chapter 1 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Yeah, you can post a Theme song, if you want... I'll post chapter 2 up tomorrow, also, is your character the ghost thing? It's not, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 No its not.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Good, you'll be one of the recruits going with M+, J, and Blood to find Necro. Like before, You can post a Theme song for your character, if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Sorry it took a while before I sent this, I was a little busy with something else. Name: Diomedes XionAge: 24Personality: Serious, Honest, CourageousBio: Even before the incidents occured he was a very honest man, never told any lies and has never kept anything a secret and because of this not may people like him and is usually thought of as someone to not trust with anything which doesn't bother him as it means he doesn't have to carry anybody else's burdens. He only joined to protect others as he knows everyone else has secrets they keep hidden. He uses modified Desert Eagles to kill these creatures.Appearance: [spoiler= Diomedes] [spoiler= his weapons] Willl he/she die: (i'll think about it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Alright, I'll post the next chapter tomorrow, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 thats ok i can wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 The half of chapter 2 is up, i will continue on it tomorrow... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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