{DA} 2nd tin. My Custom 5D's Template

[Ezio]

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Credit to Blood Rose for render.

Yu-Gi-Oh! TCG for card, advance holoed by me.

And everything else is 100% Custom :D

Please tell me what's wrong, what's good and what I need to improve on.

Do bare in mind this is the second time I have ever made a tin before.

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[Ezio]

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~BUMP

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[Skyfi]

Bevel Emboss the 5D's Logo, also Make it a little smaller, The Tech Circle isn't supposed to be Purple, Work on those.

[God Kaiba™]

the render is good

the tech circle should be normal not purple

the 5d's logo seems flat and dark

the text is okay but still could match a bit

just a little bit more improvement needed

[Ezio]

Bevel Emboss the 5D's Logo' date='[/i'] also Make it a little smaller, The Tech Circle isn't supposed to be Purple, Work on those.

 

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Inside of Tech Circle can be whatever colour I want it to be.

I will Make the logo look better, but I know it should be that size, I rendered it off an official tin and kept the sizes and didn't move it at all, so I will not work on that as I see no need.

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the render is good

the tech circle should be normal not purple

the 5d's logo seems flat and dark

the text is okay but still could match a bit

just a little bit more improvement needed

 

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Read replies above.

Also what is wrong with the text?

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Italics= will work on.

Bold = Wont' work on. Reasons stated below quotes.

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