Luna Diviner Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Nobody cares anyway... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Encalade Shinamisu Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Too Short. In my opinion it was vague, and told you little but that he had powers and was hired for a simple-seeming task. Nothing else really sparked interest... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted April 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 I always thought a prologue was meant to be short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Yeah, but this is less than a quarter worth of words of my avg rp posts on Daeluin... It's extremely short. Even if, you could have been detailed here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted April 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 In my opinion I was extremely detailed but meh, I am young. I shall learn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blud Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 A few run-ons in my eyes. Good detail, though. But I will agree with "I Am"...it is really short. But I guess it is the prologue. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Nobody cares about my threads... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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