Enma Ai Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 [align=center]Okay, so here is my first deck, i just used cove's template outline to get the right shape. all other things are done by me*. * = ExceptionExceptions:Render = Blood RoseBG = Dark Galaxy -DR-Arcane Circle = Dark Galaxy -DR-Logo'son side = Cove [spoiler= Deck Version 1] [spoiler= Deck Version 2] Questions:1. How can I improve these?2. Which version is better? Why?3. What is your overall rating of it? Explain your answer.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 1. The background is over contrasted...2. V2...3. 9/10 The only bad thing is the font... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted April 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 okay, so i have to work on the colours i use and the font, got it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Wait a second how did you get the render? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted April 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 emmmm..... i payed you 2000 points to get access to your PB <_< i use your renders on all my things >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 You have the perspecitve all wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Sorry Neon. I agree with Chidori on this, I don't know why but that does seem off, probably the angles used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 You have the perspecitve all wrong This. And the text is iffy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 I See You Removed The Stroke....Nice Deck... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Very nice. Work on the Font a bit. Also say "Femme" instead of feamle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Kinda agree to the above, the perspective and angling on the pack is all weird, it doesnt follow into the V.P. Also, a bit girly for a 'boys' card game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted April 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 1. Its not a "Boys" card game, ive seen girls play it before, even in tourneys <_< *cough*Racist*cough* 2. I cant get the perspective right 3. I will fix the font aswell 4. Thanks cove 5. Okay BR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Better txt in 2ndThe pic on the 1st side of the box shud not continue to the side of the box Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Neon... I will send you my psd for My Deck psd once I finish for the lulz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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