starly Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 [spoiler=introduction]we come to a time of war where many teams fight it comes from life to death there are those who are evil and those who fight for good ill show you the teams and in those armies these may not be all teams.teams:eldardark eldarspace marineschaos space marinesorksdark angellifedeathchaosinfernoheveanhellnatureknightsmagicwhite dwarflord of the ringsso here we are at a time of war welcome to warhammer 40,000theme song.warhammer 40,000get to war dadada space marines and orks have a hard tim with eldar looking for peace weve gotta defeat em all warhammer 40,000 [spoiler=chapter1]we come at a hard tim we se the war of dark eldar and eldar the only war that is nature so lets see.eldar captain:right dark eldar you will be defeated.to be continued oops the pol is do you like my fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwIsTeD GaArA_95 Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 well as a 40k player i support this i hope to see the first chapter soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starly Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 first chapter is today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 uh.. I'm a warhammer 40k player, been playing since third edition came out, Ive read a lot of the books and played every game, and I have no idea what you were saying in the introduction let alone what the first chapter was. If that is the first chapter... then this is sorely lacking in the written department.I'm good for any well written fan-fic about warhammer 40k but you have a three sentence 1st chapter and i'm not entirely sure if it is three sentences.I would take some time writing and double checking before posting the first chapter if i were you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starly Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 soz just need work on it im planning it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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