goldenboy820 Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 Spring break left me lazy, but i'm back and ready to make cards!Anyway these are wraiths, which are supernatural monsters(hence the effects). they mostly deal with removing from play, swarming and destroying. Here they are. Wraith SummonerDARK level 4 (zombie/tuner)When this card is Summoned, remove from play the top 3 cards from your deck. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card you control to Special Summon 1 "Wraith" monster that is removed from play. If this card is removed from play, Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower"Wraith" monster from your deck.ATK 1100 DEF 900 Wraith ReaperDARK level 4 (zombie/effect)When this card is Summoned, remove from play the top 2 cards from your deck. When this card attacks, it gains ATK equal to the number of "Wraith" monsters removed from play x 100.ATK1800 DEF1000 Scythe WraithDARK level 5 (zombie/effect)When this card is reomved from play by 1 of your effects, Special Summon it. When this card is destroyed, remove from play the top 2 cards of your deck to add 1 of your removed from play Wraith cards to your hand.ATK 2200 DEF 800 Malice WraithDARK level 4 (zombie/effect)When this card is Summoned, remove from play the top 2 cards from your deck. When this card battles an opponent's monster, remove fromplay the top 2 cards from your deck. During the end phase that you activated this effect, destroy all monsters that battled this card.ATK 1300 DEF 0 Dimensional shifterDARK level 3 (zombie/tuner)If this card is removed from play, you can special summon this card during your main phase once. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, remove from play the top 3 cards from each player's deck.ATK 100 DEF 100 Black WraithDARK level 6 (zombie/synchro)1 tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, you can remove from play the top 5 cards from your deck, and Special Summon all "Wraith" monsters removed by this effect. All "Wraith" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF.ATK 2000 DEF 1500 Signature WraithDARK level 7 (zombie/synchro)1 tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned, you can remove from play the top 3 cards from the top of your deck to remove from play up to 2 cards on the field. Remove from play 1 monster in your hand to Special Summon 1 of your removed from play "Wraith" monsters.ATK 2600 DEF 1100 Cold AltarNormal Spell cardIf 2 or more monsters are removed from play, you can remove the top 2 cards of your deck and discard 1 Wraith monster to draw 2 cards. Bone-Chilling MiasmaContinuous Spell cardEach time a card is removed from play by 1 of your effects, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. Swarming WraithsNormal Spell cardRemove from play the top 3 cards from your deck. Special Summon up to 2 Wraith monsters that are removed from play. Durin the end phase, reomve from play 1 card you control. Supernatural MagicNormal Trap cardTribute 1 Wraith monster. Remove from play the top 4 cards from your deck. Add 1 card from your deck to your hand. Trump coming soon. comments welcome but plz b good, i need to develop the cards the right way. Link to comment
ayy lmao Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 A few OCG errors e.g. Deck.Great idea though!Balanced. 8.7/10 Link to comment
EnkoMaun Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Nice one once again, wish u'd create more... Also, I'm going away for a while. I almost posted my last set, check it out sometime, k? Link to comment
Ghost Ryder Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 deck = DeckWraith cards = "Wraith" monstersend phase = End Phaselevel = Levelreomved = removed OCG still needs work, like what I said in ma sig. I'm too lazy to find all the OCG errors, needs more creativity, 5.3/10. Link to comment
goldenboy820 Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 tnx.i'm about to update.o and what is ur last set name so i can read Link to comment
Ghost Ryder Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 What do you mean by last set name?Emperor?Anyways this is getting a bit spamm-ish. Link to comment
goldenboy820 Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 i wanst talkin to you. i meant enkomaun.didnt see your post at first but now that i read it, i wish i didnt emperor...i know about the ocg, i dont have time to go back and fix it, and besides everyone knows what i mean so whatz the prob Link to comment
EnkoMaun Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 I didn't do it yet, almost done tho. He was talking to me emperor. Link to comment
jabber2033 Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Nice cards! 9/10! A few grammar errors that I can see, plus OCG errors. I like the effects though. They're BALANCED! That makes all the difference. Link to comment
DuelingDude2 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Great cards 8.7/10. There are a few OCG grammars but nobody's perfect, they are balanced and that's what matters. Link to comment
Azmodius Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 There quite good few oCG errors here and there. And there balanced, so keep up the good work. Link to comment
Naturia Master Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 awsome cards with awsome effects i would love to see em with a picture also they rock 9/10 Link to comment
goldenboy820 Posted April 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Thx to all I will give u all reps tomorrow, I just have to take care of some business with another member on the site first( I won't say names but I will say that it is the person that keeps neg repping me, I am going to report the sheet out of him tomorrow.) Link to comment
Shocked Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Many OCG errors.....But not bad... 6.5/10 Link to comment
~ BT Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Good. couple of OCG errors.BTW 9/10 Link to comment
goldenboy820 Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Tnx 10yson, rep will be 2morrow Link to comment
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