•:Elonar:• Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 [align=center][color=#483D8B][b]Hey. This is a shop for people who for any reason, wants a card to be rated in detail. I use my own complex grading style, and system, which allows me to grade on many more aspects than normal grading. I myself, am very good at OCG for the most part, and I am very picky when it comes to the image used for the card. If it seems like you just stuck a image on there for no reason, I will mention it. [spoiler=Cost]Free :D[/spoiler] [spoiler=How To Request]Send me a PM with the following: The Card The Cards Effect Typed Out Image Credit For Your Card Anything Else Which Might Help Me Understand Your Card You may send up to 3 Cards at once.[/spoiler] I will not give estimated times for me to rate your card. I will post my review here once I am done. It may take an hour, or it may take days, depends on how busy I am. If you wish to request that the review be PM'd to you instead, you may do so. I shall update this with an example, when I get my first customer [/b][/color][/align][hr] [center][color=#2F4F4F][size=medium]j-manw/thap-lan[/size][/color][/center][color=#2F4F4F][size=medium]j-manw/thap-lan[/size] [align=center][spoiler=Card] [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5655/196949e.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Effect]As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the Feild, everytime a monster is sent from the Feild to the Graveyard, add 1 Kill Counter(MAX 7) to this card. During your Standby Phase, if you remove 7 Kill Counters from this card, increase the ATK of this card by 1000 until the End Phase of this turn. When this card is targeted by a LIGHT monster as an attack target, decrease the ATK of this card by 300 until the End Phase of that turn.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Image Credit] http://dougsq.deviantart.com/art/Michael-Myers-Colored-DVD-37638568 [/spoiler] [spoiler=Review] [u][b]OCG /30[/b][/u] -Feild->field -whenever a monster is sent to the Graveyard from play -place 1 Kill Counter on this card (max. 7) -by 1000 until the End Phase of your turn. -When this card is selected as an attack target by a LIGHT monster [b]23/30[/b] Comments -Not really any significant OCG errors, but a few spelling errors. -Work on spelling, and learning how to word things like they do on real cards. Do what I do, when you are not sure, try to find a card that has what you are trying to say. [u][b]Picture /30[/b][/u] -Picture looks LQ and/or looks stretched -No Holo or added effects (no alteration at all) -Not much else to Neg [b]16/30[/b] Comments -Try to add your own work to the image, such as a holo effect or something of that nature. If you need help, check out the tutorial section of the forum. -Picture did relate to name -Picture seems to go with effect -Try to not just save a picture and then upload it to the card maker. Use a program such as GIMP (Free) or Photoshop (Not Free), or another type of image editor, and resize/crop the image to 300x300, or if you really want to get percise, 244x248. Then save it and upload to the card maker. [u][b]Originality/Playability /30[/b][/u] +I have not seen a card based on Michael Myers as of yet -The cards effect seems pretty underpowered, since 7 monsters have to be sent to the graveyard before it even does anything. In the game these days, it won't last long enough. -Effect is a bit plain, but better than some +I like the idea of it losing stats because of a LIGHT monster, but I would have liked to see it expanded from just a stat decrease. [b]15/30[/b] Comments -Your originality is doing alright as ideas go, but try to expand on your effects. -You need to try and balance your cards more, and try to make it usable. [u][b]Bonus /10[/b][/u] =you dont have to put the image credit in the creator or 1st edition spot, but I am not taking points off for something like that. -I like the idea of the card in general, but still feels it lacked effort... [b]8/10[/b] [b][size=medium]Total: 62/100 Rounded: 6/10 Words: Not bad, but not that great either. Do more research and keep practicing.[/b][/size][/spoiler][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Man The Shadow Lancer Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 haha wow your the first person who didn't like that card. well i'm glad i could get such an in depth rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 umm,this is supposed to be a location for Graphic shops Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 No at shop, and I don't feel it even belongs in CC. LOCKED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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