harhar Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 I know it's over-topazed looking =PComment on something else.Also I would love to see someone rate this(?/10). You get negged ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 I like it... The only thing I don't Like is that it feels boxy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 I like it... The only thing I don't Like is that it feels boxy... What the hell does that mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 lol I mean it feels IDK how else to put it umm. Plain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Here is what I would do.Put this behind the Lelouch and some of the purple area on the left.Make a yellow striped gradient fill, place it at an angle to that it about parallel with the purple area to the right of lelouch, and then make it so that the lines are small and close together.Lower the fill until it feels right, and adjust the layer options as needed. That's just my idea, but idk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superbull Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 I like it either way it has a good flow but not to much depth overall8/10still good in my book Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Here is what I would do.Put this behind the Lelouch and some of the purple area on the left.Make a yellow striped gradient fill' date=' place it at an angle to that it about parallel with the purple area to the right of lelouch, and then make it so that the lines are small and close together.Lower the fill until it feels right, and adjust the layer options as needed. That's just my idea, but idk.[/quote'] That's where I stopped reading.I'm not adding anything to it.I will take notes tho so I can improve next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 How did I miss this? Since the bottom one is the lesser of the 2 I will talk about the top......other than him looking like a complete stalker and a bit boring I can't see anything. Even if my opinion doesn't matter. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Red Pen Tooling/Stroke isn't working. Colors are distracting the focal I suggest just adding the purple Color modification for the C4D's. I would add more effects coming from the back of the focal. Probably effects C4D's or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 How did I miss this? Since the bottom one is the lesser of the 2 I will talk about the top......other than him looking like a complete stalker and a bit boring I can't see anything. Even if my opinion doesn't matter. =D No it matters because I was feeling the same way :/ Red Pen Tooling/Stroke isn't working. Colors are distracting the focal I suggest just adding the purple Color modification for the C4D's. I would add more effects coming from the back of the focal. Probably effects C4D's or so. Got it thanks =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Haris made a sig of Lelouch? It looks good, I like the flow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Haris made a sig of Lelouch? It looks good' date=' I like the flow.[/quote'] Yeah I did him no justice tho =PI'll try again later =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 thats cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 -Way too much purple. You didn't even use different shades of purple. =[-Depth needs work.-Blending is fine, I guess.-Flow needs work.-Text = RAEG.-Need to work on some compo.-I dun like the feel of this tag. Redo. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 -Way too much purple. You didn't even use different shades of purple. =[-Depth needs work.-Blending is fine' date= I guess.-Flow needs work.-Text = RAEG.-Need to work on some compo.-I dun like the feel of this tag. Redo. =/[/quote] Why redo? ;DThanks for cnc mate =]Why am I the only one who likes this? D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 I like it all execpt the text. good job ;] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 I like it all execpt the text. good job ;] Lol that's why thar are 2 images ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 LELOUCH!!SMEXY SMEXY LELOUCHMay i pweeze have it @_@ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 0/10!! No, Just Joking........plz don't neg me for a joke. The text on the second is odd, but the tag's lighting, depth, flow, and blending are amazing ^_^ Teh colors match amazingly, as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 0/10!! No' date=' Just Joking........plz don't neg me for a joke. The text on the second is odd, but the tag's lighting, depth, flow, and blending are amazing ^_^ Teh colors match amazingly, as well.[/quote'] D: <It's negging time.Lol I can joke too ;DThanks mate =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 no prob. It seriously is beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Change the text colour to a shade of purple. The white spoils it. Overall I give it 8/10 OH NO I DIDN'T. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 I quite like it, but one thing puts me off, the huge stripe infron of your render, it just feels distracting XD also, theres a big black patch to the right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 It's good but I would have made it yellow instead of purple. idk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Gotta love this one. I love the colors of choice.The render fits in well.Blends well.Good flow.Focal is clear.Text is umm... text? Only thing is, it's too plain from the right. Otherwise, wub it bud =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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