~Makaveli~ Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 - 1: after the word "Set" put a period - 1: and "anime warriors" should be "LIMITED EDITION"' date=' "1ST EDITION", or make it blank Total: 8/10 :D[/quote'] OK check it now I updated it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 lol first card no. Second card is decent >_> I think it is UP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 lol first card no. Second card is decent >_> I think it is UP. What do you mean by you think it is "Up"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 It is underpower >_> cyber-tech alligator > this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 What about now? Any thing else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 It is underpower >_> cyber-tech alligator > this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 First remove the first line >_> then work from there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mister T x2 Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 may i please join since u invited me here's one of my cards effect This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your deck or hand if a card with "Uchiha" in it's name is on the field. When this card is engaged in battle remove this card's opponent from play for the next three turns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 WTF. You can seriously pull that thing from your Deck? Unless the other Uchiha are total crap, that thing's majorly broken. Oh, and none of the cards on this page should go in the Set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Well there like 3 cards out of 100 in this club that are good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leakybucket Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 New member to the club, so here's my first card. It's still a rough draft (ocg probably horrible) but I wanted everyone's input. Lore: This card's name is also treated as "Jimmy Kudo - Teen Dect.". When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card, remove from play 1 Spell or Trap, respectively, of the same type from your Graveyard to negate the activation of the card and destroy it. You may only use this effect once during either player's turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Remove the "once per turn" bit, and give it some preservation effect, and playability will shine. Lore: This card's name is also treated as "Jimmy Kudo - Teen Dect.". When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card, you can remove from play 1 card of the same type from your Graveyard to negate the card's activation and destroy it. You may only use this effect once during either player's turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gir: Ruler of Tacoz Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 could some one correct my OCG for these:Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from paly 1 "Naruto Uzumaki - Shippuden" and 1 "Fukasaku: The Toad Sage" from the field. By paying 2500 Life Points, you can Special Summon 1 "Gamabunta: Toad of the Sage" to the field from your deck or graveyard. Lore:Depending on how this card was summoned acctived the following effect:- If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Naruto Uzumaki: Hermit Mode" Special Summon a Toad Token (Fish-Type/WATER/Level 2/ATK 300/ DEF 300) on your side of the field- If this card was summoned by Tributing 1 "Gamakichi - Eldist Son of Gamabunta" and 1 "Gamatatsu - Youngest Son of Gamabunta" return the tributed cards to your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leakybucket Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Thank you for the help, Supreme Gamemaster. Latest Conan Edogawa Lore, with notes. This card's name is also treated as "Jimmy Kudo - Teen Dect.".I was thinking of adding a line like "This card cannot be summoned if "Jimmy Kudo - Teen Dect." is on the field", to make it more like the series, but is that too much? When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card, remove from play 1 card of the same kind and type from your Graveyard to negate the activation of the card and destroy it.I'm trying to be ultra specific about the effect. For example, if your opponent plays a Quick Play Spell, you would remove from play 1 Quick Play Spell to destroy the target card If this card is in your Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life points to Special Summon it to the field. As SG said, adds a preservation of effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 So what crap is in the set now? This is Anime-Manga Lover's card.I say it might make it in Maybe if he changes the name to "Roy Mustang - Flame Alchemist".What do you think? Everyone this time tell me how I can make the card better instead of just saying no.I AM NOT CHANGING THE NAME!!! It's part of an archetype set of "Alchemists". It shows on the other cards I posted with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 OK Welcome to the new guy's.First remove the first line >_> then work from there. OK what else do you think it needs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Well now change the summoning condition >_> also think of a function for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Well now change the summoning condition >_> also think of a function for it. Well to start.How should I change the summoning condition? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Well to make it more playable, say that " You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 "********" you control. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Well to make it more playable' date=' say that " You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 "********" you control.[/quote'] How about You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 Light Attribute Monster on your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leakybucket Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 I liked the first arc of Bleach where swords and ghost were blended together. Don't make it as specific as Zombie, but maybe increase Ichigo's ATK when it battles a DARK monster, or some similar effect. Also, I've got my Conan lore here. Suggestions appreciated.[spoiler=Conan Lore] Latest Conan Edogawa Lore, with notes. This card's name is also treated as "Jimmy Kudo - Teen Dect.".I was thinking of adding a line like "This card cannot be summoned if "Jimmy Kudo - Teen Dect." is on the field", to make it more like the series, but is that too much? When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card, remove from play 1 card of the same kind and type from your Graveyard to negate the activation of the card and destroy it.I'm trying to be ultra specific about the effect. For example, if your opponent plays a Quick Play Spell, you would remove from play 1 Quick Play Spell to destroy the target card If this card is in your Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life points to Special Summon it to the field. As SG said, adds a preservation of effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted April 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Yea I know what you mean. I wanted to do something like the show when Ichigo does his Konso thing and sends spirits to the Soul Society but I didn't want it to send strong monsters there so I made this. "When this Monster Attacks a Defense Position monster with less than 1500 ATK points Remove that Monster from play." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Are there any more spots left in the club because I want to join as well! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted April 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Yes Come on in ^_^ do you mind making a card so we can see how good you are.But You don't Have to make one if you don't want to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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