Soul Legacy Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Thats ok then :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Yeah even this weekend I'll barely be able to squeeze the time out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Well its tommorow so it shan't be long ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 ok, though I probably won't review it until late at night tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Update day is happily today, im going to post it as soon as its done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 I look forward to reading it, but of course that's MUCH later in the day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Don't worry, it will be here waiting for you ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Great. Can't wait to see the first chapter, I've been waiting for a while now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Yeah sorry. It might be up by 5 now because i got Guitar, but i promise you it shall be up today reguardless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Cool. I'll be waiting a little longer.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 [spoiler= Chapter 1: Another one..........] Next day. The body is found, she is mutilated. All the way from her brest to her foot. The police examine the body and any media that can take pictures before they get tooken away. The police also chat away with ferensics about the case. "So, whats happened?""Well, you can see what mostly has happened, this type of mutilation is the same as Jack The Rippers....." The policemen then sighed and said, "Another one, copycats can never learn........" Meanwhile ontop of a building a man looked down on the people below. He hold a crucifix and wore mostly black, with long black hair. But also on the building across was another man who wore grey clothes. Who had a grey hood and many knifes, a hidden dagger and sword. In the allyways where 2 other people, a woman with short blonde hair and about 5 foot tall. And once again another man who didn't wear much, just black and white gloves and white hair. As these people watched the crime scene, each made an idividual move. The woman trying to get closer, the man who had white gloves didn't move. and the men ontop of the building noticed each other and traded deadly stares. As the woman tried to get closer she was stopped by the police and was told, "Madam if you step any closer we have to arrest you." But the woman ignored them and moved on. She then felt her hands being grabed and aliminum touching her skin. She was pulled back to face the police as they asked, "what is your name?" The woman then sighed and said, "Angelica.....""Angelica?""Just Angelica......" The police shrugged and took her away. As the three men watched, they all began to move. The man in grey jumping over to the building with the man in black. "Oi! who are you then?!" The man in black looked at the other man and said, "Who are you?" The man gave a little smile and said calmly, "Quint Jager, 'The Hunter's' my nickname, so just call me Hunter." The other man laughed and nodded, "Im Lucifer, Lucifer von Hexen." Hunter nodded and walked over to Lucifer. He and Lucifer then both looked down at the ground again. "So who was she then?""No idea, but whos he?" Said Lucifer as he looked down at the man with the white gloves. Who realised and walked away into the shadows. Lucifer tried to jump off after him but Hunter stopped him. "No, leave him, we'll get him later......" Lucifer stopped and gave Hunter a angry look. They then both jumped down and walked away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Ah great. D= I can't even put in words what I'm going to say. >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Don't worry, im not saying there going to work together as such. Im not really going to have them get along well, and that is if you wish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 No, its' just that.... You made him act wrong again. DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Impressive, Soul Legacy I can see my character has been introduced already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 No' date=' its' just that.... You made him act wrong again. DX[/quote'] Sorry, i tried to make him act calm and he will show his sarcastic side later on. Impressive' date=' Soul Legacy I can see my character has been introduced already[/quote'] Yeah, you like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 I liked it Also Soul Legacy, I reviewed your Vampire Queen card. Now, back on topic, when will the next chap go up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 It will have to put it up Saturday again, because i have activitys all week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 So do I, it's not that easy for me either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 Yeah, but mine are fun, so yours are worse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 Wow, impressive! We'll see if you can do better than this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 I hopefully will be able to ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 Great! I'll be awaiting the next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 But as i've said, i have activites all week, so not until Saturday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Yeah' date=' but mine are fun, so yours are worse.[/quote'] once you're at my level couple years down the road, there won't be such thing for fun time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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