Chaotic Angel Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 Cool, I'll be waiting for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 Glad to see you didn't forget. That's good, I'll be waiting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Ok, its update day! Chapter 21 shall be up momenterally ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Good to hear. I should be able to read up on it later on today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Also, as a quick notice, im going to have to post the Epilouge early, probably on Sunday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Fair enough then. Still, we are awaiting Chapter 21. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Here: [spoiler=Chapter 21: The Battle Part 2] The battle begun. Agas struck at Dominic but he moved out of the way and she connected with Kevin instead. Agas laughed and said, “good enough….” And started to fight Kevin. Dominic realised Alex, Stephine and Fiarce where looking at him, he gave an evil grin and charged at them. They realised and dived out of the way; Dominic stopped and shook his head, “tsk tsk tsk, you tried, but failed……” he then slammed his sword into the ground, making a sudden earthquake and making the guys fly back into the trees and bushes. Meanwhile, Agas and Kevin continued to fight. They where both expert fighters, so it was a hard battle. Kevin kept on getting Agas by the tip of his sword, the same with Agas. Kevin then punched her unexpectedly and then pushed her back and tried to stab her, but she rolled out of the way. Kevin chuckled and charged at her, but she jumped over him and scratched him on the back with her sword. He stumbled in pain. Dominic was thinking of who to attack, he saw Fiarce closest and decided to go for him. He walked over and picked him up he then throwed him to the ground again. He laughed and kicked Fiarce, Fiarce groaned in pain. Dominic laughed again and said, “You’re pathetic! You can’t even fight me!” he then kicked Fiarce again. Agas noticed this and screamed, “Fiarce!” Kevin noticed this and took his chance by knocking her down, he then held his katana at her neck. All hope seemed lost, but then out of nowhere Alex and Stephine charged at Dominic. Dominic realised and said to them, “what do you think your going to do?” they then both shouted back at him, “THIS!” they then took out the crystals they got from Agas and shoved them into his face. The crystals evaporated into purple light that would blind Dominic for a couple of seconds. He fell to his knees, covering his eyes. Kevin realised, he quickly picked up Agas and chucked her away. Agas saw Dominic on his knees and Kevin walking towards him and had an idea. She ran up and jumped on Dominic’s back and then springed at Kevin, slinging her sword at him. As she landed she looked back at Kevin, whose body fell to the ground. Agas then charged at Dominic, trying to kill him as well. But Dominic quickly launched at her by grabbing her by the neck. She struggled to break free but he kept her tight. The guys tried to knock him down, but he kept his ground, he then said, “I’ve had enough of this, it ends, now!” he then grabbed his sword and began to strike, but he stopped and dropped Agas and his sword when something stabbed him. He turned around to see Fiarce had stabbed him with Kevin’s katana. Fiarce then said, “Yes, it has ended….” Dominic then dropped dead. Fiarce took a deep breath and fell back. Agas dropped her blade and looked over the two dead bodies of Dominic and Kevin; she then looked at the guys and slowly fainted. The guys rushed over to her shouting, “Agas!” then, everything went white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 I'm not convinced Agas is going to die. Probably just went unconscious or something. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Thanks, sorry if you think the battle was rushed or not good :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 it was slightly rushed, but I'll live with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Ok, i'll try and make them longer next time ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 If you can't just say it's only part of a chapter or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Well, not really..... Right, might have to start thinking about Chronicle 2 and the plot. The Epilouge for this one won't take long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Then I look forward to the epilogue just as I will for chronicles 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Yes, i promise to tie up any loose ends in the Epilouge you have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Yeah, and I doubt I'll have more Qs after reading the epilogue anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 That is what im aiming for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 That's good, and in a few days when it's up I'm sure it'll turn out great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Thanks :D I might make a preview for Chronicle 2 soon ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 That one you're welcome to put up by this weekend, since it's short I will have the time to read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Also your welcome to post characters for Chronicle 2 soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 If I can come up with any. Remember, I tend to lack a lot in creativity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 I didn't say you had to ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 No, but it doesn't mean I don't want to either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 You don't have to be fully creative, anything will do ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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