Soul Legacy Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Im editing it abit, something doesn't fit it right........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 so will we still see it by today then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Sorry, but once again theres been a delay, but to make a good mark, ive designed a poster for Chronicle 1: I will put it in the first post and i shall design posters for every chronicle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Wow! First ever Fan-Fic poster on YCM! Put that in the first post, that'll make this FF even more popular! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 now that is the best poster I've seen thus far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Wow! First ever Fan-Fic poster on YCM! Put that in the first post' date=' that'll make this FF even more popular![/quote'] Done and done :D now that is the best poster I've seen thus far Thanks, ive got a better one for Chronicle 2 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 we'll wait for that fic to go up first, THEN you can put it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 I know i know, i always go one step ahead :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 yeah well I learned quickly never to go THAT far ahead, you never know what you're getting into Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 20: The Battle Part 1] The guys sat on there train waiting for there arrival back in Norfolk. Fiarce was getting impatient. He stood up and walked back and forth down the cart path, Stephine sighed and put her hand to her face and Alex held her hand and kissed her on the cheek. He then whispered in her ear, “don’t get impatient with him like I did……” she then looked at him and smiled, she then looked out of the window and even though it was dark, could see shadows as the train moved. She raised her eyebrow and opened the window and looked up, Dominic and Kevin looked down on her. She then quickly pulled her head back in and screamed at the top of her voice without a care, “DOMINIC! KEVIN! GET DOWN NOW!” And even though people thought it was weird when people did that they all ducked. Then suddenly bullet holes ripped through the train ceiling and everyone except the guys screamed, then, a huge hole was cut when a chainsaw ripped through the ceiling, Dominic and Kevin jumped in. They chuckled and took out there weapons and concentrated on the guys. Fiarce looked up to see Dominic and grew full of rage. He jumped up and charged at him, “YOU ASSH*LE! YOU DAMAGED HER LEG!” he shouted, Dominic chuckled and punched him to the floor, he then nodded at Kevin and Kevin charged at Stephine and Kevin, who jumped out of the way. Dominic laughed and picked Fiarce up, he then chucked him forwards into a door, which smashed when Fiarce hit it. Dominic then chuckled again and turned around, to see Agas. “Leave them alone, it’s me you want….” Dominic then gave an evil grin, “indeed….” Dominic then struck out at Agas with his sword, but Agas caught it with hers. Dominic laughed sarcastically and said, “Big mistake…..” he then went to punch her in the gut but she moved out of the way. They then began to fight, Agas was blocking Dominic’s strikes and had to dodge every so often. Kevin watched and rolled his eyes, “this is getting nowhere…” he then ran towards Agas and elbowed her in the back, knocking her to the ground. Dominic then gave Kevin an angry look, Kevin looked and said, “what, you where getting nowhere……..” Dominic then punched Kevin out of a fit of rage. Kevin got back up and swung his Katana at Dominic; he dodged and locked blades with Kevin. They then began to fight. After a few minutes Kevin jumped back and tried to cut his wrist, but Dominic knocked the blade out of his hand. Meanwhile, while Dominic and Kevin where fighting, Alex and Stephine had got Agas out of the way. They guys sat with her and they said, “We need to get to the mansion, but how?” Fiarce then saw the train was still moving, so they couldn’t just jump out, especially with Agas’s state. He then remembered that the driver always has an emergency stop switch. He then ran into the front and pulled the switch. Dominic and Kevin flew backwards when it stopped. They got back up to see the guys leaving. Dominic then shouted at Kevin, “AFTER THEM!” and ran out of the cart. The train driver came through and said, “What’s all the noise about?” and saw the mess, he sighed and said, “I ain’t cleaning this up…..” and went back into the front. Agas came conscious and saw that they where running and she was in Fiarce’s arms, again. She thought quickly and clicked her fingers, taking everybody to the mansion. She jumped out of Fiarce’s arms and said to the guys, “right, they’ll be here any second so get ready….” Agas then turned around to see Dominic and Kevin. Dominic gave an evil grin and said, “your not the only one with magic…” Agas sighed and pulled her blade back out, the guys stood behind her with the crystals they where given, ready for battle once again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Okay.. This was great! Even I can't mention how great it is! Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Thanks Final :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 No prob, maybe you should really get this stickied! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Well, thats Umbras Desicion, not mine..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Oh yeah, that's true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Maybe when i start chronicle 2 i'll apply again :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Okay then, I can wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Well, im almost finished with Chronicle 1, so i can apply soon, so you don't have to wait that long :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 chapter 20 was good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Have you read all the others? also, check the first page for the Chronicle 1 poster! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 i have seen the others and i have already seen the poster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Cool, also Chronicle 2 is on Jack The Ripper :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Jack The Ripper? Oh great.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Don't worry, it'll be awsome! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 It better be! Or else I'll commit suicide! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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