The Ghost Chronicles[PG-16][Chronicle 2: Jacks London][Chapter 4 Up]

[ragnarok1945]

Either that or just post what you have here, then tommorrow post the ending

[Fallen Hero]

is enrise still doing the bonus chronicle?

[Enrise]

^Yeah, I am, just not at this moment, not at the computer that has my stuff on it <.

[Soul Legacy]

Don't know how to finish the chapter? Well' date=' PM me the chapter, and I could help. Or, just tell us the ending SO FAR...

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Nah its ok, how is it with the bonus chronicle?

 

EDIT: Oh ok..........

[ragnarok1945]

Can we still expect the chap up tommorrow?

[Soul Legacy]

Yes you can, ive found away to end it and i am now.......

[ragnarok1945]

I'm glad to hear that, I'll be expecting it up in a few hours

[Soul Legacy]

Im sorry about this:

 

[spoiler=Chapter 18: In The Mind Of A Ghost]

 

This Chapter has been shortened due to the computer crashing during writing and losing data and lack of time, i the writer promise that this will NOT happen again.

 

It had turned to night, Stephine and Alex slept in there rooms, and Fiarce slept in his. Agas stood outside looking at the clouds, she sighed and thought “Why couldn’t I just have died when Dominic tortured me..” she then walked back inside. As she walked back inside everybody stared at her with a concerned look, she just ignored them and sat down. She grabbed a book and began to read it, she then got bored and put it back down, she then began to think to herself.

 

“If I can live through pain, then why is there pain? Was pain intentually put on us so we could suffer without dying? In that case then god is not all knowing or all powerful, he is just another person who likes to make people suffer due to one persons actions, if we didn’t have are free will then life would be nothing. So if we give are lives and eternal dedication to a man who makes us suffer, what’s the point of using are free will…….”

 

 

 

another thing is that you can only really understand this chapter if you know the story of Adam & Eve in detail.

[Fallen Hero]

well that was unlucky with your computer crashing.

[Soul Legacy]

Yes it was, and im terribly sorry :(

[Chaotic Angel]

Unlucky.. I wished your computer never crashed.. If you had NOD32, there's 17% chance your computer EVER crashes.

[Fallen Hero]

Yes it was' date=' and im terribly sorry :(

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it's ok, it was just an unfortunate event that happened

[ragnarok1945]

I'm still glad you got it up though. But it is too short for me to give the proper review.

[Soul Legacy]

Im going to make sure that i have a full chapter 19 when it gets up ;)

[ragnarok1945]

Good. If your computer is still not fixed up right now, then chap 19 probably won't be up before the end of today

[Chaotic Angel]

I agree here, Soul, your computer is by far mucked up, you'll need to fix it.

[ragnarok1945]

If it comes down to the point where you need another computer then so be it, we'll wait

[Soul Legacy]

Nah, its okim going to type it up at home once i kill school =/

[ragnarok1945]

That's good to hear. I'll be reviewing it later today if you can get it up.

[Soul Legacy]

I might not be able to, but i shall try ;)

[ragnarok1945]

well I won't have time right now, most likely not until long after you went to bed to check up on this thread, so take your time.

[Soul Legacy]

Thanks, i hate Exams/GCSE'S whatever you do and time diffrences :?

[ragnarok1945]

yeah I know. You're 8 hours ahead of me since you're in the UK

 

And exams take up everything in time.

[Soul Legacy]

yeah I know. You're 8 hours ahead of me since you're in the UK

 

And exams take up everything in time.

 

Oh well, atleast it will be better once its done :D

[ragnarok1945]

yeah, so it we have to wait longer before the update, then so be it.