ragnarok1945 Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Nah' date=' it should be up by then ;)[/quote'] All right, I'll check this thread often, I just hope you don't cut it too close Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Nah' date=' it should be up by then ;)[/quote'] All right, I'll check this thread often, I just hope you don't cut it too close I won't, im finding it more fun typing every day :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 lucky for you. Me it's not like I dislike typing, but I never have the time for it, unless there's a way for 1 day to last beyond the 24 hour limit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Well, im almost finished, how much time do you have left? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 you're cutting it WAY too close, Soul Legacy. I have less than 30 min. I'll review the chap after my work is done if you can't make it, I just hope it's worth the extra wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Okay, i'll type as fast as i can :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 There is no need to rush, Soul Legacy. Remember, I tend to review your chap the day it goes up anyway. At the very most you're going to have to wait is a few hours (to which I'll review when you're asleep or something) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Oh, ok, i just want to get it up before i have to go to bed......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 That's fine too, unless you have sleep typing abilities (to which I seriously doubt) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 So do i :lol: [spoiler=Chapter 17: Sorry.........] The next day, Fiarce took Agas to the Gym. They entered the Gym and Agas asked, “What are we doing here?” Fiarce looked at her and said, “We need to see if you can still walk….” Agas had been pushed there in the wheelchair. Fiarce helped her out of the wheelchair, she could stand perfectly like she used to. Fiarce smiled and walked away from her, only two steps though. “Okay, try to walk towards me…..” Agas smiled and tried to walk towards Fiarce, but in the first step fell into his arms. She hissed in pain and grabbed her right leg, Fiarce looked and said, “You ok?” Agas looked at him and said, “No, my right leg is too badly damaged, the muscle can’t support my weight, its going to take about 2 months to recover…..” She then stood up again. Fiarce supported her and thought, “You’re going to need something to support your weight then while it recovers, a walking stick maybe?” Agas looked at him and nodded, “yeah, my dad used one; I think it’s in his study at the local library….” Fiarce looked at her and asked, “Your dad run the library?” Agas nodded, “It’s probably still there, since he had it given to the library when he died….” Agas then began to walk, with Fiarce and his support, out the door and to the library. As they entered the library, the receptionist looked at Agas with a concerned look, “are you ok Miss Constentine?” Agas looked at her and said, “No, I need my father’s walking stick…..” the receptionist nodded and went into the back, while she was gone; Fiarce asked Agas, “Everyone seems to respect you around here….” Agas sighed and said to him, “I was going to be elected town mayor, that’s why…..” the receptionist then came back with a walking stick. The handle was a head of a lion, and the staff was black. The lion head was made out of crystal, and on the back of the head the letter C was engraved in it, standing for Constentine. Agas nodded at the receptionist in thanks then took the stick, she began to walk with it around the library perfectly, she then smiled and said, “Perfect, thanks…..” she then left, Fiarce followed. As they walked on the pavement, Agas looked at the clouds and sighed, she then looked at Fiarce and said, “Right, we need to prepare for Dominic and Kevin’s next assault…..” Fiarce looked at her and said, “Well, you need to prepare me, Alex and Stephine…..” Agas looked at him with a serious look, “what do you mean?” Fiarce struggled to tell her, he didn’t want to be too mean, he then took a deep breath and said, “Well, it doesn’t look that you’re in the fit state, that’s all…” Agas chuckled and stopped; Fiarce stopped and asked, “What?” Agas then looked up at him with a grin. Agas then pulled at the lion head of the walking stick, and a blade came out, she swung the sword around with expert skills, she then put it back in. She then continued to walk, “I wouldn’t think im that incapable….” They entered the hotel and went upstairs, step by step. As they entered there room there was a note on the side table, Fiarce picked it up and read it. Gone out for a drink - Alex & Stephine Fiarce then smiled and put the note down, Agas then came in and said, “Why did you say?” Fiarce then walked up to her and hugged her, “well, us guys just don’t want you to get hurt……” Agas smiled and said, “you guys are too kind, but im ok….” She then walked into the room fully. Fiarce closed the door behind them and said, “yeah but, still……” Agas said, “Seriously, don’t worry…..” Fiarce then stepped forward, “but……” Agas then turned to face him, “really, DON’T WORRY…..” she said in abit of a serious tone. Fiarce then began to get annoyed and said, “come on, think, you need a stick to walk, even though it’s a blade, its still going to be hard to fight…..” Agas then walked up to him and said with a angry tone, “I’ll be fine!” Fiarce then got angry and said, “No you won’t, you can’t even get up without support!” he then pushed her to the floor. Agas layed there in shock, she tried to get up but couldn’t. Fiarce stared at her and got on his knees beside her. She dragged herself onto him and looked up at him; she then slapped him across the face, and then held him tight. “Please, don’t worry……” Fiarce then held her and said, “sorry…..” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 A good chapter! Keep it up! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 it's an ok chapter but you spelt weight wrong near the end of the first paragraph Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Oh ok ill edit :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 Oh don't worry about the spelling. I think you did great, and as long as we know the gist of what you're talking about, that's fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Thanks rangronok =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 you going to have chap 18 up sometime later today? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Yes i shall ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 This time you have more time as it'll be at least another 12 hours before I can return here to review, so take your time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Ok, cheers rangronok :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 So.. Lets see.. Chapter 18's going to be up by today, yes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Yes, im almost done :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Good, I may have gotten back from my matters, but I'm too tired to read right now, so you still have a few hours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Theres a problem, i don't know how to finish the chapter, i might post it early tommorow.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 I see. You could just think for a little while tonight and see if you can figure it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Don't know how to finish the chapter? Well, PM me the chapter, and I could help. Or, just tell us the ending SO FAR... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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