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The guys followed the pathway down into a chamber like room, they looked around it and all they could see was darkness, Fiarce turned on a torch and began to look for Agas and Dominic, he flashed the light into one corner of the room and saw someone sitting in a steel chair, there head clamped to the chair, as Fiarce got closer, he saw it was Agas. She was in the worst state a human being could be in, she was finding it hard to breath, she was covered in blood, and it was a horrible sight to look at. Fiarce ran over to her, “Agas!” but as he got close a giant blade that also looked like a chainsaw blocked his path, a man then came out of the shadows, “hello, we meet again……” and Fiarce looked at him, it was Dominic.

 

 

 

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Can I apply for the Ghost Chronicles?

 

[spoiler=If I can]Name: Zach Meriam

Age: 19

D.O.B: 9/26/1988

D.O.D: N/A

Sex: Male

Personality: Really cool when it comes to relationships. Knows exactly what to say when to say it, and knows when to get into a conversation. Has a kind heart to girls, and is very easy to make friends with.

Bio (Detailed): He was born in a town packed with many hardships. When he learned to walk, he was trained by lifting heavy objects and tai kwan doe for self-defense. He had the ability to overcome any gang he passed by in the cities and was known as Zach Black notoriously to them.

Apperance (Link Only): url=http://www.testriffic.com/resultfiles/25464anime-guy.jpg

Theme Song (Link Please): Gets Me Through - Ozzy Osbourne

 

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The guys followed the pathway down into a chamber like room, they looked around it and all they could see was darkness, Fiarce turned on a torch and began to look for Agas and Dominic, he flashed the light into one corner of the room and saw someone sitting in a steel chair, there head clamped to the chair, as Fiarce got closer, he saw it was Agas. She was in the worst state a human being could be in, she was finding it hard to breath, she was covered in blood, and it was a horrible sight to look at. Fiarce ran over to her, “Agas!” but as he got close a giant blade that also looked like a chainsaw blocked his path, a man then came out of the shadows, “hello, we meet again……” and Fiarce looked at him, it was Dominic.

 

 

 

 

Not bad, but too short for me to properly review

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The guys followed the pathway down into a chamber like room, they looked around it and all they could see was darkness, Fiarce turned on a torch and began to look for Agas and Dominic, he flashed the light into one corner of the room and saw someone sitting in a steel chair, there head clamped to the chair, as Fiarce got closer, he saw it was Agas. She was in the worst state a human being could be in, she was finding it hard to breath, she was covered in blood, and it was a horrible sight to look at. Fiarce ran over to her, “Agas!” but as he got close a giant blade that also looked like a chainsaw blocked his path, a man then came out of the shadows, “hello, we meet again……” and Fiarce looked at him, it was Dominic.

 

 

 

 

Not bad, but too short for me to properly review

 

I didn't want to spoil much, because this is going to be an intresting Chapter ;)

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[spoiler=Chapter 16: Your Ok Now.....]

 

The guys followed the pathway down into a chamber like room, they looked around it and all they could see was darkness, Fiarce turned on a torch and began to look for Agas and Dominic, he flashed the light into one corner of the room and saw someone sitting in a steel chair, there head clamped to the chair, as Fiarce got closer, he saw it was Agas. She was in the worst state a human being could be in, she was finding it hard to breath, she was covered in blood, and it was a horrible sight to look at. Fiarce ran over to her, “Agas!” but as he got close a giant blade that also looked like a chainsaw blocked his path, a man then came out of the shadows, “hello, we meet again……” and Fiarce looked at him, it was Dominic.

 

Fiarce backed away, Dominic gave an evil grin and stepped infront of Agas, he then pointed the blade at Fiarce. “I see you solved my riddles, im sorry they where easy but I was too impatient to wait for you….” He gave a chuckle as he said it, he then pressed the blade on Fiarce’s neck and was about to strike, but then suddenly, a katana blade struck Dominic’s blade, Dominic looked to his side to see that it was Kevin, Alex and Stephine standing behind him. Dominic grinned and lowered his blade away from Fiarce; he then quickly struck out at Kevin, but Kevin moved out of the way.

 

Dominic chuckled and got up; he then looked at Kevin and said, “It seems we can’t stay away from each other….” Kevin gave a sarcastic laugh and struck out at Dominic. Dominic clashed his blade with Kevin’s and began to fight, Kevin and Dominic tried and tried to hit each other but kept on failing, Dominic then stopped and looked at Kevin with a serious look, he then quickly turned around to see Agas wasn’t in the steel chair, he then looked around to see the guys weren’t there either. He pushed Kevin out of the way and ran up the steps to the top of the building.

 

Once he got to the top, he saw the door was open; he sighed and then suddenly shouted out, “DAMN YOU FIARCE MIHARU!” He then turned around to face Kevin who was coming up the stairs. “We let them get away….” He then began to walk down back to the chamber. “We? You mean you!” Dominic then stopped and faced Kevin, he then just sighed and walked into the chamber, Kevin followed.

 

-- Back at the inn --

 

Fiarce and the guys had run back to there room and locked the door behind them. Fiarce layed Agas on the bed and kneeled beside her, “Agas? Agas can you hear me?” Agas just murmured some words and just layed still, Alex thought and said, “She’s finding it hard to breathe, she needs to relax, hot bath or something may help…” Stephine then looked at him and said, “yes, but in her state, she won’t be able to stay above the water, somebody’s going to have to help her….” Then Stephine and Alex both looked at Fiarce, Fiarce then sighed and picked up Agas, and walked to the bathroom.

 

After he closed the door, he sat Agas up against the bath and began to undress her. He first let her hair down, it was a flowing blonde and the only thing that wasn’t covered in blood on her, he then took off her tights, he looked at the wounds on her legs, he then looked into her eyes, “Agas…..” he then continued to undress her. Once he finished, he placed her in the bath and turned the tap on. Agas began to open her eyes fully and look at Fiarce. “Fiarce…..” Fiarce looked at her and smiled, “its ok, your safe now…..” he then began to wash her. Agas breathed calmly and looked at Fiarce, into his eyes. Fiarce then looked into hers, they then came towards each other, and kissed.

 

 

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