ragnarok1945 Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Yeah yeah I know that, I'm willing to wait it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Sorry for the other delay guys, my dad took us somewhere and when we got back he told me not to go on the laptop >.< Anyway, back to finishing Chapter 15! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 For hell's sake.. Chapter 15's taking a while, eh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Yes, and im sorry :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 No need to apoligise, as long as it's there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Im almost done, don't worry ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Good, I'm waiting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Im almost done' date=' don't worry ;)[/quote'] don't take TOO long, though I won't rush you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Im typing as fast as i can...... :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 typing good is better than typing fast in this case Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Okay, im finding it hard to make this chapter mean something, so sorry if its bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 I'll be the judge of that when it's up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Haha, good luck with that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 I'll be the judge of that when it's up Yes master :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 and in any case I probably won't say it's bad anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Okay, its almost done :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 All right, just let us know when it's up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 15: On The Right Track] Fiarce came back to the inn and went in; he took the guys upstairs and told them about the other realm. “So, you fought Kevin?” asked Alex, Fiarce nodded, “yep, and the way I beat him, he won’t show himself anytime soon…..” Fiarce then felt some pressure on the back of his head, he then heard the words, “move, I shoot.” He then recognised the sound of the voice, it was Kevin’s. Fiarce sighed and raised his hands, Kevin made him stand up, but Fiarce quickly reacted and flicked the gun out of Kevin’s hands. Kevin laughed and said, “You might have got me down in the other world, but this is the real world.” He then kicked Fiarce in the gut and throwed him to the floor. The guys went over to help Fiarce up; Kevin gave a evil grin and said, “Now, take me to Lady Constentine…..” The guys exited the hotel and began to look for the abandoned house; they eventually found directions to one on the outskirts of town. As they came close to the building, Kevin stopped them; they turned around and said, “What?” Kevin then said, “I recognize this place……” Stephine raised her eyebrow and just waited for someone to reply to what he said; Alex was the one to ask, “How?” Kevin looked at him and said, “None of your buisness…” they then continued walking. As they came to the door of the house, Kevin put his ear up to it, he could hear nothing. So he stood back then kicked the door down and walked inside. There was rotting walls and fungus everywhere, water was leaking from the ceiling and spiders and there cobwebs could be seen in every corner of the room. The guys walked around to see if they could find any secret rooms or anything that would help them. Kevin then came across a skull with a note on it; he picked it up and began to read it. Dear Friends of Miss Agas Constentine, It seems you’ve found me, but where am I you wonder? Well, that’s what you have to find out. I am going to tell you a story, and by reading that story you have to figure out the 3-digit code. Now, every time you get it wrong I won’t hurt Miss Constentine, I’ll kill her. I have put a jinx on her so every time I kill her she comes back to life and I can kill her again. So, for example, the first time you get it wrong, I’ll shoot her in the head, the second time you get it wrong, I’ll stab her in the heart, so every time you get it wrong the deaths will get worse and worse and worse, heres the story. I am an evil man; I used to be a helpful man. You see I worked for god as his adviser, but as soon as I disagreed with one of his decisions, he kicked me out of heaven. As I walked the earth, I thought of creating a realm of my own, so I did. Once I had my own realm I was feared by every human being on the planet. Some religions think I begged forgiveness from god and was let back in to heaven, some think im the darkest thing to ever exist. I have my own number, ring it I’ll probably answer, it is a 3-digit code, what is it? Good Luck, and one more thing, if Kevin is there, let him know if you get one wrong and I kill Miss Constentine, he loses the bet. Yours evilly, Dominic Jager Kevin then crumbled up the note and throwed it to the floor. Fiarce picked it up and read it with Alex and Stephine. They then sat down and thought, Kevin looked at them and said, “You better not get this wrong….” They looked at him and then just ignored him and continued to think. Alex came forward and said, “I know this, I learnt it ages ago….” He stayed silent and then clicked his fingers, “the devil! He used to be gods adviser and he has the 3-digit code 666, its 666!” the room then shook, then on the wall a pentagram showed and the wall opened up, Alex then turned to Fiarce and said, “ha! Not such an idiot now am I?!” Fiarce rolled his eyes and just walked into the passage way, the others followed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 The note almost began to remind me a little of Jigsaw for some reason. Anyways, you did great for the chap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Woot! Go Alex! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 oh yeah, also using 666 for the devil's code seemed a little...........TOO obvious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 erm...Kevin should have lost the bet as Alex got it wrong. the actual number of the devil is 616. Still it was a good chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Ooops, sorry, its just everybody has it as 666, no? thanks for your support everybody, its helped this FF alot :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 It true that people have it as 666 and i can't remember why they thought it was 666 but it is 616. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Oh well, we'll keep it as 666 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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