Soul Legacy Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Sorry, i forgot, im more worried about this FF ya know, and remember i own a shop and write SD, im very busy -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Well, it's okay. I can wait for as long as I like. As long as my sig arrives. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 It will :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 I'll be sure to keep an eye here when chap 13 comes up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Ok, but it might be awhile, sorry :( but it shall be up today.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Let's hope so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 You don't need to hope, you know ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Hehe, that's true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 13: The Mind Game] Fiarce came to the reception desk and asked the receptionist, “Excuse me, but do you know if there are any drafty, abandoned buildings around the area of St Ives at all?” The receptionist looked at him and gave him another one of those annoying smiles; she then walked over and said, “Yes, there’s one just on the outskirts of town…” Fiarce nodded in thanks and quickly ran out of the door, as he left, the receptionist quickly picked up the phone, pushed some numbers and said, “Yeah, it’s me, he’s here, and he’s on the move.” Fiarce exited the door and looked around, he didn’t feel right for some reason, his whole world was beginning to shrink, darkness was coming down the road. “What the?!” said Fiarce as he looked at the clouds of darkness coming closer and closer, every time it hit something it would disappear into complete darkness, like it never even existed. He began to back away as it came closer and closer, he then eventually ran, but he was too slow, even though he was fast, the darkness was faster. As he got sucked in, he could see nothing, absolutely nothing. He then eventually saw a shining light; he floated towards it and went inside. He then appeared in a white room. “Hello?” he shouted, he then got a reply, “hello Fiarce, came to play?” Fiarce answered back, “who are you?!” the voice laughed and replied, “Now now, don’t be rude….” A black hole then appeared under Fiarce and he fell into it, he was falling for what felt like, eternity. He looked around, seeing nothing, “what is this, a mind game?!” the voice chuckled again and said, “Well done genius….” Fiarce then stopped falling and landed on the road again. “Thank god, im back…..” he then ran back to the inn door, but he bounced straight off it, he got back up and pulled a dumb folded face, he picked up a stone and throwed it at the door, the rock bounced straight off and hit him straight in the face, forcing him to fall over. A man then came and stood over him, “you’re still in the game Fiarce….” The man then grabbed him by the throat and picked him up. Fiarce looked at the man and said, “I’ll ask again, who are you?” the man laughed and pulled down his hood, it was Kevin, “surprise…..” Fiarce clenched his fists and said, “Your not apart of this…….” Kevin laughed and shook his head, “oh contra, im a big part of this, my relatives are big enemies of Miss Constentine, and im seeing out to destroy her, that and me and Dominic made a bet to see who could kill her first, and it seems he’s winning…..” Fiarce’s face then went red with anger, “you bet who could kill her first! Are you barbarians or something?!” he then flung his fist out at Kevin, hitting him, sending him flying backwards. Kevin got back up and spat some blood out of his mouth, he then charged at Fiarce, Fiarce jumped out of the way and Kevin smacked into the hotel doors, sending him flying backwards again. “Remember, it’s an illusion…” said Fiarce with a cheeky grin. Kevin’s eyes went red and he took out his katana and smashed it into the ground. The ground began to shake and cracks began to appear, Fiarce moved out of the way of the cracks and slug his hand out at Kevin once again, but instead of hitting him, a ball of flames came out and hit Kevin instead. Fiarce looked at his hand and raised his eyebrow, he then realised Kevin was charged at him with his katana, he jumped and dodged. Kevin then began to get really angry, he cut the top side of his wrist and smashed the katana into the ground, another man then appeared behind Fiarce and smacked him to the ground, it was Samson. Fiarce got straight back up and dodged a punch from Samson, he then jumped up and kicked him in the face, he then grinned and said “I feel like im in the matrix!” he then swung around and punched Kevin in the face. He then was the only one who stood, he grinned and stood over Kevin, he then said, “Send me back….” Kevin looked at him and growled and clicked his fingers, and it all went white. Fiarce layed in the middle of the road, he then opened his eyes and sat up, he then looked around, he was back in the real world. He jumped up and shouted “im back! Im back!” he then realised that everybody was looked at him. He smirked and then thought “Alex! Stephine!” he then went inside the hotel and said, “Alex! Stephine! You never guess what’s…” he then saw that they were surrounded by troops, they all pointed there guns at him and he raised his hands, “this isn’t good…..” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 you know Soul, your kinda making my character sound rubbish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 See this is why I usually don't bother thinking a return to the real world is going to get a good reception anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 you know Soul' date=' your kinda making my character sound rubbish.[/quote'] I have to actually agree with him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 you know Soul' date=' your kinda making my character sound rubbish.[/quote'] Don't worry, im saving something big up for your character, so, this is just the beginning of his destruction ;) you still like the chapter, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 So are we talking house of cards type destruction here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 If i think what you mean, then yea :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Which isn't so hard to figure out, so I'll assume that's what you're planning anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 It is, damn it! :evil: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 no it's not. All you have to know is what happens when you remove a card from the house Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 you know Soul' date=' your kinda making my character sound rubbish.[/quote'] Don't worry, im saving something big up for your character, so, this is just the beginning of his destruction ;) you still like the chapter, right? Say what now? that doesn't sound so good. anyway it was an ok chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 why not? Setting up for destruction is good for the fic (unless it's to someone who doesn't deserve it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 but "the beginning of his destruction" sounds like he's going to die eventually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Not always. The continued suffering can be a fate worse than death, and that could be what is being aimed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 What i ment Fallen Hero is that hes about to do some destructive things..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Then he would need a much more fitting end for justice to be served Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 oh cool. I wonder what they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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