ragnarok1945 Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 ok Will your next update be later today? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Soul don't look at the response trust me on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 I looked: Soul Legacy' date=' not accepted. From what I have seen, the characters are copy-paste, dull and boring, and you write insanely long sentences.[/quote'] Why? WHY?! :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Don't feel bad. If he will not accept this one, simply write a sequel and see if he'll accept it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 F**K Nitton, as long as we are supporting it fic it's as good as being stickied Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 I gess so, but he probably still won't accept that, i think he just cannot accept diffrent peoples writing styles, he only accept ones that are like his writing styles, which i find stupid.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 That's how some people are Some are too uncomfortable to accept changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Yeah, well, lets put it aside shall we and get on with this fan fic :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 which I ask again, you going to put the next chap later today? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 F**K Nitton' date=' as long as we are supporting it fic it's as good as being stickied[/quote'] ^ i'm only going to repeat this once more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 which I ask again' date=' you going to put the next chap later today?[/quote'] yes :) F**K Nitton' date=' as long as we are supporting it fic it's as good as being stickied[/quote'] ^ i'm only going to repeat this once more. i saw, and i thank you for saying so :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 thats ok afterall if he can't accept different styles of writing then it's his own fault for not being able to adapt. also i haven't seen him write anything recently so he should really keep his mouth shut on how other people do their fics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Agree'd, now i MUST do the chapter before i get dragged away by GFXing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 ok you do that then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Agree'd' date=' now i MUST do the chapter before i get dragged away by GFXing[/quote'] that's good, means we'll get it today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Snippet anyone? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Oh man, I nearly forgot about this, sorry. :oops: I didn't really notice the chapter of the Bonus Chronicle, which I think is good. And I'm sorry you weren't stickied, once again, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Its ok, you can't win them all.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Yeah, I bet that if I put my fanfiction there, Nitton would not accept me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Oh well, hes just retarded O.O (jokeing) anyway, heres chapter 12: [spoiler=Chapter 12: What is it with the number 7?!] When the train finally arrived in St. Ives, Fiarce, Alex and Stephine got of the train. They went to the local inn and went to the main desk. “Excuse me…” asked Alex, “could we get some rooms please?” the woman looked up at him and smiled; she smiled at him with one of those receptionist smiles that really annoyed you. The guys smiled back with cheesy grins hoping they wouldn’t have to smile like that again. “Yes, you may have some rooms, how many?” Alex stopped smiling so he could speak, “two, one for me and my friend here and another for this beautiful young woman here” he said, Stephine couldn’t help but look away and blush, Fiarce just stood there and rolled his eyes. The receptionist turned to the wall and took two keys off the hooks; she then turned back to the guys and passed them the keys. “There you go, your room numbers are seven and one” Alex looked back at Fiarce with a suspicious look, Fiarce looked back at him and answered, “no, it doesn’t have any connection with the riddle….” He said. The receptionist raised a suspicious eyebrow and then grabbed a book from under the desk. “Please sign your names in the book please...” Alex stepped forward and signed his name, then Stephine did, and finally Fiarce. As he signed his name the receptionist grew a look of surprise, she then asked, “your Fiarce Miharu?” he looked up at her and said, “yes, why?” The receptionist went to the back room and came back out again with a letter, “we also do the mail service, and we have a letter addressed to a Mr. Fiarce Miharu…” Fiarce grew a look of seriousness and asked, “What’s the return address?” the receptionist looked on the back of the letter and shook her head, “there isn’t one….” Fiarce then took the letter, almost snatching it. He quickly opened the letter and looked at it, he then looked at Alex and Stephine and said, “It’s from him…” they then looked at each other with concerned faces. They went to there rooms and looked at the letter, which went something like this: Dear friends of Miss Agas Constentine, Congratulations on passing round 1, but you’re not out of the woods yet. With one riddle there is another, and with another riddle there is an answer. Now, this time, it is more crucial. If you get a wrong answer, I won’t just hurt her, I’ll shock her. What I mean by that is, every time I do something to her they did to her in the past, she will get a sudden compulsion that will make her heart race like a jackhammer, which as we all know, isn’t good. Anyway, down to buisness, heres your riddle: In a cold building, there sits a man, with that man, is a woman. That woman has 5 cuts and 10 bruises. The man has no cuts or bruises, but he does have 3 scars and a birth mark. Add all those numbers up and divide it by 3, what is the answer? Good luck, Dominic Jager Alex laughed and said, “Easy, three!” he then thought for a second, and then said, “Wait!” then Fiarce’s phone vibrated. He closed his eyes and took it out of his pocket; it was a voice mail from Dominic, he flicked the phone up, the message said, “Wrong!” then a sudden scream could be heard, it was Agas, in even more pain. Dominic put his phone away and whacked Alex around the head, “idiot!” he then sighed and sat down. Stephine then snapped her fingers, “seven!” Fiarce then got a text from Dominic saying Correct he then quickly ran to Stephine and high fived her, Alex did the same. They then stopped and thought, “where could he be though…..” said Alex, Fiarce looked at him and said, “in a cold, abandoned building I guess….” Stephine then added, “Im thinking why there are so many sevens involved….” Fiarce just answered, “Probably a coincidence, now, lets see if there’s any abandoned building’s in St. Ives, theres bound to be a few…..” he then walked to reception, the others followed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Haha, thanks for making my character a complete idiot. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 I think you mean, Fiacre put his phone away and whacked Alex <. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Yeah... Don't forget number 1, there was also the rooms for 1 and 7 I think, and answer to the first one was 1, again I think. Maybe, an address? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Yeah... Don't forget number 1' date=' there was also the rooms for 1 and 7 I think, and answer to the first one was 1, again I think. Maybe, an address?[/quote'] Your along the right lines my friend! :D I think you mean' date=' Fiacre put his phone away and whacked Alex <.<[/quote'] Basically, yeah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Yay, I was right. Also, what's with FIacre's eyes rolling, is he jealous ;):lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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