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Dang' date=' almost did they kiss, almost!! :cry:

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I Know!, and hows chapter 1?

 

also guys, my other computer is having virus problems at the moment, but me and my dad are fixing them, so the part 2 should be up, even though it might be late..........

 

That's fine with me, as long as we're not talking waiting a whole month or something........

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Its Ok, Heres Part 2!

 

[spoiler=Chapter 11 (Part 2) - The Torture Chamber]

In an unknown building, somewhere in the world, which we don't know where yet, Dominic stood, in a cold and metallic building, he was looking at a door; he then walked over and opened it. There was a set of stairs going underneath the building, underground. He walked down the steps into a corridor; he walked down the corridor, and as he did, got out a knife. He then came to another door that had a padlock on it, it was a 3 number combination lock, and he smirked and put in the numbers 666 he then stood back.

 

The door then began to glow and a pentagram showed, a dark noise then echoed down the corridor, the door then opened and Dominic walked in. Inside was a woman tied to a steel chair, her head fixed to the chair by a steel vice, blood stains trickling down her head, it was Agas. He smirked and walked over to her, “how does it feel to be alive again hmmm?” he said, Agas looked up and him and didn’t reply, she just gave him a deadly glare.

 

He shook his head and said, “come now, that’s know way to act towards someone, didn’t you learn any manners when you where alive the first time?” he said with an evil grin, Agas tried to retaliate but couldn’t move, he laughed and got closer to Agas. He bent down to her legs and placed his hands on her injuries that she suffered from her torture, “if you won’t speak, I’ll have to make you make some noise…….” He then grasped the iron nails and ripped them out of Agas’s legs, she screamed in tremendous pain; Dominic dropped the iron nails on the floor and stood up again.

 

He looked into her face, which was crying with tears of pain, he then took the knife and lightly pressed it against her face, he then whispered in her ear, “there’s more pain where that came from…” and slashed the knife across her cheek, cutting it, she flinched. He wiped his finger across her cut, he looked at the blood on his finger and smirked, he then took a piece of bloody cloth out of his back pocket and wiped his finger on it, he then chucked to Agas, “here, take your blood back……” he then laughed evilly and left.

 

Agas, trying to stay conscious after losing so much blood, looked around, the room was getting blurry, and she even thought she was seeing things near the end. She saw people laughing at her, they where dressed in 18th century clothing, she then realised, she was seeing her result of being accused a witch all over again, she began to cry more a little, then eventually, drifted off unconscious.

 

Meanwhile

 

The train had finally arrived, Fiarce, Alex and Stephine got on and sat down, they looked out of the window at the platform, Alex sighed and said, “This is turning into one hell of a holiday…..” Fiarce looked at him and said, “You’ve said it…..” Stephine then said, “uhh guys, wasn’t he frozen…” she said pointing out of the window to a person on the platform, it was Kevin, he was looking straight at them, Fiarce noticed and tried to ignore him, but he looked again to see him gone, he sighed and told Stephine, “just ignore him, it was probably are imagination…” the train then began to drive off, but the guys didn’t realise, that the people on the platform where looking on the top of the train, Kevin was standing on top of it, with an evil grin.

 

 

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