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The Ghost Chronicles[PG-16][Chronicle 2: Jacks London][Chapter 4 Up]

Soul Legacy

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Yes rangronok' date=' there will be more riddles, including codes to break, im an expert at codes in my school, but the school makes them pretty easy......

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Then I suggest you look online more to make them harder to give the characters a challenge

 

Thats what im doing now........

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Thanks, here it is:

 

[spoiler=Chapter 11 (Part 1): Hours before the moment]

 

Fiarce put his coat on and ran to the side of the road and whistled, “Taxi!” he shouted at the top of his voice, then one stopped right infront of him, he opened the door and got in. Alex and Stephine ran up to the taxi and looked into the window at Fiarce, “so where going to St. Ives?” Stephine asked, Fiarce nodded, “correct” Alex then began to open the door, “well let us in then” Fiarce quickly stopped him from opening the door and told him, “no, get your own taxi!” he said in a cheeky tone, he then told the driver, “to the train station, and step on it!” the driver nodded and drove off without Alex and Stephine. They watched the taxi go then quickly called the next taxi that was coming.

 

When Fiarce arrived at the train station, he paid the taxi driver and entered the station. He then booked three tickets to St. Ives, one for him, the others for Stephine and Alex; he then made his way to the tracks. The train was going to be another half an hour, so he sat down on the bench, and began to think back to just hours before Agas’s kidnapping.

 

3 nights ago: 3 hours before Agas’s kidnapping

 

Agas and Fiarce sat outside at the back of the house, they where looking at the stars together and Fiarce was telling Agas the constellations, Agas then brought herself to ask, “why are you a DIY and Design specialist yet you know so much about science?” Fiarce looked at her and answered, “I did try to run for a science degree, but I wasn’t accepted….” Agas then patted him on the back, “oh well, you can’t win them all….”

 

Fiarce looked at her with a smile and looked into her eyes, even though they were red and lifeless, in some way, he still found them beautiful. Agas was looking into his eyes, she couldn’t resist his either, they were beautiful as well. Agas gave a smile and closed her eyes, Fiarce did the same thing. They began to lean forward towards each other, there lips were about to meet, but at the last second Fiarce pulled away and Agas did the same, they opened there eyes and tried to act like it had never happened.

 

Today

 

Fiarce sighed and still waited for the train, he then noticed Alex and Stephine coming, he pulled out there tickets and held them back, they came onto the platform and saw him on the bench, they walked over and took the tickets and sat next to him, they were both panting, “thanks for that….” Said Alex in a sarcastic tone.

 

 

 

now i know it isn't long, but it is part 1, part 2's longer...........

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