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The Ghost Chronicles[PG-16][Chronicle 2: Jacks London][Chapter 4 Up]

Soul Legacy

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[spoiler=Character 4 Bonus. =P]

Name: Zaphirus

Age: 18

D.O.B: 10/24/1992

D.O.D: 3/13/2012

Sex: Male

Personality: When in a good mood, he is generous and hardworking. But in a bad mood, he is more lazy, self-centered and cutting, and dark-minded.

Bio (Detailed): When he grew up, he was into Hip-Hop like his twin sisters, until the day came. One of his crushes rejected him in a way that changed his life forever. He now promises to never get a girlfriend in his life, he listens to heavy metal, and his social life shattered. He is now starting to question life and why existence exists.

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[spoiler=Character 4 Bonus. =P]

Name: Zaphirus

Age: 18

D.O.B: 10/24/1992

D.O.D: ???

Sex: Male

Personality: When in a good mood' date=' he is generous and hardworking. But in a bad mood, he is more lazy, self-centered and cutting, and dark-minded.

Bio (Detailed): When he grew up, he was into Hip-Hop like his twin sisters, until the day came. One of his crushes rejected him in a way that changed his life forever. He now promises to never get a girlfriend in his life, he listens to heavy metal, and his social life shattered. He is now starting to question life and why existence exists.

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Thanks Blud, but could you PM it to Enrise so he can accept it, he probably will

 

 

 

Thanks' date=' yeah, im not used to action, and one more question, do you think this has a chance of getting sticked?

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Let's put it this way: I'll remain a devoted fan to this fic either way, and if what I'm doing will help it get stickied, I'll be happy to help

 

Cheers bud, means alot :)

 

 

It was very good but which side of his wrist did Kevin cut exactly?

 

Does it matter?

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Ok, im going to do chapter 10 tommorow, as always ;)

 

It was very good but which side of his wrist did Kevin cut exactly?

 

Does it matter?

 

yes because if it cut his vein he will bleed a lot and not to mention that he is now immobilised by one of Dominic's spells so he could actually bleed to death. thats why i'm asking.

 

Calm down, why would i do it on purpose, it doesn't even have to have every single piece of physics, and no, he didn't cut a vien, happy?

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Nevermind:

 

[spoiler=Chapter 10: The Start Of The Journey]

 

Fiarce rushed into the front room and grabbed a piece of paper, he then began to draw what he saw of Dominic’s appearance, the guys looked over his shoulder, dumb folded, Alex then brung himself to ask, “why are you drawing him?” Fiarce then looked back at him and replied, “because then, next time we see him we can grab him!” Stephine shook her head and said, “I don’t think we’ll be seeing him for some time…” Fiarce after hearing that began to go read with rage again, he then throwed the piece of paper into the fire and said, “your right, he’ll probably be too scared to show his face again……”

 

Three Days Later

 

It was morning, Fiarce was outside the back with a notebook writing down some information, and he was using this notebook to figure out if there was anywhere Dominic could have gone with Agas. He sighed and closed the book and put the pencil down next to it, he walked back into the house and began to make a cup of coffee, his phone then began to vibrate, he took it out of his pocket and also picked up his cup of coffee, he read the text and dropped his cup, so it smashed on the floor.

 

“Guys! Get down here now!!!” he shouted up the stairs, they rushed down and asked “what?” he pointed the phone at them and they took it and looked at the screen, and read the text, which was this:

 

 

Dear friends of Miss Agas Constentine,

 

You all know I have the woman, but to get her, you have to come and find her. I will give you riddles and questions that you answer to get the next step of your journey, I am watching you while you’re on your journey, and every time you get a riddle or question wrong, I will hurt Miss Constentine even more. Now, your first riddle is below, so good luck, you’re going to need it….

 

 

I was on my way to St. Ives, when I met a man with seven wife’s, each wife had a sack full of seven cats that each had seven kittens, how many where going to St. Ives?

 

 

 

The guys pulled straight faces and passed the phone back to Fiarce, Fiarce took the phone and ran back into the garden, he grabbed the notebook and opened it to a blank page, he wrote down the riddle and sat in deep thought, Alex thought as well and then said with a confused tone, “seventy?” the phone then vibrated again and Fiarce looked at the text, it said wrong! he then slammed the phone on the ground and continued to think.

 

Stephine snapped her fingers and said, “seven hundred!” the phone vibrated again, Fiarce crossed his fingers and read the text, once again it said, wrong! he put it down again and continued to think. Alex and Stephine then prepared to say something together, but Fiarce quickly turned around and said to them, “don’t you dare!” then they both stopped and stood quiet. Fiarce sat there repeating the riddle in his head; he then stopped and screamed, “Yes! I’ve got it!” the guys rushed forward and went, “what? What?”

 

Fiarce turned around to them and said, “think, while I was going to St. Ives, he was going to St. Ives, him and his wife’s were going nowhere!, so the answers one!” The guys went “oh!” the phone then vibrated and Fiarce picked it up, he closed his eyes and crossed his fingers, he then opened the phone and read the text. Correct he smiled and jumped with joy and ran inside, he then stopped and turned around to face the guys again and said, “but where could he be……” he paused for a second, then had a cheeky grin, “St. Ives of course!” he then grabbed his coat and ran out the door, the guys quickly followed, but none of them had realised that Kevin’s frozen body, had moved.

 

 

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