Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Nah, the next chapter might have abit more action, but yeah, still there will be romance ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 so who's gonna attack then. Is it Dominic, Kevin or both?:twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 You'll see...... :evil: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Nah' date=' the next chapter might have abit more action, but yeah, still there will be romance ;)[/quote'] That's good. You going to create more couples similar to them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Ok im writing chapter nine now, i was at county athletics, so i couldn't write it straight after school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 that's fine, I look forward to it Especially if you're going to make more romance in it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Well, its more action, im trying to fit romance in, but thats hard, i can fit some emotion of love in, but im not sure if i can make it pure romance, if you know what i mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 well I never said anything about PURE romance I had a feeling you couldn't do that (few people can), so I'll adjust for the action Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Alright then, the arguments has to go. Let Soul Legacy write his thing and let him do as he wants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Ok, anyone want a little snippet before i post it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 A snippet? I'm okay for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 fine with me, as long as it leaves us desperate for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Ok, here you go: [spoiler=Snippet] Night had came, most of the guys had gone to bed due to the fact they didn’t get much sleep the night before, but Agas was still up, well, she didn’t need to sleep, she was a ghost after all. She spent most of her time walking up and down the hallways, like any other normal ghost would do, she ended up picking up a book and reading it, it was Animal Farm by George Orwell, she was given it as a gift from a guest that stayed in the house when it was published in 1945. She had already read it twice, but she loved the book so much she wanted to read it again, now it sounded like a children’s book, but it was a adult book strangely enough. She read the first page then heard a knock at the door, she put the book down and walked towards the door, she thought to herself, “who would be here at this time of night?” she then opened the door. A man stood in the doorway with an evil grin on his face, she stepped back and asked the man with a serious tone, “who are you and what do you want?” the man looked up at her and answered, “My names Kevin Green, and im here to kill you….” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 pffffft. Real great greeting. Just throw away the element of surprise in killing right off the bat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Ok, anyway, better finish the chapter....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 sure, I just hope it's up soon enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Im on the last paragraph........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 good, then I look forward to reading it And take your time, Soul Legacy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 i like the snippet, sounds like it's going to have a lot of action in this chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 I'm not so convinced. Soul Legacy may simply have that at the END of the chap and the action is next chap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 well i'm going to trust that Soul has that more at the begin than at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 9: Leave, Now......] Night had came, most of the guys had gone to bed due to the fact they didn’t get much sleep the night before, but Agas was still up, well, she didn’t need to sleep, she was a ghost after all. She spent most of her time walking up and down the hallways, like any other normal ghost would do, she ended up picking up a book and reading it, it was Animal Farm by George Orwell, she was given it as a gift from a guest that stayed in the house when it was published in 1945. She had already read it twice, but she loved the book so much she wanted to read it again, now it sounded like a children’s book, but it was a adult book strangely enough. She read the first page then heard a knock at the door, she put the book down and walked towards the door, she thought to herself, “who would be here at this time of night?” she then opened the door. A man stood in the doorway with an evil grin on his face, she stepped back and asked the man with a serious tone, “who are you and what do you want?” the man looked up at her and answered, “My names Kevin Green, and im here to kill you….” Agas clenched her fists and prepared herself for any strikes and replied, “Im going to warn you now, I am not a force to be…” she then stopped and recognised the face, she had a flashback of Samson Green and his smile, she had then realised that they were related. Kevin walked into the house and grinned; he then looked at her and said, “You remembering Samson? Well, I guess you want to meet him again….” Kevin then drew his katana and cut his wrist, the katana started to glow and got more ghostly by the second, he then swung the katana around and a beam of light shot past Agas and onto the floor, Agas sighed and turned around to face a ghostly version of Samson, he looked up at her without a grin, “hello Agas…………….” Agas smirked and replied, “hello Samson…” she then got in position to fight, Samson laughed and two balls of flame appeared in his hands, he throwed them at Agas but she dodged, she then closed her eyes and clicked her fingers and armour started to appear around her, then a red visor covered her eyes, “I learnt that trick from a friend..” Agas then charged at Samson, and caught his fist and punched him in the face, he staggered back and looked back up at her with evil blood-shot eyes, he then quickly reacted by punching her in the gut, making her fly backwards. She got back up and brushed off any shattered vase or glass that she had hit, she then charged back at him, he tried to throw another fire ball at her but she caught it and throwed it back, he got hit by it and staggered once more, he then really got angry and screamed, “YOU SHALL BURN!!” he then charged at her again. Alex, Stephine and Fiarce came racing down the stairs, “what the hell?!” shouted Fiarce, Samson gave him a deadly stare and tried to punch him, but he quickly ducked and rolled out of the way. Agas punched him in the face and he fell to the floor, Agas held him down by putting her foot on his neck, she grabbed a sword off the mantel in the hallway, she held it to his head, “leave, now!” Samson disappeared and Kevin laughed, he then said, “Sorry, times up…” Agas then took her helmet off and gave a sarcastic grin, she then pointed the sword at Kevin, “I will say it again, leave!!” Kevin connected his blade with Agas’s, he prepared to lunge the sword into her chest but he suddenly froze, Agas raised her eyebrow and took the sword away, Kevin fell over like he was frozen, another man stood behind him, “freeze spell, he’ll be like that for awhile…” Agas held her sword up again, “who are you?!” the man chuckled and answered, “Dominic Jager, and im here to kill you?” Agas suddenly said, “What is this! National kill Agas day?!” Dominic chuckled again and replied, “Funny, but that won’t stop me killing you…” then suddenly he shot a blue ball out of his hand, it hit Agas sending her flying backwards, the guys rushed over to her to see that her skin had turned back to normal; she had been turned human again. Dominic walked over to her; the guys stopped him and said, “You’re not going anywhere…” Dominic shook his head and chuckled, “am I not?” he then jumped over the guys and grabbed Agas, he waved and said, “Toddles…” and clicked his fingers, disappearing. Fiarce went red with rage and punched his fist into the wall, “damn it!!!” he then sighed with grief and sat down on the chair, stressed out of his mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 well it didn't end up killing Agas. Simple conversion back to human form. Not to mention no one said if it's permanent anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 But did you like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 oh yeah, it was among your best ever. 9.5/10 (mainly because the action was less than what I expected) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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