Soul Legacy Posted April 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Glad to hear :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 So should we expect it up by today, or at least later this weekend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Im sorry for the big delay guys, yes i PROMISE you tommorow it will be up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 I suggest you prepare the evidence of your own kidnapping then Just in case it's not up by tommorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 I'll look at the next chapter, then. When I wake up and get my new laptop! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 good for you, Omega Me I stuck with a desktop because they're more stable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 What's taking you so long to write up the next chapter!? Man, me iz getting bored.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Please man be patient, ive got so much presure on me right now, because im beggining to change from year 8 to year 9, and its not as easy as it sounds....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 This is exactly the reason why I asked if it'll be up THIS WEEKEND, and not today. It makes things easier for you as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Its saturday today and i am definatly posting it today, and ive edited the first post, take alook! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 which I already did. Just as soon as the chap is ready, announce it here (and not the 1st post) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 What, so you mean post the 7th chapter on the next post and not to put it in the first post and tell you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 exactly, I just got used to that style. Either that or you can just PM me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Nah, thats a good idea, i think i won't be able to put anymore into the first post after awhile because theres going to be too many words in it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 that's another thing, Soul Legacy. Each post only allows so many words. If you make this fic have TOO many chaps, you'll eventually have to modify your posts after the 1st because you'll get cut off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Ok, i'll post chapter 7 in my next post, not on the first post :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 ok then I'll be sure to check your 2nd post for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 No, i mean the next post i post :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 oh sorry I misread that part Well either way it'll make things easier for many of us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 It sure will, im posting it in a sec... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Glad to see you finally got all the bugs edited out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Hooray, then I'll read it as soon as you post it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 7: Evil Is In All] Dominic saw Kevin from the tree sleeping against the chimney, he shook his head and sighed, “Not the best way to start a bet…” he thought, he then concentrated back on the guys in the manor, he saw them talking, he wasn’t that good at reading lips, but he had a device that could help him. He pulled out a hearing device from his pocket and attached it to his ear; it was specifically designed to hear through any material. He turned it on and listened to them inside. Inside the guys were talking, “I enjoyed last night Agas, thank you…” Stephine said, Agas smiled and replied, “Your welcome, by the way, what was the problem with Alex last night?” Stephine shrugged, “no idea….” She then smiled and left the room. Agas smiled and sat back down at the table, her face to the window, she was looking at the blue sky and wondered, “I wonder why humans never admire the sky anymore….” she then took a quick glimpse at the tree, not noticing Dominic, but then she took a better glimpse and realised him. Dominic thought to himself, “sh*t!” and stayed still, Agas sighed and shook her head, “stupid media….” And left the room, Dominic laughed and said to himself, “stupid ghost….” Dominic took the device off his ear and put it back into his pocket, he jumped down from the tree and landed on his feet, he then walked around the house to the ladder. He looked up it and smirked, he took a deep breath and jumped up onto the ladder and began to climb. When he got to the top he noticed Kevin was still asleep and looked around, he saw a loose tile, rope that would have been used by the real media to dangle from the roof to look into the window and some huge branches from the tree that stood over the house. Dominic ripped out the loose tile and some more, he then lodged the branches into the space that was left and rapped the rope around them, he had made a catapult. Now, it seemed abit useless having a catapult on top of a building, but Dominic wanted to have some fun, but not nice fun, he aimed the catapult at Kevin and loaded it with the loose tiles, and pulled back the rope. He smirked and thought, “might as well get a head start…” and was about to let go until a raven flew infront of his face making him fire in a completely different direction. Kevin woke up to see Dominic with the raven in his hands, he saw him rip the ravens head off and throw it to the ground. Kevin got his katana and stood up, Dominic realised he had woke up and stood up as well and got out his sword, Kevin sighed and shook his head, “lets save this fight till later hmm?” and put his katana away and jumped off the roof, Dominic looked down and watched him leave, he clenched his fist, he then swung his sword around and hit the catapult he had made, destroying it. He took some deep breaths then jumped down to the ground and walked back to the front of the house, he put his sword away and looked down at the raven that was surrounded by a pool of its own blood, he then looked at the wall and then back at the raven once again, he dipped his fingers in the blood and looked at them, he then looked once again at the wall and smirked. After Dominic had done what he had done, he climbed back up the tree and looked at it, he began to laugh evilly. On the wall he had used the ravens blood to write, YOUR BEAT SHALL END AT MY HANDS MISS CONSTENTINE!!!! Dominic then layed back in the tree, thinking of what he would do to Agas tomorrow…….. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Nice chapter, but for the last two chapters you keep the story mostly to Fenrir and Fallen Hero's character, I would've wanted more Alex X Stephanie time ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 It was a good chapter but it was actually more Fenrir's character's chapter but i'm not complaining Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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