The Ghost Chronicles[PG-16][Chronicle 2: Jacks London][Chapter 4 Up]

[ragnarok1945]

no no, everything else I liked it.

 

Just that the length was slightly shorter than I expected.

[Soul Legacy]

I promise to make the next chapter longer, the reason it was short was because i was playing on GIMP and ended up making a Gyft for Enrise. ;D

[ragnarok1945]

ok that's fine.

 

For the most part it's ok with the length compared to your Dark Knight fic (which the chaps I felt were WAY too short, but I never raised the issue with you)

[Soul Legacy]

Thats ok, you should have really, and i might have made it longer.......

[Chaotic Angel]

True.. You shoulda..

[Enrise]

I promise to make the next chapter longer' date=' the reason it was short was because i was playing on GIMP and ended up making a Gyft for Enrise. ;D

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You called? ;)

[ragnarok1945]

Thats ok' date=' you should have really, and i might have made it longer.......

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I learned to respect other people's intentions (since by that time I didn't not fully understand your style yet)

 

That's why I stayed silent

[Soul Legacy]

I promise to make the next chapter longer' date=' the reason it was short was because i was playing on GIMP and ended up making a Gyft for Enrise. ;D

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You called? ;)

 

I did, i gave you the gyft because you are a RP buddy who made me a great member, and who made Agas a great character :)

[Enrise]

Careful, be sure to watch Rokujo and Fiacre, they might take her from me.

[Soul Legacy]

They better not, or i'll delete her link, so she will dissapear forever! :evil:

[ragnarok1945]

Are you almost done with the next chap yet Soul Legacy?

 

While there's no rush, it'd be nice to have some idea.

[Fallen Hero]

Are you almost done with the next chap yet Soul Legacy?

 

While there's no rush' date=' it'd be nice to have some idea.

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same as the above. also what's happening with the RP

[ragnarok1945]

You can ask the RP to him via PM, Fallen Hero.

 

Here is for fic alone

[Fallen Hero]

ragnarok, shut the hell up. I might as well ask as i'm already asking a question as it is.

[fenrir]

ragnarok' date=' shut the hell up. I might as well ask as i'm already asking a question as it is.

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We have some hostility here do we?

 

Anyways, I didn't particularly like the chapter, and you're constantly straying from our character's personalities.

[ragnarok1945]

it's his fic, let him stray away from the personalities for now.

 

He can probably tied it back up in future chaps anyway

[Fallen Hero]

I was only a bit hostile because ragnarok was whining about some formality and I don't see the point in mentioning it on the RP seeing as it is Soul who should be posting next on it and if he hasn't paid any attention to it till now, i'm probably better off asking on something he does reply on.

 

anyway fenrir is kinda right. why ask about what your character's personality is, if your not gonna follow it.

[fenrir]

it's his fic' date=' let him stray away from the personalities for now.

 

He can probably tied it back up in future chaps anyway

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What's the point in suggesting a character if they can't use the character properly?

 

That's like giving someone a sniper when they can't hold the damn thing steady for their life.

[ragnarok1945]

Sometimes you have to stray away from what we wanted for a little while in order to piece the story together, Fenrir.

 

As a writer you should know that. If you then piece it back the way you do want it later on, it can be overlooked

[fenrir]

Sometimes you have to stray away from what we wanted for a little while in order to piece the story together' date=' Fenrir.

 

As a writer you should know that. If you then piece it back the way you do want it later on, it can be overlooked

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Still no.

 

As I writer I stick to the suggested characters personality. If I don't, I disappoint my readers, and it shows I'm not a good writer.

[Fallen Hero]

Fenrir is right plus if he knew he wasn't going to follow the personalities we picked for our characters, he should of played it safe and not ask that on the character application.

[ragnarok1945]

You can't always get want you want in fics, Fallen Hero.

 

That is why every now and then there will be chaps that stray from it

[fenrir]

That was off topic.

 

The point is that you shouldn't stray from personality if you asked for one. There is no excuse for it.

[ragnarok1945]

So you've never heard of extenuating circumstances?

 

I admit he probably should have PMed you about it, but still

[Soul Legacy]

That was off topic.

 

The point is that you shouldn't stray from personality if you asked for one. There is no excuse for it.

 

Right, Im f*cking 12 years old, im not like you, and i find it hard to remember everything, and i find it hard to type, and im disabled. And anouther thing, if you had to live my life, no ofense, but you wouldn't last 12 f*cking hours, let alone 1, out of the constent nagging of the docters, people destroying my life, its not easy, so if you don't like it, tough, im trying as best i can......