Jovi Siagian Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 [spoiler=Well, I've been making few boosters, and I've been bored because I don't know what to improve (not because my boosters are flawless, which are not). So I decided to make a new item, a tin. Yes, it's far from great. So that's why I posted it here, so you guys can help me improve it. Especially Dark Rose or con.][align=center]Render by Blood RoseTech Circle belongs to con.As usual, Cnc/Hate/Rate/Leave[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Dude that is pretty bad ass, Nice job Jovi! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Dude that is pretty bad ass' date=' Nice job Jovi![/quote'] Wow, thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Can I get the PSD for this? Its really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 EPIC WIN/1 That is is so bad butt! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 If I recall, a few weeks ago you said you failed at GFX? You wish;) Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
•:Elonar:• Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Definetly false, it is very nice! Only issue I have is the text, but I can't figure out what it is. Again, good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Can I get the PSD for this? Its really good. Thank you' date=' and I'll post the .psd maybe when I've perfected this. EPIC WIN/1 That is is so bad butt! Thank you. If I recall' date=' a few weeks ago you said you failed at GFX? You wish;) Nice job.[/quote'] Really? And thanks Definitely false' date=' it is very nice! Only issue I have is the text, but I can't figure out what it is. Again, good job![/quote'] That's what I see in few tins. I've re-searched few tins' images via Google and every 5D's Tin I found have that kind of text, white text with little opacity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smeg Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 That is truely good. Maybe get rid of 2 of of those stars, it makes it look un-realistic. And face-it Judgment dragon will never be in a tin. ;( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Can I get the PSD for this? Its really good. Thank you' date=' and I'll post the .psd maybe when I've perfected this. [/quote'] Woah woah woah.....it already is perfected!!! .PSD plz. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 'Eh looks good. A few problems:Judgement Dragon should barely be covered by the smaller one (I have no idea how to phrase that).It should be bigger.Remove the stars; it makes it look unrealistic.Tech circle seems misplaced. Still Sexay though ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 It looks fine..... Although a little unrealistic but wut eva.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboJoe Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 *Gasp* I'd waste my money to buy a tin like that, even though it may never happen. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 That is truely good. Maybe get rid of 2 of of those stars' date=' it makes it look un-realistic. And face-it Judgment dragon will never be in a tin. ;([/quote'] I planned not to add the stars, since the real tins don't have any stars. But If I didn't add them, it'd look empty. So, yeah... Can I get the PSD for this? Its really good. Thank you' date=' and I'll post the .psd maybe when I've perfected this. [/quote'] Woah woah woah.....it already is perfected!!! .PSD plz. ;D In a good time. ;) 'Eh looks good. A few problems:Judgement Dragon should barely be covered by the smaller one (I have no idea how to phrase that).It should be bigger.Remove the stars; it makes it look unrealistic.Tech circle seems misplaced. Still Sexay though ;D Nah' date=' I want it this big.I've told y'all why I added the starsWhere should it be? Thank you. ;) It looks fine..... Although a little unrealistic but wut eva.... Thanks, I guess... *Gasp* I'd waste my money to buy a tin like that' date=' even though it may never happen. :([/quote'] You wish. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 'Eh looks good. A few problems:Judgement Dragon should barely be covered by the smaller one (I have no idea how to phrase that).It should be bigger.Remove the stars; it makes it look unrealistic.Tech circle seems misplaced. Still Sexay though ;D Nah' date=' I want it this big.I've told y'all why I added the starsWhere should it be? Thank you. ;)[/quote'] 1. K ^-^2. Yeah, add effects like the regular tins. =\ IDK, if that's possible, but =\3. It's in the middle. It should be more off to the side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 http://www.da-planet.com/store/Images/products/ygo/tins/stardusttin.jpghttp://www.da-planet.com/store/Images/products/ygo/tins/reddragontin.jpg Locate where the Tech Circles are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Just looked at the tin I was using for reference. My eyes must be messed up @_@ Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkskeleton Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 OMG! thats is one of the best tins i ever seen! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 OMG! thats is one of the best tins i ever seen! Really? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Bad Ass! Awesome tin! Can I have .psd? I'll change it to .xcf by myself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Bad Ass! Awesome tin! Can I have .psd? I'll change it to .xcf by myself? No. You may only request for .psd of this if:1. You give good CnC regarding this tin.2. You're my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Fine then:Jovi's Tin Mk.1:Overall, this tin is one of the best so far on YCM. The JD pic is fitted perfectly in the "sneak peek" box and the Tech Circle is just the right size. The render is very good quality and the tin lid looks realistic. The bad things are:The 5D's logo has too much glow and the render overlaps the box too much, it should be more to the right. Remove one or two of the sparkles as well. Overall, you can easily tell it's fan-made, but it's realistic enough to be a great tin.87/100 is my rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andinator Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Dude that is pretty bad ass' date=' Nice job Jovi![/quote'] At first i thought that you were not good at judging, cause i stopped reading it at "bad" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Nothing wrong with it! A perfect tin. =D-Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted April 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Fine then:Jovi's Tin Mk.1:Overall' date=' this tin is one of the best so far on YCM. The JD pic is fitted perfectly in the "sneak peek" box and the Tech Circle is just the right size. The render is very good quality and the tin lid looks realistic. The bad things are:The 5D's logo has too much glow and the render overlaps the box too much, it should be more to the right. Remove one or two of the sparkles as well. Overall, you can easily tell it's fan-made, but it's realistic enough to be a great tin.87/100 is my rating.[/quote'] Fine. And thanks Andinator, Lazer Yoshi ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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