Silent Omega Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 This fanfic is kind of like Yu-Gi-OH(But it's not...), you play cards and stuff.... I will update this soon.... [spoiler=[b]Prolouge[/b]] It was morning, the bright light of the sun pierced the window of the house, and made it’s a way to a young boy. He opened his eyes, and then stood up. He put on his clothes, a blue jean and a white T-shirt, complete with a black leather jacket. He walked down the stairs and remembered what his Parents had told him, “Don’t ever forget the cards…” . He was beginning to think, why were those cards so important? Do they have special powers? No…..they’re much rarer than that. He walked upstairs and grabbed the cards and put it safely inside his Jean pocket, then walked downstairs. He looked around, almost as if he was looking for somebody, but he lived alone ever since his Parents had died and left him the house. “Another day…another fight…” the boy finally said, then walked out the door. [spoiler=[b]Chapter 1: New Kid's Surprise[/b]] The young boy walked to an old school, he walked into the yard. He received glances from different people as he passed them, but he finally reached the front door and walked inside the old building. Inside, he looked around for the Principal’s office for five minutes until he found it and talked to the assistant. “Excuse me…I’m Alex Sparks…” the boy said, then gave her a slip of paper. The assistant nodded her head and gave him back the paper, “O.K just walk through that door…” Alex walked inside the office and sat in front of a table and behind the table was a fat man with blue eyes, a thick beard around his mouth and striped down from his ears. “So you’re Alex? The new kid?” the man asked. Alex nodded, the man smirked at him, “Then welcome to the Yoshito High School, you’ll feel welcome in here!” “Sir…I just need my Schedule….” The man smirked, “Alright, just so you know…my name is Principal Jack...I expect you to be in good behavior…” he handed him the schedule, which was written neatly on a sheet of paper. “Thank you…” ******************************************************************************************** Alex stopped at the class ‘5-209’ and knocked on the door. He was greeted by the math teacher, “Welcome...you must be Alex…” After introductions, Alex was seated at the back of the class, he felt everybody stare at him but he was as calm as ever. “Now, can anybody…” began the teacher, Alex was ignoring him of course his attention was turned at the window of the classroom. He looked at the sky, then it was almost a minute as the blue white clear sky then turned to a red-orange clear field. Alex walked out of the school and walked home, on his way he heard footsteps behind him. “Followers…of course…” he thought, he stopped and then the footsteps behind him stopped. He turned around and saw nothing, nobody was in sight but he kept looking. After a minute he continued walking, the other footstep(s) was continued. “Look...” Alex started, as he turned “Will you stop following me?” There was movement, then a young man about the same age as Alex walked near him, he had white silver hair, he was white and wearing a white T-shirt with blue jeans. “S-Sorry for following you” he stuttered, then smiled. He stretched his hand forwards, towards Alex. Alex looked at it, and then shook his hand. As they finished, Alex asked “Who are you?” “I’m…James Stevenson…but call me Jamie….” Alex nodded then looked at Jamie’s pocket, “You’re a Silver warrior…..” Jamie sighed in relief, “You’re one too?” “No…I wear a Dark Deck” “So…want to train?” “Maybe next time…” Alex walked away, and then came home; he sat at his bed and started to think. “Looks like this town’s not all bad. But there may be some ‘Glaciers’ or those other thieves…” he thought, “I’m surprised this town even has Aura Warriors” [spoiler=[b]Chapter 2: Lesson in Dueling part 1[/b]]Alex sat in bed; he decided to sleep a few minutes afterwards. ********************************************************************** Alex grabbed his jacket and put it on, and then walked downstairs. He had already grabbed the deck and put it on his pants, and was now walking to school. The same thing happened to School as yesterday and Jamie met up with Alex on his way home. “What do you want?” Alex asked. “We have to Train!!"C’mon!!” replied Jamie, he grabbed his deck. “No…” “Please?” “Alright…if you stop bugging me….” (Please pay attention! This is a lesson on how to duel!! ) Alex grabbed his deck, then his arm was disappearing, it seemed like small data fragments were replacing it. Soon, it was almost like a Duel- Disk, only it was like a glove with a slot for a deck upwards. He placed his deck in it, and he could see that Jamie had already done it. “Let’s go!” Jamie shouted. “Hmpf” scoffed Alex, his gloved arm, which looked like it was made from…metal, sent out a card. He grabbed it and turned it, “Go….Raven Warrior!!!” The card glowed, he threw it across and there was a bright flash of light, then…there was a man, he had a cloak on and he held a sword on his right hand. “Energy Card; Dark Blaze!” Alex shouted. The Raven Warrior’s Sword turned to fire; it looked fine to the Raven Warrior. Jamie smirked, “That’s not enough! Go! Angel of Light!!” There was a familiar burst of light and an angel appeared, he carried a spear and pointed it to the Raven Warrior. “Go! Energy Card; White burst!!” shouted Jamie. There was a bright flash of light, there was a stab then another stab, as the bright light cleared the Angel of Light had killed the Raven Warrior. “How do you like that?!!” replied Jamie. Alex smirked, “That was pretty good…considering you didn’t notice me put a Support card on Raven Warrior…” The dead Raven warrior that stood still at the ground, his blood splattered, was now regenerating. “Support Card; Undead Survival!” replied Alex. The Warrior smirked at the Angel of Light and slashed at him, “Support Card; Shield of Gods!!” replied Jamie, the sword that was swinged at Angel of light was broken by the shield. ************* [spoiler=[b]Chapter 3: Lesson in Dueling part 2[/b]]“Volcanus!!” shouted a voice; the two creatures disappeared in a flash of fire. Then a large, ugly, fire creature dropped down. It looked like the usual fire golem, only bigger and stronger. “What the?” Jamie started, “What is that?!!” “It’s my card!!” shouted a voice; a boy stepped up, about 15 years old. “I was waiting for someone to come and train…” “Fine, but let’s make this quick…” replied Alex. “Alright, Energy Card! Eruption!!” ‘Volcanus’ began to blaze, the fire surrounding him blew up and he looked larger. “Raven Knight!! Energy Card! Crow’s Wisdom! Support Card! Raven’s shield!” A Raven-man dressed in armor came to play, he grabbed the Raven Shield which was instantly transported to him, then gained the Crow’s Wisdom. “Crow’s Wisdom’s effect! Die Volcanus!!” Volcanus seemed to moan in pain, and then he lunged at Raven Knight. “Support Card! Darkness Sword!!” shouted Alex. Raven Knight grabbed the sword then slashed at Volcanus, Volcanus seemed to dodge it then…blood appeared from his chest, it flowed down slowly, then he fell down. The boy smirked, “You still haven’t seen my Ritual! Go, Fox Soldier! The Undead Fox! Fox Ninja! Ritual Card, Fox Knight!!” A Fox, dressed in armor appeared then faced Raven Knight. “You won’t win…” “Oh yeah? Let’s see you beat my Ritual!” “Support Card! Flock of Crow!!” There was screeching sounds, and then hundreds, maybe thousands, of crows flew in. They surrounded the Fox Knight; Raven Knight smirked as he held his sword ready. Then charged up at the Fox. ********************** “That was a good duel…” replied the boy, “By the way, I’m Saskusto…” “Alex…and this is…Jamie…” replied Alex, “You seem strong…” “But you’re stronger…” “That’s right!” replied Jamie, “Alex, of course, would be stronger!” Saskuto said goodbye then walked away, Alex looked at Jamie, “He’s strong…might even be a rival…” “Well…yeah he was strong…” “Are you kidding? He beat me with 1 simple move…” XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXPast “Support Card! Blazing Inferno!!” shouted Saskuto. Raven Knight, stopped, then he fell down. He felt a burning sensation in his body, then he disappeared in a cloud of data, he died. “How did you…” started Alex. “Easy…Blazing Inferno has the effect to destroy 1 normal monster card, then let’s me summon whatever card is at the top of my deck. Now, Go, Nine tailed Fox!!” The Nine tailed fox charged up at Alex then… XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXCurrent time “He might be in the Tournament, and if he is, I can’t afford to lose again…” replied Alex. “Tournament?” Jamie asked, “As in, the Champions Tournament?” “It starts Next month, by then I have to train hard and hopefully get new cards…” “You seemed used to yours…” “That’s not the point, If I keep losing like this, I won’t be able to enter the Tournament…You do know what the winner gets right?” “Yeah…Power, Fame, and Wealth…” [spoiler=Next chapter]Training? [spoiler=Character suggestion]Name:Age: ( I prefer if you have between 15-18 but you can raise it, but...the story takes place mostly about High School students)Personality:Appearance:Deck attribute:(Darkness, Light/Silver, Earth, Fire, Water, mix, etc) Monster Cards ( Mainly 5 cards )(( Monster cards do not have attacks, only the boost from Energy cards )){{{ PLEASE ONLY FILL OUT THE FORMS THAT YOU SEE AND FOLLOW THE INSTRUCTIONS IN THE () }}}[[ Since all of you do not know the cards used in battle, you may make up your own for now... ]] Name:Attribute: Name:Attribute: Name: Attribute: Name:Attribute: Name:Attribute: Energy Cards( Please explain the effect, or boost, clearly. Do not have anything too powerful ) Name:Attribute:Boost/Effect: Name:Atrribute:Boost/Effect: Name:Atrribute:Boost/Effect: Name:Attrribute:Boost/Effect: Name:Attribute:Boost/Effect: Support Cards Name:Attribute: ( If monster support)Effect: (If other) Name:Atrribute:Effect: Name:Attribute:Effect: Name:Attribute:Effect: Name:Attribute:Effect: Ritual Cards Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:(Numbers needed to sacrifice)Special Effect: (If any, just like an Energy card) Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:Special Effect: Fusion Cards Name:Attribute:Fusion formula: (Which monster + which monster = Fusion ? May be more than 2 cards )Fusion cards needed:(How many monster cards needed for Fusion)Special Effect: ( Just like the energy card) Name:Attribute:Fusion Formula:Fusion cards needed:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Fusion Formula:Fusion cards needed:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Fusion Formula:Fusion cards needed:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Fusion Formula:Fusion cards needed:Special Effect: [spoiler=The way it works pt 1]The way these cards work are: A monster card cannot defeat another card withput an energy card. Energy cards are given to Monster cards to boost their 'atttack' and temporarily give them moves. One boosted monster cannot defeat another boosted monster without the help from a Support card or another Energy card. DUELING Simply, when you duel you summon one card and give it an Energy card to boost it. This card can destroy another monster card that is not boosted but is only able to defeat another boosted monster with a Support "Droid" or another Energy card attached. So if I simplify it, it would be: Boosted Monster = Boosted Monster Mosnter + Energy + Energy > Boosted MonsterorBoosted Monster + Support monster > Boosted Monster Fusion and Ritual cards are powerful enough to defeat simple monsters, even if they are boosted. Fusion and Ritual have their own attacks and do not need Energy cards, but they are allowed to be given one. Once a fight between a Fusion and another Fusion, the winner depends whether one of the monster has an Energy card or... they both die in battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darisper Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 BRILLIANT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 One word to describe it? I might make a character suggestion spoiler, once I've told you guys the means of Energy Cards, Monster Cards, Support Cards, Ritual Cards, and Fusion Cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Nice fic! I like it, and can't wait to submit a char! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Great job! Finally, someone is thinking up NEW ways to make cards in fics. One problem in the Prolouge, he goes down the stairs twice, and doesn't go up the first time. But this sounds like it's gonna be really good! Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Thank you! I actually...forgot about that. Suggesring a character will have to wait until, Like I said, explained how Energy, Monster, Support, Ritual, and Fusion Cards.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Oh, ok! Can't wait to find out how that works then! Although I HATE complicated stuff... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 It's actually not that complicated. I'll tell you how each stuff works... A Monster card which is like any regular monster card is a monster that obeys it's user's commands. The Energy card is as boost for the monster card and has the ability to give the monster an attack. Energy cards only go with the one monster that has the same attribute.(Dark with Dark, Light with Light, etc) The Support card is a card which can either shield the monster or summon another monster called "Droids". These small support monsters though called "Droids" are actually mosnters. The Ritual Card is a card which is able to summon a very strong monster by sacrificing 3 or more monsters. The Fusion Card is a card which requires a perfect formula with monsters. It needs two or more monsters of the same LV. This is not all the details about it but it's enough... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Ok! As I said, can't wait to submit! *fingers twitches eagerly in front of the keyboard* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Character suggestion added! It took me forever to make it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Sounds awesome,can't wait for the next chapter.I'll try to make cards for your story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 I don't get it? Sorry, bit I can't submit...give me an example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 ... How do you play? I want to make a character but I cant yet until I know what you do exactly. Like what is overpowered and whats not? Name: NexevAge: 15Personality: He is really smart, usually shy. He is still stronger than most people give him credit. He usually sits alone eating his tuna sandwich, he gets scared easy but isn't a coward, if he sees a reason to overcome his fears he would.Appearance: Looks like Vexen but in his teens and with jeans, light blue t-shirt, and a black winter coat.Deck attribute:(Darkness, Light/Silver, Earth, Fire, Water, mix, etc) Water though it is more like Ice Monster Cards( Mainly 5 cards )(( Monster cards do not have attacks, only the boost from Energy cards )) Name: The Man under the IceAttribute: Water Name: The Chilly AcademicAttribute: Water Name: Chilling fearAttribute: Water Name: Dark WinterAttribute: Water Name: Snow FighterAttribute: WAter Energy Cards( Please explain the effect, or boost, clearly. Do not have anything too powerful ) Name: White ChristmasAttribute: WaterBoost/Effect: This card boosts the monster's attack. Name: Freezing PointAtrribute: WaterBoost/Effect: Decrease an oppenets monster's attack if you are using a water monster Name: Cruel FateAtrribute: WaterBoost/Effect: Your oppenet cannot activate Support card for this turn and the following one Name: ColdAttrribute: WaterBoost/Effect: Name:Attribute:Boost/Effect: Support Cards Name: HypothermiaAttribute: ( If monster support) Effect: If a water monster was destroyed, kill the monster who fought it. Name: CyromancyAtrribute: WaterEffect: Name:Attribute:Effect: Name:Attribute:Effect: Name:Attribute:Effect: Ritual Cards Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:(Numbers needed to sacrifice)Special Effect: (If any, just like an Energy card) Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Sacrifice-number:Special Effect: Fusion Cards Name:Attribute:Fusion formula: (Which monster + which monster = Fusion ? May be more than 2 cards )Fusion cards needed:(How many monster cards needed for Fusion)Special Effect: ( Just like the energy card) Name:Attribute:Fusion Formula: Fusion cards needed:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Fusion Formula:Fusion cards needed:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Fusion Formula:Fusion cards needed:Special Effect: Name:Attribute:Fusion Formula:Fusion cards needed:Special Effect: Finish later... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Name: BlahAge: ( I prefer if you have between 15-18 but you can raise it, but...the story takes place mostly about High School students)BlahPersonality:BlahAppearance:BlahDeck attribute:(Darkness, Light/Silver, Earth, Fire, Water, mix, etc) Water Monster Cards Name:Blah Attribute:Water Energy Cards( Please explain the effect, or boost, clearly. Do not have anything too powerful ) Name:BlahAttribute: WaterBoost/Effect: This card boosts the monster's attack. It allows to blah! Support Cards Name:BlahAttribute: ( If monster support) WaterEffect: (If other) Name:BlahAtrribute:Effect: This card can shield the mosnter from 1 (Atrribute) attack. Fusion Cards Name:BlahAttribute: WaterFusion formula: (Which monster + which monster = Fusion ? May be more than 2 cards ) Raven warrior + Raven Soldier = Raven CommanderFusion cards needed:(How many monster cards needed for Fusion) 2Special Effect: ( Just like the energy card) That help you? EDIT: Frohawk, I will post Chapter 2 soon, it will...give you a lesson? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 I know it helped me. I'll come back later and give you a character suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Chapter 2 up, It's a bit scratchy since I rushed on it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 ...Yeah but how much are the boosts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 I don't have no idea. JK, the boost? The boost is enough to beat the crap out of a regular monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Chapter good! I got it now, I believe...but I'll submit my char tomorrow... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Alright, by then at least I hope...Chapter 3 will be up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Yeah but one boosted monster could apparently beat another boosted one, can you just post the rules to this game that would make it easier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Maybe, I'm actually still working on that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Name:SaskutoAge:15Personality:Mature,Loyal,and trustworthy.Appearance:Deck attribute:Fire Monster Cards: Name:Fox NinjaAttribute:Fire Name:Nine Tailed WarriorAttribute:Fire Name:Fox SoliderAttribute:Fire Name:The Fox Magician Attribute:Fire Name:The Undead FoxAttribute:Fire Energy Cards: Name:Foxes RageAttribute:FireBoost/Effect:Boost all monsters with "Fox" in their names Atk. power. Name:Nine Tailed InfernoAtrribute:FireBoost/Effect:Increases "Nine tailed warrior"'s Atk. power. Name:Mage's TrainingAtrribute:FireBoost/Effect:Boosts "The Fox Magician"'s Def. power. Support Cards: Name:The Yellow FlashAttribute:FireEffect:(if other) Fusion Card: Name:Kyuubi-The Fox KingAttribute:FireFusion formula:Ninja Fox+Nine Tailed Warrior=Kyuubi-The Fox KingSacrifice-number:2Special Effect:Has its Atk. power boosted for every monster with "Fox" in its name on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 What about your Ritual card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Wait i screwed up...the ritual monster was supposed to be a fusion monster.Now I fixed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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