Umbra Posted April 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Fenrir, only one Reaper so far that hasn't been named is wearing a hood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 I realize that. But the other one that created the 'Feral' esque Noise caught me off guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 I at first got confused at who was who to >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted April 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Well, it shouldn't be that confusing if you think about who got there first. I can add a few sentences there to separate Kaito (srsly, you thought Kaito was Takashi?) from the other Reapers. Both of the accepted characters were in this part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 It's when he summoned the Noise. That was why I got confused, since Takashi has a similar, if not the same ability. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Hanekoma is fighting a dragon. O_O Also brilliant chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Awesome ending to an awesome chapter. Two thumbs up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Awesome ending to an awesome chapter. Four thumbs up. ^Fixed^ That includes my two thumbs up ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted April 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Glad y'all liked it. Next part will be the conclusion to the introductory Day One. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Glad y'all liked it. Next part will be the conclusion to the introductory Day One. When can we expect it to be released? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Glad y'all liked it. Next part will be the conclusion to the introductory Day One. When can we expect it to be released? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted April 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Well, not today. Mainly because it's twenty to midnight here, and I need to get some sleep. Tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Well' date=' not today. Mainly because it's twenty to midnight here, and I need to get some sleep. Tomorrow.[/quote'] Good idea, i would write anouther chapter for my fan fic, but the internet conection gos off in half an hour and its 11 o'clock here, going to bed soon.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Updated with a bit more organization in the first post and the addition of a Character Index. (Warning: May contain traces of spoilers.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Ahhhh, all nice and tidy........ :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 [spoiler=SPOILER]I love how "Nekokaburi" means "hiding one's true character". Didn't notice that until now. Anyways, the character organization really helps. Good job. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 It does O.o That's pretty cool. Rinne's char got more information D; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Rinne's char got more information D; That's because Rinne's char is way more awesome than yours. Alright, can anyone tell me the name of the third part of Day One? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 It's Hidden In The Light. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 And it's also added to the first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Win chapter is win. Takashi got screen time :D I have to say, you make every character react almost perfectly, if not perfectly. It fits their personality perfectly :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 That was so epic. You should go and make storylines for Square-Enix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 There's a reason I mod this place, y'know. Added a method of measuring a Player's strength and the values for each person in the fanfic so far. Next chapter will be an in-between and slightly shorter one: The first Night, in which I've decided to give Yashiro and Kariya some screentime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 I'm so weak D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Nights, eh? Since we don't see many of those in the game, that should be fun... @Fenrir: Nyeh. <:p> @Nitty: Is Shinrouyumi supposed to be translated as "divine wolf bow"? In any case, it should by "Shinroukyuu". (The character for bow, 弓, would be read as "yumi" alone, but when in a word with another character, it's read as "kyuu".) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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