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Harry Potter: The Second Legend {Chapter Two Complete}


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  1. 1. Do you think I should continue this Fan Fic?

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This is a Harry Potter Fan Fic. The idea to make one was inspired by The Omega!

[spoiler=Chapter One: Aboard the Hogwarts Express] She was standing right there. It was the late morning. Steam was pouring from the departing trains between Platform Nine and Platform Ten. She had a loose grasp upon her battered luggage carrier, where her family owl, a tanned one with smooth, angelic-like wings, was hooting softly into the passing crowd of busy Muggles walking buisness-like along the walkway.

Erielle breathed in and out. It was ten to 11:00a.m. The Hogwarts Express would be departing shortly. She couldn't hold on any longer, she knew she had to enter onto Platform Nine and Three-Quarters before the train left.

She drew in all of her courage, and slowly began inching towards the barrier between Platforms Nine and Ten. As she passed through it, she heaved a sigh or relief to see all was fine. She quietly rolled her cart along the platform to give it to the man who took care of all luggage in the back of the train.

After she did that, she checked the clock again to see the she only had thirty seconds to aboard the Hogwarts Express. Panicking, she ran like the wind all the way to the front of the train, where steam was slowly starting to rise as the train started slowly moving along. Erielle, who by this time was about to throw up and panic in a combined action, barely made it as she did a sort of leap-twirl to almost trip but still aboard the train just as it started turning the corner and out into the lands. Breathing heavily, Erielle caught her breath slowly, and walked off quietly along the narrow corridor to find herself a compartment.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter Two: With a New Friend...]As she slowly walked along the corridor, Erielle noticed how the passing compartments were full of life; everyone was either talking, laughing, or playing with their own friends. They hadn't even noticed her walking along, seemingly alone and helpless as she attempted to find a compartment for herself.

After walking up and down the train four times in a row, she finally gave up, seeing as that all places were full and that nobody had noticed her walking. She went along the trail to the end of the train, where she spotted someone she hadn't seen before as she trailed by.

There was a girl with waist-length brown hair that looked silky soft and flowed equally with the breeze coming through the open window. Her glassy sky-blue eyes seemed to tell a lot of her personality. Her face looked smooth and fragile, and was free of any blemishes. She was sitting like a young lady or an extremely mature child, with her hands together on her lap and her legs diagonally placed. She was (somehow) already in her Hogwarts dressings.

Erielle's eyesight could see just enough that she noticed something-- The girl didn't have a badge. She was a first year, too! Drawing courage, Erielle knocked on the glass compartment door three times. The girl turned her head to the door. Erielle slid the compartment door open slowly.

"Ehm... mind if I sit with you?" she asked in her soft voice.

It took a bit for the girl to respond. "Not at all," she said. Her voice seemed to complete her appearance.

"Thank you," Erielle said as she slid the compartment door shut. She took her place on the opposite couch of the girl. "So... what's your name?" she asked quietly.

"My name is Mareene Joys. But, you may call me May," she replied. "What about you?"

Erielle shifted in her seat. "Erielle Yubelson the Third," she said softly. "But, um... you can call me... call me..."

"It's okay. I don't think you need a nickname," May said. She smiled at her. "I think Erielle is a pretty name."

She felt herself blush. She shifted positions once again. "Thank you," Erielle muttered. "So, how did you enroll for Hogwarts?" she asked.

"I'm a pure-blood," she replied. "I've had my name down ever since I've been born. Before, even. My mother and father were afraid I'd turn out as a Squib, but I had been proved a witch when my mother accidentally dropped my rattle on my head. It had bounced off and back into her hand." May giggled. "So how did you enroll?"

Erielle shrugged. "Only my mum knows, but she died two years ago. Horrible disease." She looked blankly at May. "Spattergroit I think. But anyways, what's your wand made of?" she asked cheerfully.

Before May could answer, however, an elderly woman came along the corridor, pushing along with her a cart full of sweets and pumpkin juice. She opened the compartment door and said," Hello dearies. Anything off the trolley at all?" She smiled.

To Erielle's surprise, May took out a small bag. She opened it up to take out a Galleon and five Sickles. "My mum gave it to me for when she comes," she assured Erielle.

Five minutes later, they were quietly snacking on Bertie Botts Every Flavor Beans, Cauldron Cakes, and Sugar Quills. May had made sure to get pumpkin juice so they wouldn't dehydrate.

"So, what -is- your wand made out of?" Erielle asked, sucking on a quill.

May put her Cauldron Cake down. "I think it was made of ash wood with dragon heartstring," she said. "You?"

"Phoenix Feather Redwood, eight and a quarter inches," said Erielle, still sucking the Sugar Quill. She looked out the window, noticing the sun was beginning to come down. She put on her Hogwarts dressings. "Anyway, what House do YOU want to be in?" she said.

"Well, personally, I'm hoping to be in either Hufflepuff or Ravenclaw," May said. "I'm definitely no Slytherin, but I'm not very daring either." She smiled. And you?"

Erielle consumed her pumpkin juice glass. "Gryffindor, whereas the daring nerve and chivalry set them apart!" she sang. May laughed. So did Erielle. They laughed and laughed. They were having such a great time, they didn't even notice their food was gone, and that they were slowly coming to a stop in front of the famous Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

 

 

~Chapter Two is really long, so I hope you take your time reading ~.^

 

[spoiler=Characters]

Name: Erielle Yubelson (The Third)

Age: 11 (First Year)

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Name: Mareene Joys

Age: 11 (First Year)

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[spoiler=Plot] The plot shall be revealed in due time.

 

 

Thanks for reading, stay tuned for Chapter Three!

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