Nexev Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 I had chortles from that' date=' like laughing at a rock that is not home. Also, you forget Nexy, Divorce was born from the union of an angel and a demon. As Divorcemon, her negative side is more active, leading her to be against certain loves, but her positive side is welcoming of any love. Thus, through Charlie and Vixen's love, Divorce was released from her torment and her good side destroyed the bad side, which was held down by the love shared by Charlie and Vixen.[/quote'] Light and darkness are elements that have zero effect on alignment. Cherubimon is a testament to that. Still, no matter the fact that her good side killed her evil side the fact of the matter is that Charlie and Vixen still got killed. And it is still a very odd way to go. Nimbusmon should totally be a main villain in a sequel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 *cries of dissapointment*So, this girl is going all badass strong, and then Charlie just randomly walks up to her, and rubs her head, and the battle is over? That just dissapointed me to no end. If you made it last longer, like, after a long, heart felt fight + conversation, and THEN Charlie did that, then I'd be ok with it, but...MehI like the idea of Roosevelt bein back XDCrab Helmet rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 I do admit that it was a little too corny, even for my tastes. But seriously now, how can you fight a little girl who is capable theoretically spliting ANYTHING? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 ^ Exactly. Have the battle go on for a while. Have them try to figure things out, even almost hit her, but fail. Then after a long enough battle, have Charlie come up. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 I was hurrying, what with all the 'when's the next chapter coming out?' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Doesn't mean you have to hurry. You can simply just say "some time" or something. Bullsh*t us XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Look the moment has passed, let us all kindly drop it and look towards the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 We are looking twords the end, that's why we are asking you when the next chapter comes out. I bet you a dollar you are gonna kill off Submitmon, Hivemon, and Lydia next. (When someone makes a betting ring over who is gonna die next you know people die quickly). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Because you guys were not content with the fight in this chapter (I wasn't either), I changed it to make it more of a fight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Edited battle is soo much better*smiles*Oh death, always so much fun, especially after a good battle ^_\\\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 SO glad you feel that way [/sarcasm] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 The edited battle scene is kinda nice, actually. But the original was better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 The edited battle scene is kinda nice' date=' actually. But the original was better.[/quote'] Please for the love of god tell me you're joking. OT: I didn't mind the battle before hand, but it's even better with those extra paragraphs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Please for the love of God tell me you actually cared about my opinion. Anyhow, can't wait to see who's next to be killed off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 I just find it insanely stupid you thought that the old version was better. He added one of his paragraphs, fight lasted. How does that make it worse than the original? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Why do I fall asleep every time I try reading the first chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Because you don't care, or because it might be time for beddy-byes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 If this fanfic was made into a truly-really-seriously-real-life book, what would you feel? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 He would sheet his pants. No matter how great the book is BrokenHeart would have just performed copyright infrigment and would have to spend the rest of his nights awke for fear of being dragged down to lawsuit hell by the horror that is bandai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 He would s*** his pants. No matter how great the book is BrokenHeart would have just performed copyright infrigment and would have to spend the rest of his nights awke for fear of being dragged down to lawsuit hell by the horror that is bandai.To me' date=' as long as you have an interesting story, everything is OK. Otherwise, this world would have [b']literally[/b] been fired by now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 As astute as always Nexev. But, in any case, i would be more preferable as a manga. Also, I wanna know, I have plans for two little spin-offs, one being the Mist-Forgotten Chapters, the other being the Author's Chronicles, which would you guys prefer to see first? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Mist-Forgotten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 I don't know what the mist ones about so I would like to see Author's chronicles because I vaguely suspect it will be something like Kuja's fic were you run out of plot so you go into your fic to wreck havoc in order to progress the storyline. This means it will be chock full of cameos from real menbers and divine meddling. Or it's just a behind the scenes look at the fic which still might be interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 I'd say I like to see the Author's Chronicles first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 In truth, Kuja got the idea from me. I had planned the Author's Chronicles a long time ago, and it would involve such an occurence. The Mist-Forgotten is what I call 'a what could've been', It is what could've happened had the combatants changed in certain fights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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