The Warden Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I am sometimes a forgiving person, but then I am curious as to why you posted in the first place besides from stupidity when you could have easily pm'ed me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 [align=center]Truth be told, I was going to read the first chapter. And see if I could get the 100th page. >D[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Feh, I can't imagine why you would read it when you admitted you do not care for Digimon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 It's always nice to comment on other's work, even if it's something that doesn't please you. You should remember that. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I'll be sure to remember that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 яє§ι§ταηcє ι§ ғuτιℓє,[align=center]Yeah. I thought it was good, but it didn't really pull me in that much (wasn't topic, as it was the intro. :/) and you need to work on spacing out your paragraphs better through speech and things like that. Good job nonetheless, though.[/align]§ø gιvє up ωнιℓє yøu cαη. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I don't honestly give a crap about spacing. If people can read it without going cross eyed, hurray for me. Though people offer me advice, I have to use my own style. This isn't just for my readers, but me as well. If we all can read it, well then, that's just good isn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Okay, this is a quickie yes, but with a stirring plot twist that will generate an epic fight, and something else as well. [spoiler=Chapter 44: The Princess of Flower’s Secret] An elegantly carved mahogany table was stretched out in a medium sized room. It had been decorated with many vases of flowers and beautiful creeper vines at the legs. Lila motioned for the group to sit as she took her seat at the head of the table. She was smiling warmly at everyone, which made them uncomfortable. ‘Are you alright your majesty?’ Drake asked uncertainly. She suddenly zoned in with a quick shake of her head. ‘Forgive me, I have not had so many friends around for a long time, besides granny of course’ Lila replied as a slight knock came from the grand door. It opened and a Babamon walked in and took her seat next to Lila. ‘This is my grandma Babayaga. Grandma, these are the heroes Nana told us about’ Lila said excitedly. Babayaga smiled warmly, but held her hand up. ‘Settle down my dear’ she said soothingly, and then her attention turned. ‘It would seem my sister was right to place her trust in you humans. My dear Lila has been gloomy without people her age to relate too. I trust you will be staying a bit longer?’ she inquired. Steph shook her head. ‘I’m sorry but we must tell you that we cannot stay long. Our destination is the Islands of DEeleven to find some clues about the Digi-egg of Purity before Oblivimon finds it. We know how you feel Lila, many of us grew up without true relation to people our age’ Steph explained. ‘Ohhhh’ Lila said sadly and just looked at the table. ‘But’ Naomi began. Everyone looked at her, Lila was expectant. ‘But we are tired from our train ride, and I am sure we’ll need to rest up for the night. Sufficed to say we’ll need to stick around for a short while, but long enough to get to know you’ Nomi finished. Lila smiled at this. ‘Naomi is absolutely right, we’ll need to rest and prepare for our journey to the islands. It would be rude to ignore such a wonderful offer’ Vixen agreed. A feast of fruits and vegetables had been presented before them all, with a delectable fruit punch; they were rich and full of life, and absolutely bloody tasty. Baba slowly leaned over to Kevin on her left. ‘I want to thank you all for this. Lila has had a troubled life, and being queen has not improved her spirits in the least. This is exactly what she needed, though I fear the distraction will drive her off from her duties’ Babayaga whispered. ‘It is no problem. I am sure the girls will have a splendid time’ Kev whispered back. ‘What do you mean?’ she inquired. ‘Naturally, women hang out with women to relate to them. I can already feel a girl’s night being brewed as I speak’ Kev explained. ‘I see’ Babayaga whispered back and returned to her position. ‘You know, I am curious. How can a Babamon be related to a plant Digimon like Lilamon’ Aban asked aloud before Keras could stop him. Lila giggled girlishly and Aban blushed. ‘The Lalamon line has two mega Digimon, Rosemon and Lotosmon. Grandma evolved into a Rosemon, who is gifted with the Tifaret jewel that keeps them eternally young. However, a Rosemon that ages gracefully becomes a Babamon. You can see a Tifaret around Grandma’s neck’ Lila explained as Babayaga held her jewel up. ‘Well, now that somehow passed without a hitch, could you please allow us some rooms to spend the night in?’ Charlie inquired. Lila nodded and rose from her seat, dropping her napkin onto a plate. The group got up and followed her. As they were leaving Dom slapped Aban on the back of his head and then kicking him. The guys had left the girls to Lila and they mysteriously vanished into the villa, so it was up to them to play tea party with Lila. ‘I must ask Lila, how old are you?’ Lydia inquired. ‘In human years I would be two’ Lila replied slowly as she sipped her tea and then gulped it. Naomi and Steph snorted into their tea in a way that it jetted out the other side. ‘You’re two? Then, I assume your mother died and you are an only child’ Naomi asked desperately. Lila nodded sadly as she pulled the flower off her chest and opened it to reveal it was a locket. It showed her as a Budmon in the arms of a smiling Rosemon with Babayaga standing next to her. ‘Mama was a strong warrior and queen, she lead many of our forces to defend our lands from the Dark Council. That was until three weeks ago, when Dystopia himself revealed himself on the battlefield. Mama was defeated and our forces dissolved. Grandma led the defenses from thereon, until they stopped suddenly. We’ve enjoyed the peace we’ve had, but now the Dark Council’s weapon Oblivimon is going to end us all’ Lila sighed. ‘He doesn’t serve the Dark Council, in truth he absorbed Dystopia and uses his body as his own. The Dark Council is effectively dissolved’ Lop explained as she struggled with her teacup. ‘That does not make me feel any better you know? But, if Oblivimon and Dystopia are one, then I will do all I can to defeat him’ Lila vowed. ‘Save your energy sugar, our Digimon can reach the mega level, and our most powerful assets, that is, Demi and BK couldn’t stop him even without a body. Besides, you people would be disheartened if their ruler was destroyed after ruling for less than a month. We’ve got this covered’ Vixen replied. ‘I guess you’re right, I’m just an ultimate Digimon after all’ Lila said sadly. ‘Chin up luv, you’re a two year old ultimate. With luck, you may become mega by age three’ Naomi said reassuringly. This comment was oddly left, as if expecting something else. ‘So, what do you guys feel about lesbianism’ Naomi suggested. They all spat into their tea at this question. The guys had been camping out in a verdant park. They were all sitting on the stone sides of a large fountain; it was decorated with stone flowers and water lilies. Demi and BK were both staring into the water and playing with the small fishes in it. ‘I am worried about this situation’ Aban announced. ‘We all are Crazy. Oblivimon is truly frightening, not as frightening as when Vixen gets angry mind you’ Charlie replied. ‘No, I mean the fact that the girls are babysitting the queen of this region and we’re doing nothing’ Aban corrected. ‘Yeah, just no there Aban. The only problem however, is if Oblivimon or Alex turn up. I can bet you three BIT that either one of them will’ Gaomon stated. It was several hours later and dinner was being served. It consisted of many different ways to cook vegetables, and several meat trays delicately laid out before them. This was completely counter-balanced by a large stack of burgers being brought out by eager Burgermon. Dom cried happily as he ignored the tongs and grabbed several of them. Lila smiled warmly as she raised her glass of nectar. ‘I would like to toast you all. Through you guys, I have truly found some kind of confidence in myself. Though you leave tomorrow, I wish to express my gratitude to you all for a splendid day’ Lila decreed and drained her drink and they feasted grandly, until Dom got drunk off the nectar they were serving and began to do his amusing knife throwing act, which involved several large steak knives and Aban’s head. It was late at night when the explosions sounded. Though only a few people were woken, they were immediately shaken awake and dressed. Naomi and Kevin were the first to reach the throne room, where Lila was conversing with several plant Digimon. ‘Togemon, I want the Needlers out there to repel the foe whilst Kiwimon and her warriors will take the villagers to safety’ Lila commanded. Togemon saluted and they both ran out. ‘Now Lillymon, I need the Sun Crescents out to pick off the enemy’ Lila ordered and she ran out of the room. Lila herself slumped into the chair and Babayaga offered her a cup of hot chocolate, to which she accepted gratefully. ‘Lila, what is happening?’ Steph demanded. ‘One of our outlying villages is under attack from something, all we know that the explosion was detonated by a large dark red and black sphere’ Lila reported as a large rose spear was handed to her by an armourer. ‘That would be Alex and Shadow. Lila, we will go out. Shadow is an extremely powerful mega level Digimon, you wouldn’t last against him’ Aban begged as Lila was handed a well-endowed metal bustier. ‘I am aware of that. I heave heard of their exploits, and will personally end it’ Lila said harshly as her legs were armoured. ‘Look, I know you wish to fight, but let us handle him’ Steph cried. Lila sighed and without looking pointed above her thrown. In the faint light was an armoured Rosemon fighting a Gryphonmon. ‘My mother, Queen Rosaline never backed down in defending her kingdom, be she rookie, champion, ultimate or mega, she stood strong, and I shall to’ she stated determinedly. ‘Then tell us where the village is, you highness’ Steph said. Alex was watching as Shadow was tearing yet another village apart. Each Terra Destroyer lit his features up, until they darkened again. ‘The egg is not here’ Shadow reported. ‘Then finish off this village and we shall move on to the next likely location’ Alex stated. Shadow nodded loyally, but was immediately forced to dodge as a beam of white energy arced past him. Alex didn’t spare a glance as his pawns were lit up by the fires, Demi was in his mega forms and his staff was still glowing. ‘Alex, I knew you were no good, but to destroy a village of innocent Digimon for no reason is inhuman’ Drake hissed. ‘I would not be making such accusations Drake, not when your exploits are world famous. But I have my reasons, all directed to locating the Digi-egg of Purity before Oblivimon. If a village gets in our way, it will be removed from it. That is the way things are. Nevertheless I find it amusing that you are here in the same place I am. This is delightful as your use has reached its end once Dystopia was defeated. Shadow shall defeat you all, and then he will defeat Oblivimon alone. From then on I will rule this world using the power of the DE of Purity’ Alex explained coolly. ‘Talk about a coincidence, as your arrogance has finally run its course. You have but one Digimon, whilst we rival many. What chance could Shadow have? Demi and BK can easily defeat him without jogressing’ Kev replied. Alex chuckled slowly and without humour. ‘You jest, never deny the inevitable. You are mere pawns in my game. Your king is cornered by Shadow, soon it will be checkmate’ Alex sighed. ‘Shadow, destroy them’ Alex ordered. Shadow approached them as Demi and BK launched themselves into the and grabbed Shadow, forcing him to the ground. Alex raised his eyebrow as Shadow actually seemed hurt from the attack. ‘Nice try pipsqueaks, but it will take more than that to defeat me’ Shadow stated as he rose up. ‘Dragon Crusher’ he roared, summoning waves of purple fire and forcing them to retreat. ‘Cute, but no cigar. Blizzaga’ BK countered, firing an enormous ice sphere at Shadow, breaking through the fire and striking Shadow in the chest and sending him back. Shadow got up and saw the large dent in his chest plate. ‘Impressive, but no cigar’ Shadow said coolly and rose into the air. ‘Terra Destroyer’ Shadow cried, summoning the sphere in one hand and throwing it. BK took the hit and was blown out of the air. He fell until he was captured by Demi, who woke him up with a helpful slap. ‘There is no time for Heaven and Nightmaren BK, hit him with whatever you got’ Demi ordered. BK nodded and escaped his brother’s arms. ‘Dark Storm’ BK roared as a black mist formed in his hand. He tossed it and it consumed Shadow, who struggled, but couldn’t escape as red lightning struck from every angle, cracking his armour and casting him down. Shadow fell with a sickening crunch, and was getting up as Demi stood before him. Demi smirked as he crossed his arms across his chest and began to glow with white light. ‘Radiant’ Demi began, his aura intensifying. ‘This is the end Shadow, any last words?’ BK inquired. Shadow panted as he quickly covered himself with his shield. ‘STOP!’ Lila screamed. Demi stopped and turned as Lila began running towards them. His aura faded as she began checking up on Shadow. ‘Good, you’re fine’ she commented as Alex approached. ‘Get away from Shadow’ Alex demanded. Lila put her hands on her hips and glared at them. ‘Alex Jeremy Sable, you have some explaining to do’ Lila said angrily. Alex stopped and looked at her. ‘How do you know my middle name?’ he demanded. ‘Because, my name, is Lydia Ashelia Sable’ Lila replied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Epic plot twist is extremely epic. No really. I never saw that coming. Also, lol at the drunken knife throwing. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Okay, never expected that end statement by Lilamon. good chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Nice chapter.Cant wait for the next one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Nice chapter, as usual, but not very much Charlie or Drake...=/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 It was meaningless filler to prepare for the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 New music video, featuring Lydia and Jason. [spoiler=Not Gonna Get Us]Upbeat music plays as Lydia rises from her bed at home and changes into her dress. She tightens her shoes and grabs the bag she prepared earlier. She creeps out of her house and locks the door behind her. Lydia then runs down a moonlit street to another house, where she grabs a small pebble and tosses at a window. A figure is seen in it, but it vanishes and a bit later, the door opens with Jason opening it. He was wearing his normal outfit, plus his backpack and the wooden sword. ‘Not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. Not gonna get us. Not gonna get us. Not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us. Not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us. Not gonna get us!’ she sang as she grabbed his hand and they both ran down the street out of town. Both of them were at the base of a mountain and staring up it. ‘Starting from here, let's make a promise. You and me, let's just be honest. We're gonna run, nothing can stop us. Even the night that falls all around us. Soon there will be laughter and voices. Beyond the clouds over the mountains. We'll run away on roads that are empty. Lights from the airfield, shining upon you’ Lydia sang as they climbed up it to a flat cliff. The view was filled with low-lying mist covering the base. ‘Nothing can stop us, not now, I love you. They're not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. Nothing can stop us, not now, I love you. They're not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us (Not..) They're not gonna get us, gonna get us, gonna get us..(Not gonna get us). They're not gonna get us (gonna get us, gonna get us!) Not gonna get us. Not gonna get us, gonna get us. Not gonna get us. NOT GONNA GET US, GONNA GET US! (Not gonna get us) Get us, get us.. (Not gonna get us) Not gonna get us. Not gonna get us’ she sang as they ran across a verdant field. They reached a dirt road that stretched to either side. Lydia nodded and ran down the right path. ‘We'll run away, keep everything simple. Night will come down, our guardian angel. We rush ahead, the crossroads are empty. Our spirits rise, they're not gonna get us. My love for you, always forever. Just you and me, all else is nothing. Not going back, not going back there. They don't understand, they don't understand us’ Lydia sang as they ran down it to a crossroads. ‘Not gonna get us, gonna get us, gonna get us (gonna get.. get us.) Not gonna get us (gonna get.. gonna get..) Not gonna get us, gonna get us. Not gonna get us. Nothing can stop us, not now, I love you. They're not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. Nothing can stop us, not now, I love you. They're not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us (Not gonna get us) They're not gonna get us, gonna get us, They're not gonna get us (Not gonna get us), Not gonna get us, get us. Not gonna get us, get us. Not gonna get us’ Lydia sang as they both ran ahead in a random direction and a began to ran into a bright portal. I'm not gay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 New music video' date=' featuring Lydia and Jason. [spoiler=Not Gonna Get Us']Upbeat music plays as Lydia rises from her bed at home and changes into her dress. She tightens her shoes and grabs the bag she prepared earlier. She creeps out of her house and locks the door behind her. Lydia then runs down a moonlit street to another house, where she grabs a small pebble and tosses at a window. A figure is seen in it, but it vanishes and a bit later, the door opens with Jason opening it. He was wearing his normal outfit, plus his backpack and the wooden sword. ‘Not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. Not gonna get us. Not gonna get us. Not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us. Not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us. Not gonna get us!’ she sang as she grabbed his hand and they both ran down the street out of town. Both of them were at the base of a mountain and staring up it. ‘Starting from here, let's make a promise. You and me, let's just be honest. We're gonna run, nothing can stop us. Even the night that falls all around us. Soon there will be laughter and voices. Beyond the clouds over the mountains. We'll run away on roads that are empty. Lights from the airfield, shining upon you’ Lydia sang as they climbed up it to a flat cliff. The view was filled with low-lying mist covering the base. ‘Nothing can stop us, not now, I love you. They're not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. Nothing can stop us, not now, I love you. They're not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us (Not..) They're not gonna get us, gonna get us, gonna get us..(Not gonna get us). They're not gonna get us (gonna get us, gonna get us!) Not gonna get us. Not gonna get us, gonna get us. Not gonna get us. NOT GONNA GET US, GONNA GET US! (Not gonna get us) Get us, get us.. (Not gonna get us) Not gonna get us. Not gonna get us’ she sang as they ran across a verdant field. They reached a dirt road that stretched to either side. Lydia nodded and ran down the right path. ‘We'll run away, keep everything simple. Night will come down, our guardian angel. We rush ahead, the crossroads are empty. Our spirits rise, they're not gonna get us. My love for you, always forever. Just you and me, all else is nothing. Not going back, not going back there. They don't understand, they don't understand us’ Lydia sang as they ran down it to a crossroads. ‘Not gonna get us, gonna get us, gonna get us (gonna get.. get us.) Not gonna get us (gonna get.. gonna get..) Not gonna get us, gonna get us. Not gonna get us. Nothing can stop us, not now, I love you. They're not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. Nothing can stop us, not now, I love you. They're not gonna get us, they're not gonna get us. They're not gonna get us (Not gonna get us) They're not gonna get us, gonna get us, They're not gonna get us (Not gonna get us), Not gonna get us, get us. Not gonna get us, get us. Not gonna get us’ Lydia sang as they both ran ahead in a random direction and a began to ran into a bright portal. I'm not gay No comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 It was the best thing I could come up with, besides Gaomon and Steph doing Ignorance is Bliss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Touche then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Besides, the song kinda explains their journey before they came to the digital world, but I doubt it makes sense, it didn't to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Personally, it made absolutely no sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Music Videos never do Fen, such an example is the Total Eclipse of the Heart video, it is fed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Once again, touche. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Read 44...0.oSoo, Alex's sister is alive? 0.o*dies*I suppose this is a good way to turn Alex into a good guy XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Interesting twist you threw in there, Broken. I'm impressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 So, after readin it again, it's not his exactly, but, apparently, a re-born version or something...But, I see a little story and/or idea here. She may be more important than even expected XDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Well, it willbe explained later when I write Chapter 45: Birth by Sleep (Lulz *strangles self*) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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