Fallen Hero Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 How could you forget them :cry::cry::cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Because I have to keep an eye on 20 or so characters and do you expect me to remember all of them off the top of my head? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Nice chap! AND OMGWTFBBQ?! Silence was Alex's MOTHER?!?!......sorta?!Uhm...not quite, read that part again XDSilence took care of Alex LIKE a mother ;) And yay, now everybody knows the story of Alex, =D Good chapter too, first time I actually read the whole chap. and paid attention to it very well. Enigma Holy Mode should be fawn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 That's why I said 'sorta' like his mom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 ^ Wuts dat mean? 0.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Because underneath a big bust is a caring heart Yankee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 ^ =DStill glad you told the whole story of Alex. See? He isn't a complete dick people xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 He's he type of guy who would sell McCutty meals to emo kids Yankee I read up on Alex repeatedly to get his angle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 I wonder what Charlie is for a kind of guy? Probably the kind of guy that wanna get laid every now and then... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 You wish Kuja Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 And Dom's the wisecracking ass kicker we all know and hate. Anyways, nice chap, and interesting plot twist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 He's he type of guy who would sell McCutty meals to emo kids Yankee I read up on Alex repeatedly to get his angle Yes, cuz it's funny XD I do look forawrd to seeing what you do with him now ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 I still want to ask, Chronomon had his Destroyer Mode and Holy Mode, how could anyone not tell that Enigma was corrupted by Silence? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 ^ Cuz doez not pay attention tat much DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Yeah, I guess so, I at least though Fallen would've gotten it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 ^ Oh well XDSo, when'z 41 comin? Also, I might need your help with something in a bit if thats ok with you. But that'll be over pm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Okay, and Yankee, I have developed a plot point for Alex that is simply to die for Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Blah blah cliffhanger blah, blah blah blah, Oblivimon blah. Blah blah blah? Blah! [spoiler=Chapter 41: Dystopia] The group had been descending a new winding stairway into the darkness, with Demi and BK curiously at the front with Silence and Enigma at the back. It seemed they were all having some form of discussion ‘You must take care when facing Dystopia’ Enigma warned. ‘We understand that. The bastard tore us apart lat time’ Demi replied. ‘He resorted to that so he could easily extract the data. He did the Dot Matrix just for amusing himself’ Enigma explained. ‘I’ve rarely heard of the Arkadimon line, what are they all about’ Kev inquired. ‘The Arkadimon have all stages of Digivolution except for an In-Training stage. Their main goal is to absorb the data of their victims and grow in level and power. A powerful Arkadimon is one who has grown to the mega level, as it is required for the ultimate form to consume at least three mega Digimon to do so. However, extremely large amounts of power are required to reach super ultimate, which Dystopia had after…’ Silence explained. ‘After the purge?’ Naomi asked. ‘Yes, and after he absorbed our beloved leader, Apocalypse we watched as he became a super ultimate. He then ended the lives of the other megas. Testament, Nothing, Dizaster. All gone’ Silence replied wistfully. ‘Who were they?’ Steph asked. ‘Testament was a Barbamon, brilliant in tactics, but proved too clever for his own good. Nothing was a highly skilled Zanbamon, but his use ended once he could not even Dystopia. And Dizaster was a true gem to our army, one of the very few intelligent Armageddemon. His lose was the most shocking to our Infermon artillery squads’ Enigma replied. ‘You must miss them I guess?’ Naomi asked kindly. ‘I was very close to Nothing, but our work kept us apart, and raising Alex, well, it was a mere fling in the end. For Alex, I was forced to serve Dystopia. Kneeling before him seven years ago, it burns me up’ Silence snarled. ‘Easy tiger, you will get vengeance soon enough’ Dom chuckled. The stairs were slowly became covered in a dark mist the lower they went. Until a dark landing was in sight. Enigma was waiting silently on a floating platform until they were all assembled before him. ‘I must congratulate you. You broke my power surrounding Dramonia; you infiltrated my fortress and turned my closest lackeys against me. With such achievements, I can grant you a few questions before I end you’ Dystopia announced. ‘Why are you doing this?’ Steph demanded. ‘What a stupid question to ask’ Dystopia rebutted. ‘What do you mean, that question was intelligent and too the point’ Gaomon protested. ‘Hush doggy, even if I did answer it, you would not get the answer you seek’ Dystopia explained. ‘What do you mean?’ Steph inquired. ‘You can only know the answer once you know the question. If you had asked me, ‘why shouldn’t I be doing this?’ Then I would reply with ‘why shouldn’t I? I am Digimon, I am capable of evil it’s my choice what I devote my energies to’ Dystopia explained. ‘Then you could’ve answered our question with ‘because I can’ Aban pointed out. ‘That is true, now, anything else you wish to know before the slaughter?’ Dystopia inquired. ‘What will you do with Oblivimon?’ Aban asked. ‘Destroy the word. What else could I do with an apocalyptic Digimon?’ Dystopia replied. ‘What then?’ Aban inquired. ‘What do you mean what then?’ Dystopia inquired. ‘What happens after you destroy the world?’ Aban asked. ‘Then I would move on to the human world and repeat. Then by absorbing the data Oblivimon absorbed, I can recreate the Digital World and do it all over again. Destruction is an amusing past time. But twenty questions is over, time to spin the wheel’ Dystopia laughed gleefully. He suddenly stopped cold and both of his hands twisted in long black spikes. ‘Who’s first?’ he demanded coldly. Silence and Enigma forced their way through the group. Dystopia hardly looked surprised, but his hands reverted to normal. ‘It is hardly surprising to know you would be the first able bodied volunteers, but your uses are elsewhere’ Dystopia remarked. The dark area began to rumble and from the dark, cables lashed out and grabbed them both. ‘You fiend, how could you do this to him?’ Silence demanded. ‘Because I can’ Dystopia replied slowly. Both were dragged into the darkness and neither screamed. There was an audible squelch, and a crimson light in the distance shone before it vanished. ‘I never liked them anyways, but they made delectable meals’ Dystopia mused. ‘Now, I will ask again, who will be first’ Dystopia added roughly. Gaomon, Vixen, Magnetmon and Impmon walked forward, and their partners followed. ‘We’ll put an end to you Dystopia, because we can’ Drake answered smugly and raised his left Digivice. They all did and their partners were consumed by energy. Kev and Magnetmon were both consumed by green energy. Shortly, all four mega Digimon were facing him. ‘So, MirageGaogamon, Sakuyamon, Gravitismon and Beelzemon Blast Mode. You will truly make for a divine match’ Dystopia mocked and vanished. He had shifted further away and continued to do so. ‘You cannot run forever Dystopia’ Mirage announced and chased him. Dystopia laughed as Mirage came closer. He raised his right hand the fingers launched out like tentacles. ‘Tag, you’re it’ Dystopia stated and swung Mirage around, once, twice, three times and released him straight at the other, who were struck by his mass and sent off into a collision with a floating mound. Each glew and de-Digivolve to rookie, Kev was lying next to Magnet. He got up wearily. ‘How the f**k did he do that?’ he demanded loudly. ‘I am powerful little human, by far stronger than you useless bio-merge’ Dystopia replied. He then turned to the remained of the group. ‘Next’. ‘Okay, he just totaled four Digimon without breaking a funking sweat, who wants to go next?’ Dom asked. ‘Why not just attack him with everything we’ve got?’ Aban suggested. ‘Whatever’ Dom replied. Dystopia would’ve smirked if he had a mouth as each remaining Digimon glew and transformed. ‘So, Belphemon, Lilithmon, Diaboromon, TyrantKabuterimon and Cherubimon, this’ll be fun’ Dystopia mused and landed on a floating rock. ‘Yes it will’ Lilith laughed cruelly and attacked first. ‘Phantom Pain’ she cried and launched a stream of black mist, which vanished. Dystopia seemed confused until the attack struck him and some of his body decayed. He laughed as he launched his arm out and struck her, sending her colliding back and de-Digivolving into Salamon. The corroded armour immediately healed itself. ‘Lampranthus’ Belphe roared and fired his chains. Dystopia merely dodged and vanished as each chain struck. Dystopia appeared in front of Belphemon. ‘Exile Spear’ Dystopia laughed and his right hand became a twisted spear. He dove in and gleefully took out one of Belphe’s horn. Belphe roared with anger and turned to Dystopia. ‘Lightning Horn’ he roared and tackled Dystopia with his single horn and rammed him through another floating rock. Dystopia merely laughed and vanished. He used his tentacle hands to grab Belphemon’s ankle and begun swinging him through nay rock available until he de-Digivolved. ‘Thousand Spear’ Cherubi cried. ‘Shine of Bee’ Tyrant added. ‘Web Wrecker’ Diaboromon finished. All three attacks actually took Dystopia unaware and we launched into another floating rock. He got up wearily, but the Thousand Spears were still launched and his armour began to crack from each impaling. ‘Dot Matrix’ he screeched. Nothing happened, until each Digimon suddenly reverted to their rookie stage. Dystopia was breathing a bit more heavily then he should have. ‘I cannot believe you actually managed to hurt me’ he gasped. ‘But there is no one else to save you’ Dystopia added. ‘Not quite’ Demi remarked. Dystopia immediately looked up and saw Demi and BK. ‘We still owe you for blowing us up’ BK added gleefully. Dystopia’s eyes widened as they both went straight for him. Demi went ahead and stomped Dystopia through the rock. BK then went ahead of Dystopia and then sliced his wing with his staff. Dystopia screeched horribly as Demi and BK continued their onslaught, keeping Dystopia from moving. There was a fatal pause and Dystopia vanished to an empty zone far away. Demi snarled, but looked at all the KO’ed Digimon. ‘Curaga’ he shouted. Green-blue particles appeared again and the Digimon rose up. ‘We wish for another chance’ Vixen cried and leapt down to the platform the tamers were on. ‘But you can’t’ Charlie cried. Vixen looked at him. ‘You may be the man, but there still isn’t a ring on my finger Charlie. I am still a free woman, and I can still fight’ Vixen roared. Charlie looked into her eyes, and knew. ‘I can’t stop you, so I’ll be with you one hundred percent’ he declared and raised his Digivice. They all did, and each Digimon prepared for a final onslaught. Dystopia was too far away to see this, he was panting heavily. ‘How can this be, they equal me in might, even without Oblivimon’ he moaned. ‘We have unity Dystopia’ Demi replied smugly. Dystopia looked up, and saw each mega gleefully waiting. ‘Oh f**k’ Dystopia said. ‘F**k indeed my buggy foe, for now you die’ Demi replied. ‘Full Moon Blaster’ ‘Spirit Strike!’ ‘Gravity Cannon!’ ‘Chaos Flare!’ ‘Web Wrecker!’ ‘Gift of Darkness!’ ‘Phantom Pain!’ ‘Lightning Spear!’ ‘Shine of Bee!’ ‘Heaven!’ ‘Nightmaren!’ All the attacked united into one final burst that consumed Dystopia. They all cheered, until Dystopia reformed again. His body was covered in sickly green blood, and was missing an arm, some hair and several fingers. He was panting heavily, but this slowly became a chuckle. ‘I add find it amusing that you think you’ve won’ Dystopia laughed. ‘You are beaten, face it like a mon’ Mirage shouted. ‘No, I won’t be doing that, because you will soon die’ Dystopia laughed and his body glew with dark energy. ‘He’s Digivolving, flee’ BK commanded. They scattered quickly, as Dystopia’s form expanded quickly, filling the black void until he dimmed. His armour gleamed clean and new, each eerie eye shone in the dark. All the tentacles at the joints wriggled intently. ‘I am Arkadimon Super Ultimate. You cannot find victory with me’ Dystopia laughed. ‘We will win; good will prevail’ Keras cried. ‘Good, evil HA! They’re just simple labels to justify actions little Diaboromon. You think what you are doing is right and therefore label it with good. You label my actions with evil because of my destructiveness. But let me give you advice on chaos and unity. Chaos and unity are two forces that counterbalance each other, bringing balance to the world. Chaos is a negative force that shifts towards destruction, and unity is shifted towards creation. But unity isn’t being together, unity is the act of all working towards the same goal to create a miracle. But time has run out, there are no more miracles’ Dystopia sighed. ‘That was the same crap you tried to feed me all the time’ a cold voice replied. Dystopia sighed with agitated annoyance, but was forced to look for the voice. From the darkness Alex appeared, riding on Shadow. ‘You look well you filthy lying insect’ Alex hissed. ‘And you look well too. How’s your sister by the way? It’s been two years since I last saw her’ Dystopia counted. Alex growled. ‘That was below the belt Dystopia’ Alex cried. ‘You would know Sable. Why have you returned here? There is nothing left for you but destruction’ Dystopia inquired. ‘I have come to finish you Dystopia. These pawns did a fine job of clearing my way. All that is left is to claim the prize’ Alex explained, motioning to the others, then to Dystopia. ‘You never did learn that you could never defeat me. Now you fill your head with the same deluded nonsense these children have’ Dystopia replied. ‘There is one difference between them and I. I have the power to defeat you, no matter what form you take on’ Alex mocked. ‘Is that a fact?’ Dystopia inquired. ‘It is, Shadow and I have perfected a technique that will defeat you once and for all’ Alex laughed. Dystopia joined in to the insane joke. ‘I pity you Sable, for knowing that I will live even after you die. I would say farewell, but there is nothing waiting for you in the end’ Dystopia replied viciously. ‘Dystopia Lances!’ he cried. From all over, his swarming tentacles lashed out. Demi and BK fled and fought, but the larger Digimon had a harder time. Though aided by the smaller ones, most of them were pierced and beaten. Demi shed a tear as he watched Vixen being impaled in her chest and then falling over defeated as Renamon. Each of them was beaten. The only survivors were Demi, BK, Gravitismon and Shadow. ‘Leave’ Demi ordered. ‘But I can fight’ Kev protested. ‘Leave’ Demi repeated and Kev did so. Alex laughed cruelly at the defeated Digimon. ‘Only the strong survive, end this Shadow’ Alex laughed coldly. Alex was deposited on the nearest floating platform and Shadow turned to face Dystopia. ‘You intend to fight me?’ Dystopia inquired as Shadow turned. ‘No, I intend to comply with my partner’s wishes. He wishes that I defeat you, so I shall’ Shadow replied. ‘YOU FOOL! DYSTOPIA LANCES!’ Dystopia screeched. Shadow backed away from the writing mass. ‘It is over Dystopia. CHAOS DESTROYER!’ Shadow cried whilst raising his arms. Slowly, a sphere of energy began to form, growing larger and forcing Shadow to continuously space his arms. With a wild roar, the sphere was hurled at Dystopia, who couldn’t dodge the attack and it struck him head on. The sphere compacted and then exploded loudly with chaos energy. Alex began to laughing as smoke filled the area. Demi looked into the smoke, and sighed. ‘I wouldn’t celebrate just yet’ he remarked. Alex glared at him, and then into the smoke, which began to clear. Dystopia was mostly unharmed by the attack, with only minor cracks to his chest armour. ‘Too bas, so sad’ Dystopia mused. The tentacles went made and lashed at Shadow, who could nothing as he was held and whipped. He moaned by each strike, until he was deposited at Alex’s side. ‘I told you you didn’t stand a chance. This is your punishment’ Dystopia explained. Alex was literally speechless, as he knelt besides his fallen partner, and sobbed. ‘Demi, BK, I’ll admit this had been fun, such a shame all good thing have to end’ Dystopia remarked as his attention turned to them. ‘It isn’t over’ a voice cried. ‘Give me strength’ Dystopia sighed as Kev was dragging the tamers on a floating rock. ‘You said we’re out of miracles Dystopia, well, as long as we have hope in us and our partners, our unity stands strong’ Steph shouted. ‘We won’t be beaten after coming so far’ Charlie added. ‘For our long journey has made us strong’ Aban added. ‘And we will beat you’ Dom finished. As the words were given, all Digivices began to glow. Demi curiously watched this as BK stood next to him. ‘What are you doing, your partners do not have the strength to on’ Dystopia stated. ‘It’s not for them’ Naomi said mystically. Each individual aura surrounding the Digivice became gold in colour. Without warning, they went berserk and released a great light. Each went off, one after the other, and Demi and BK began to react to this. Both of them slowly degraded into data particles. ‘Marvelous, you destroyed them’ Dystopia laughed. ‘No, this is different; this is jogress’ Drake replied. Dystopia watched, as both data forms began to slowly merge, resulting in a bright flash. The light subsided, and a single Digimon was revealed. It had sickly white skin and its hair was white with back streaks. Its armour was grayish in colour, with the right chest plate being adorned with a skull, and the left with an eagle. The legs were armoured and the right knee was adorned with a bat and the left another eagle. The boots were steel caped, but the right had a skull on it. The arms were long and armoured, both with clawed hands. The shoulder guards were different however. The right had a black orb embedded into it and the left had a white orb. His face had a twisted look of cruel and kind, with a black marking covering the right eye. He had long pointed fangs and on his forehead, a symbol of a sun and moon joined. The final touch, were the wings extending from his back. The left was a large angel wing, and the right was a devil wing. The man stood at least ten feet tall. ‘ChaosWarlockmon’ he announced with a hiss. Dystopia laughed and mocked a bow. ‘Delighted to meet you’ he replied. Chaos said nothing. His image flickered and he was suddenly in front of Dystopia and he immediately kicked him in the face. This odd flicker continued as he shifted to different spots and kept attacking. ‘I’m not sure if I like this guy’ Aban mused. ‘Stand still!’ Dystopia cried. A diseased laugh met him and his back was kicked. Dystopia growled as Chaos appeared in front of him. He began his same diseased laugh and his tongue was hanging out, it was split in the middle. ‘Fool cannot win. Victory unable, lose now. Cannot win’ Chaos laughed. ‘He can’t speak normally’ Aban added. ‘Make sense’ Dystopia demanded. Chaos laughed again and a small grey sphere formed in his hand. He tossed it with his long arm at Dystopia. It hit him and immediately formed a large grey sphere. ‘What is this?’ Dystopia demanded. ‘Destia Sol non Lun’ Chaos replied and began sketching a ten pointed star in the air. The six sides of the sphere began twisting into the same ten pointed stars. Dystopia was confused by this attack. Chaos merely laughed as he raised his hand, and dropped it. From each point black and white energy beams were fired, all aimed at Dystopia, who writhed as each shot pierced him. Quickly, Chaos stopped the attacks, and began to turn his finger until the shapes formed into glowing spheres. Chaos brought his hands together and they all crashed into Dystopia with a white burst of light. With the attack done, Chaos turned his attention to the group behind him. He laughed as he summoned his staff, which was adorned with a demon wing shaped blade and an angel wing blade. In the centre was a grey orb. Chaos raised his staff, and took aim. ‘DUCK!’ Lydia shouted and they did as a wave of chaos went over them. Chaos growled, and prepared for another shot, that was until he heard laughter. He looked over his shoulder to see Dystopia in his mega form. He gripped the bleeding stump that was his left arm. ‘Inconceivable, ludicrous, impossible’ he stated. Chaos laughed. ‘I would not be laughing, as now, doom is upon you’ Dystopia laughed as his arm re-grew. ‘Allow me to show you it’ he added and the dark void filled with light. The rue walls were machine like, with streaks of data glowing in them. There was a large column in the centre, were a green tank waited. Inside, Oblivimon’s egg beat. It was covered in cracks. Dystopia began laughing as the egg and tank shattered, releasing a thick crimson mist, but nothing else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 OMG!!! DUN DUN DUUUUUUUNNN!!!!!!!!!!! OBLIVIMON IS LOOSE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 What Kuja said.Awesome Chapter,BrokenHeart,I might submit a character later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Keh, if anyone can guess what his inspiration was, they win a free not-too-important spoiler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 OBLIVIMON HAS AWAKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!RUN FOR YOUR LIVES PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! who's inspiration are we talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 You ain't seen nothing yet, especially what happens to Dystopia, who is still bloody well alive. Of course he is thriving on his own spite at this moment but that is beside the point Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 ChaosWarlockmon's attack reminds me of Piccolo's Hellzone Grenade attack off DBZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 It is similar, inspired from an old game I once played. Destia Sol non Lun traps the foe in a grey sphere, and six sides become double pentagrams that fire dark and light energies, then the attack culminates into 6 chaos spheres that explode, dealing immense damage, but I needed Dystopia alive so he didn't die, just got hurt, badly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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