.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Yes, but that's like an eternity for me and this fic, because this is(and I am honest) the best Digimon Fan Fic I've ever read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 You flatter me ya know, it feels kinda sickening really. Not used to it. -_-' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Well, get used to it, cause you write a good fan fic here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Yes, it survived, I guess that makes it good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 It is a good fan fic, that why i prefer to wait till the next one appears so i'm not rushing Broken and make him accidently lower his standards of writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 True, rushing me prevents me from magically pulling plot out of my butt as I write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 But I am an impatient one! Aaah, the irony. I am lazy and impatient. What a combo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Yeah, and yet you manage to update at least 3 times a week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Well, that's just minor updates, not entire chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 You still get it done fast. Also, who guessed that this was Drake's partner? But I really hate filler Chapters. [spoiler=Chapter 32: History of Pain 101] As Steph and Drake along with the Digimon descended the stairs, Yellow was waiting expectantly. ‘Is everyone alright?’ Steph asked. ‘Yes, they’re at Hospital Town, but, actually, I can’t be sure. I left to come straight back here, and I see the young man finished his task’ Yellow replied, looking at Drake. ‘Yes, these paths are different, they want you to face what you can’t’ Drake replied solemnly. ‘That was the point boy; the paths are self reflection exercises. So naturally they would do so’ Yellow explained. ‘Indeed’ Gaomon muttered and the boarded. The Digimon distanced themselves from Drake, but Steph sidled over and sat next to him. He didn’t notice her, but just stared at his feet, stroking the egg in his arms. ‘I’m glad to have my Drake back’ Steph said. Drake looked up at her. ‘I guess so, in the Path of Redemption, I saw a memory from the past, including the one where we both drew each other. That same picture which is in your pocket’ Drake stated. Steph looked at him, then reached into her pocket and found an old piece of paper. ‘That wasn’t there before’ she muttered as it opened up, to show a detailed picture of them both. ‘Fate plays amusing tricks on people. You remembered an item from the past and it came to you. Max did something along those lines’ Drake added. Her eyes opened and she tore them from the picture to Drake. ‘Max, but he’s dead’ Steph replied. ‘He said that he didn’t need reminding. When he died, he was given another chance. He was reborn as Arcadia, who released me from prison and got me to kill Jiji, to strengthen our resolve’ Drake explained. ‘Odd, why would he do such a thing?’ Steph asked. ‘To strengthen ourselves for destiny. Max was right, I was meant for the hero’s destiny’ Drake stated. The egg began to rattle and fell to the floor, where it shattered to reveal a small Digimon that glew and turned into a small purple monster with two pointy ears. ‘I’m Yaamon, nice to meet ya’ it said. Drake picked it up again. ‘I suppose it would be practical for him to get an Impmon. But it would be even more practical for him to get the Demon of Wrath, Daemon’ Gaomon thought. ‘Well, we have nothing to do whilst we wait for Steph and the others’ Charlie shouted as the group had been rummaging through the ruins. ‘Less slothful shouting, more worky’ Naomi shouted over the ruins. ‘Ugh, she pisses me off’ Vixen whispered to Charlie as they lifted a large boulder. Underneath it was a crushed broomstick. ‘Hey guys, I found a broom’ Vixen called. ‘F**K!’ a voice shouted. Lydia raced over the ruins and grabbed it from the hollow left behind, with Lop holding onto her hair for dear life. ‘This isn’t Baba’s, just a normal broom’ Lop reassured Lydia as she held up the broom. ‘Good, I just hope Baba’s alright’ Lydia replied, biting back a sob. ‘Hey guys, I found some strange markings’ Dom reported with a shout. The group followed his voice to a ruined building with some strange code on it. ‘Baba and most of Hospital Town are at Dramonia’ Lop read as she read the symbols. ‘How do you know that?’ Jason asked. ‘I don’t know; must’ve been a flicker of memory from my past life. It was said that I used to work for Azulongmon, who was a great dragon. Must’ve learnt it from him’ Lop mused. ‘Possible, but not probable’ Kev stated. ‘How do you know so much about the world, despite being human?’ Lady asked. ‘I’ve been in this world for six years. You learn these things by exploring. Although, my mind was flooded with knowledge when I first met- Well, first made Magnetmon. We explored over the world, visiting new places. Until last year, when I was captured by Lord Argos. I wallowed in that miserable little cell until you guys rescued me. But, I didn’t originally want to join you guys, but the holy City was the only place with intelligent life, and I couldn’t travel without supplies. What pissed me off the most was that my map Magnet and I had tirelessly worked on was destroyed when Argos’ castle was’ Kev explained. ‘Hmmm, I remember Argos. He was a total. I originally had to take orders from him until I could get Sal to the ultimate level, then I was given my plot of land. But now that jerk Dystopia fired me, so revenge shall be mine’ Naomi vowed. ‘Yes we heard you the first four times. The only reason that we care is because without you, their forces are weaker and ours are now stronger. We have a legion of ultimate Digimon and a mega, for now’ Dom replied. ‘Are you talking back to me?’ Naomi demanded. ‘No man’ Dom said instinctively. ‘Damn it, I don’t take orders from your anymore’ he added with annoyance. ‘How did you get Dom to obey you?’ Aban asked curiously. Naomi shook her arms a little and her chest bounced. Aban just stared at them as they jiggled slightly. ‘It’s called a level eighty male control spell. Only women can do it’ Naomi explained with a smirk to Vixen. ‘I know that one’ Vixen said with annoyance and did so, with Charlie and the other male Digimon watching. ‘You should know oblivion awaits you’ a familiar cruel voice stated. ‘Damnit, not this little turd again’ Dom moaned. Alex was glaring at them with a healed Shadow by his side. ‘Why can’t you just bugger off? We’re very busy’ Vixen shouted. ‘So you can steal whatever property that your Council didn’t destroy?’ Alex countered. ‘No, we’re trying to find survivors’ Vixen answered. ‘So you can torture them? Enough, I won’t hear anymore, you’ll die now’ Alex threatened. ‘You know, let’s just ignore him. He’ll get bored soon’ Charlie suggested. There were murmurs of agreement and they all turned their backs to Alex, who did the anime drop whilst Shadow got the sweat drop. ‘They’re ignoring us’ Alex said furiously. ‘It would appear so. Maybe they don’t think we’re worth the effort?’ Shadow suggested. ‘I WILL NOT BE IGNORED BY THE LIKES OF THE DARK COUNCIL!’ Alex screamed. Lydia turned to him and made the shush motion. ‘The grown-ups are talking dear, run along and play’ she added and turned to the group again. Alex’s eye twitched a little as Shadow took a step away from him. ‘I’M OLDER THAN YOU!’ he shouted. ‘Act like it’ was his reply. Alex actually began to shake with anger. ‘Maybe they’re not Dark Council’ Shadow suggested. ‘They have the grey Digivice’ Alex angrily replied. ‘Look, only one of them does. Maybe they’re telling the truth, after all, you haven’t even asked them who they are’ Shadow added. ‘All of the Dark Council are liars Shadow, we both know that’ Alex stated. ‘I trust your judgment Alex, I cannot do otherwise’ Shadow replied. ‘Good, now attack them’ Alex ordered. Shadow just stood there and stared at Alex. ‘What are you waiting for?’ Alex demanded. ‘They’re not battle ready, I can’t just attack them unawares, that’s something the Dark Council would do. And from what I see, they’re not attacking us whilst we squabble. Is that not evidence enough?’ Shadow asked. ‘It’s a ruse’ Alex answered. He just noticed that the other were watching him intently. ‘You are a sad strange little man, and you have my pity’ Aban said. ‘Wow, you must really suck if you’re getting pity from Aban’ Dom laughed. Alex just glared at them as they laughed. ‘Its terrible to see the Dark Council has sent out the clowns. What are you going to do, bore me death?’ Alex asked. ‘Honk honk’ Charlie said between laughs. Alex snarled in contempt but found Kev wasn’t laughing. ‘I’m the voice of reason’ Kev said after catching Alex’s glance. ‘What is reason?’ Shadow asked. ‘I’m the one who reasons with the group, they don’t listen course’ Kev replied. ‘Are you all quite finished?’ Alex asked. ‘Give us a minute, this is usually where we mock the enemy’ Keras replied.  Alex waited impatiently as they got up and prepared. ‘Fight me’ Alex ordered. ‘Do we have to? We have more important things to do than deal with little d**kweeds like yourself’ Naomi said. ‘Like what?’ Alex asked. ‘Salvage, find any signs that there are survivors’ Lydia replied. ‘So you can finish them off yourself?’ Alex asked. ‘That’s it, I’m sick of this guy, Lop, Digivolve’ Lydia ordered. Lop evolved into Antylamon and stood tall, looking down on Shadow. ‘The bigger they are, the harder they fall’ Shadow recited as he flew up and kicked Lop. She toppled over as the others scattered. She just watched as Shadow came closer from above, but then swiped and knocked him away with her Bunny Blade. ‘Pathetic’ Lop stated as Shadow got up. ‘Really? Well, then laugh off the Black Tornado’ Shadow hissed and rushed at her, rotating with black energy and took out her side. Shadow cocked his head to Lop, who stood up and began to rock. ‘Meditation Cure’ she intoned and the wound healed. ‘What the hell?’ Alex cried. ‘It’s called healing, deal with it Asipatravana’ Lop musgly replied and began to spin into a pinkish tornado. ‘You won’t hit me like that’ Shadow pointed out and raised off the ground. Though barely seen, Lop smiled as pink energy began to form. ‘Bunny Blade’ she added and waves of energy caught up and struck Shadow into another ruin. ‘Ko, we have to help Lop and Lydia. Digivolve’ Jason suggested. Ko nodded and evolved as Shadow dived at Lop. ‘Homing Laser’ Ko cried and multiple lasers were fired from his fingers and shot through their mark. ‘Two on one isn’t playing fair’ Shadow stated. ‘Yes it is, you’re mega’ Ko pointed out. ‘Jason, let’s modify’ Lydia suggested whilst the Digimon chated. ‘Modify, Royal Claw’ Jaso shouted, firing a data beam. ‘Modify, Pressure Axes’ Lydia added. Both beams struck the Digimon. On Ko’s right hand a larg golden claw formed, he tested it out readily, clicking each finger. A large pole axe with a happy bunny face materialised in Lop’s arms, she twirled it experimentally. ‘What the hell?’ Alex asked. ‘It’s only fair that he should know’ Charlie said. ‘It’s called Modify, we use it to give our Digimon new weaponry, you can do it to’ Charlie shouted. Alex was perturbed, but he raised his Digivice to Shadow. ‘Modify, Black War Claws’ he halfcommitedly shouted. A beam was emitted and struck and struck Shadow. His left and right claws began to reshapen, turning into larger and crueller versions. ‘Thanks a lot’ Lop said angrily as they fended off these new weapons. Shadow was rampantaly striking at them, until Ko saw one exposed bit with his sensors. He immediataly lashed out and clawed the chest plate, leaving a deep mark. Shadow growled and leapt back. ‘This is my favourite armour, time to die’ he mindlessly growled and leapt into the air. ‘TERRA DESTROYER!’ he roared, forming a gargantuan sphere of darkness. He released it on Lop and Ko. ‘Full Moon Blaster!’ Mirage shouted. A large yellow blast flew over them and collided with the sphere, pushing it back at Shadow, who had to dodge. Both attacks were launched off. ‘More of them?’ Alex demanded and looked up. Mirage had his claws raised as Drake, Steph, Impmon, Demi and BK were in his other hand. ‘Sorry we’re late’ Demi apologised. Alex quickly scanned over these newcomers, but the ones who caught his attention, was Demi and BK. Shadow landed next to him. ‘The Twin Seeds of Dark and Light’ Alex mused. ‘Yes, this proves they’re not Dark Council’ Shadow said hastily. ‘Maybe, we’ll see’ Alex darkly said. Steph watched them both, then whispered to Charlie. ‘Who’re these two?’ ‘Some weirdos who are convinced that we’re Dark Council Tamers’ he whispered. ‘Did you tell him we aren’t?’ she asked. ‘He seems convinced that we are’ Charlie replied. ‘Is he crazy?’ ‘Most likely’. Steph mulled this over, then nodded. She walked over to Alex. ‘Greetings, my name is Stephanie McPhilleas, mayor of the Holy City’ she politely said and held out her hand. Alex pushed it aside. ‘I don’t care who you are, all I care about is destroying liars’ he rudely replied. ‘Where did you get your manners from? The dollar ninety-nine bin at K-Mart?’ she demanded. ‘It’s none of your concern Dark Council warmonger’ Alex replied. ‘We’re not Dark Council, we’re out to kill them, which you seem to be as well’ Steph semi-calmly replied. ‘Prove it’. ‘Fine, we’re going to stop Dystopia from hatching the Digi-egg containing Oblivimon which he obtained from draining the data from Demi and BK over there. We were forced to flee from Hospital Town to protect them’ Steph explained. Alex looked her over carefully. ‘You’re telling the truth?’ he questioned. ‘Every word of it’ Steph assured. ‘I don’t belive you’ Alex replied. ‘You wouldn’t even believe your own grandmother’ Steph countered in annoyance and walked away. ‘That insufferable little turd’ Steph grumbled as she walked back. ‘We’re wasting time here. These losers will have to wait’ Alex commented to Shadow and they began to leave town through a blasted hole. They were on the other side. ‘Why Alex Sable, so nice to see you again’ a pleasant voice said. They both turned to see Enigma leaning on a solid piece of wall. ‘So nice to see you again’ he added. ‘Enigma’ Alex hissed. ‘The one and only’. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Impmon? That was unexpected. But fillers are good sometimes. It makes the readers exited about the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Yeah, since by looking at Drake's modify list, it has more than one line. But this makes 3 demon lords now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Yeah, it does. I'm still asking WHEN the Vixen/Charlie wedding will happen! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 AAnd by know i would've thought that you know I hate spoilers. I just revealed the proposal for my own amusement. But, two Digivices, two lines. One champion still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 It was a good filler Broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 @Brokenheart15: Well, YOU told me to ask you when, so it's kind of your own fault. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 It was a childish argument between two sets of prats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Please let there be another mega appearing in the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 There will be, Enigma is here remember? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 I meant one of the others digivolving to mega Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Just hope it won't be Diaboromon, cause then he will delete all of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 i don't think he will but i depends on what Broken has planned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Keras isn't wild, he's a contained Diaboromon. But Enigma being there means there WILL be a mega Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 YAY!!! can't wait to see who it is. Â erm... i might need to slightly change the descriptions for Magnetmon's mega's moves. I don't like how i describe them to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 D=Â Chronosmon not good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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