Yankee Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 When is the next chapter comin? =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 When is the next chapter comin? =D ^ This Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I'm working now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 That's good to hear. I can barely wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Hey, I was actually wondering, did you ever give Drake's friend a name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Oh, the one that Devidramon ate. Well, call him Max. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Oh, that was his name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Yep. Poor Maxie. He got vore'd by a Devidramon...:'( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Still, OMG's, it appears two seperate story lines are happening. Also, this mysterious new assailant was sent by Yankeefan, our newest watcher. [spoiler=Chapter 31: Redemption or Revenge] Yellow once again stopped at the Central Pillar Station. Drake was carried out of the carriage by Gaomon, Steph, Demi and BK. He was left on the platform as Steph confronted the group. ‘Alright, Demi, Gaomon, BK and I need to remain here, so I want you guys to return to Hospital Town by any means you possess. Keras needs help immediately. I won’t need much help here besides Gaoby and the twins for dealing with Drake, so go with all haste, using your Digimon to fight’ Steph explained. ‘Alright, we owe much to Keras; let’s do this’ Charlie added. ‘I’m weak still, but I’ll try to find a data stream to get us there ASAP’ Yellow replied. ‘Good’ Steph said. Yellow slowly began to sidle out and left the station. Steph nodded to the Digimon and they began to carry Drake up the stairs. ‘Path of Redemption’ Steph stated. A Slit in the wall opened into a dark void. They stood Drake up to face it; he began to stir from this. ‘Get in there’ Steph said and kicked him in, the slit closing behind him as he woke up. ‘What the hell?’ he asked. Drake looked into the darkness annoyedly. ‘This must be the new confinement Steph made for me’ he spat and walked into the darkness, until he found his way into a dark room. In the centre was a simple stone table with a dip filled with water. He cautiously walked over and looked into it. The water rose up and formed a mirror like surface in front of him. It shimmered and the image formed into a picture. ‘You know Drake, you’re the best’ the image said. It solidified into a vision of young Drake and Steph; they were having ice cream. ‘Why is that?’ young Drake asked. ‘You just are, I know you’ll be the best always’ young Steph answered. Drake scattered the image in disgust and looked for an exit. The only thing he found was a full-length mirror, which he looked into. The image reflected a phantom creature. ‘Hello Drake, welcome to the Path of Redemption’ it said. ‘Arcadia’ Drake said. ‘Very good, you figured that out at least. But now, the Path is here to prove that anger and hate are not the true ways. It is a testimony to the fact that almost any atrocity can be forgiven. So I have existed to do so, to help everyone walk from the darkness into dawn then morning’ Arcadia explained. ‘I will never change from what I am, no Path is going to prove otherwise’ Drake replied and the mirror cracked and shattered, revealing a new walkway. ‘Deeper into darkness’ Drake muttered as he past it. Aban wasn’t talking, leaving an odd silence in the carriage. Lydia walked over and sat next to him. ‘Keras will be okay. The noble always survive, he saved Vixen, now she can do the same’ Lydia said kindly. ‘That’s right; I am going to do all I can to save Keras. He is a part of this team and our friends, we won’t let him die’ Vixen added. Aban gave a sort of smile. ‘I know you would, but I am afraid he might decay at any moment’ he replied. ‘Sorry to spoil your happy moment, but I’ve detected a data stream that is crossing the lines that can take us near Hospital Town’ Yellow said helpfully. ‘Take it’ Charlie ordered. ‘Done and done, and I mean done’ Yellow replied and began to speed up. From the TV monitor they could see a purple column on the lines and closing fast. The screen is filled with the purple and then gone. They all looked outside and noticed very little change, until the tunnel opens up into a destroyed station, with a bit of enough platforms to exit onto. Yellow stops at this part and the carriage doors open. ‘After you’ Lydia said to Jason. Drake had found the same room again. With a sigh of annoyance he walks over to the water which floats into another image, this time of Drake with Ex and War by his side and the remains of the Devidramon in front of him. ‘You have helped us to locate this menace sent by Argos, we thank you young human for this service’ War said and turned from Drake with Ex. ‘You’re not going anywhere’ young Drake said. War looked back at Drake, who locked eyes. War almost flinched at what he could see, unbound hatred were in his eyes. ‘You’re going to do a service for me now. We’re going to end this menace once and for all’ young Drake said. ‘What do you mean?’ Ex asked. ‘You’re going to help me destroy all Digimon’ young Drake told them coldly. They both shivered, as if he was exerting a chill onto them. Young Drake took another step and glared into both of them. ‘Come’ he ordered and walked out of the cave. Both the Digimon followed him out and the water screen shattered. ‘I remember that day over and over again. To remind me what I promised to do’ Drake answered the mirror as it shattered. He entered the dark hallway into a seven-sided room, each lit by black candlesticks. ‘It is time’ Arcadia said as his black mass formed. ‘Indeed, I am going to finally finish you off?’ Drake replied. ‘Would you really kill your best friend? The one you tried so hard to save?’ Arcadia asked. ‘What?’ Drake asked. The shadows began to dissipate to reveal a hideous creature with seven legs and a sword impaled into the knees. ‘Hideous aren’t I?’ but I didn’t always look like this’ Arcadia commented. ‘What did you look like?’ Drake asked. Darkness coated Arcadia, leaving in its wake a darks skinned teen wearing a red shirt and jeans. He was wearing black runners and his hair was in braids. Drake was shocked by this sight. ‘Max?’ he asked. ‘Yes Drake, it is I’ Max replied. ‘But you’re dead’ Drake stated. ‘Like I needed reminding Drake. For you see, n the Digital World, all life forms are recompiled and reborn. Humans are given exceptions to this however, I was. Because, you thought Devidramon ate me, he even boasted it. But he didn’t, for I was left in a back part of the cave. I saw you order War and Ex to kill him. My very last vision was enslaving them to you. I shed my final tear as death took me, but I was given a new chance. Floating in a void, a voice asked me ‘do you wish to save him?’ I knew instantly that meant you. I forgot how many times I answered yes, but I was also given this form to pay for your future sins. As Ogudomon, I am the incarnations of all sins, with the ability to atone for all of them. But, your sins cannot be atoned by anyone but yourself. I want you to lose your anger, your hate and fears, lose all your evil to slay me. Only then can I find peace and so can you’ Max explained. ‘You think all I have done can be forgotten by simply saying ‘I forgive myself?’ Drake demanded. ‘No, you will search deeply for your heart. You forgot what else you fight for; your sister, Stephanie. You promised to protect her, but she’s doing a better job than you are. You promised you would always protect her after Devidramon got your family and mine. How could you have forgotten?’ Max asked. ‘I never forgot, by ending Digimon, I can ensure she will always be protected’ Drake replied. ‘This might take a while’ Max sighed. The destruction was incredible. Lydia gasped in horror as the walls were trashed and the buildings ruined. The hospital was still in good shape. Around it, armour and weaponry littered the ground. Jason looked around amongst the debris and found an armoured claw. ‘This was Cyber’s gauntlet’ he remarked and returned to the group. ‘Cyber wouldn’t have died so readily. A hand is nothing’ Lydia said. ‘Well then, prepare to die so readily’ a cruel voice said. The group looked around and then up. On a ruined battlement was a human male black leather coat and brown jeans. His black hair was done up in a ponytail with a streak of red running through it. At his side was a tall black dragon. ‘A BlackWarGreymon’ Vixen said in surprise. ‘Hmph, and too think I thought we were well known in the Dark Council’s ranks’ the boy said in a fake hurt voice. ‘They must really be losing it if they signed up a pair of children’ the BWG added in a similar hurt voice. ‘We don’t work for the Dark Council you quack’ Kevin said in annoyance. ‘Don’t lie, I can see you possess the same device I do’ the boy countered and held his left arm up to reveal a grey Digivice. ‘Where the hell are they getting those Digivices from?’ Aban asked. ‘Hmph, you guys don’t even look strong, you’ll make easy pickings’ BWG said and flew down to attack them. ‘Another reject from the Dark Council, hold them off whilst we get to the hospital’ Charlie ordered. The Digimon saluted as they all evolved to ultimate. They then faced the hostile as Keras was carried into the ruined city. ‘Hmmmm, four ultimates, that makes things too easy. But that robot is unfamiliar, what do you think Shadow?’ the boy asked. ‘Hard to tell. It has energy similar to one of those humans, my guess that the Dark Council is creating Digimon from humans’ BWG reported. ‘Disgusting’ the boy said. Electro whirred in annoyance and his hands were covered in energy, which he grabs Shadow with. ‘Oh, Shadow has metal armour, this’ll be easy’ Lop suggested. Electro floated into the city with Shadow in tow. Once in an acceptably ruined area, he began to spin, dragging Shadow about and through many of the ruined buildings until he tired and floated up, spinning and then slamming Shadow into the ground. The Digimon caught up and looked at Shadow. He merely got up out of the hole and dusted off dirt that was on him. ‘That’s not possible’ Vixen cried. ‘Black Tornado’ Shadow cried and drilled through the group, slamming them all into buildings. ‘Well, this sucks’ Ko said. ‘But you have us’ Jason shouted. The Digimon turned to see the humans and Keras had returned. Keras was healed, but held up by Aban. ‘Your fake compassion sickens me’ the boy cried as he leapt down and faced them. ‘So does your face’ a sarcastic voice replied. The boy turned and spied a girl in a black dress with a female demon by her side and some teenager with another demon at his side. ‘Dom, and Naomi?’ Charlie asked. ‘Yeah, here we are. But what a dump, I told Dystopia to keep the town intact, but no’ Naomi said. ‘Who are you?’ the boy demanded. ‘Manners, who are you?’ Naomi countered. ‘I am Alex Sable, enemy to all of the Dark Council and all liars’ Alex declared, giving Naomi a better look at his face. Small love hearts surrounded her as she looked at him, then Dom, and back to Alex repeatedly. She eventually falls onto her knees and began too madly mutter. ‘Is that normal?’ Shadow asked Lady, who was massaging her temples. ‘Yeah, this is called her hot overload. It happens when she is in the presence of two hot boys and can’t decide which she likes better’ Lady explained. Alex spotted Naomi’s grey Digivice. ‘You work for the Dark Council too; unforgivable’ Alex shouted. Shadow complied and attacked, but was blocked by Astamon. ‘Out of the way’ he ordered. ‘No, he won’t be doing that. Modify Chain Gun’ Dominic replied, pointing his Digivice at Astos. A large minigun appeared in his hands, which he held up easily. By holding it with one hand, Astos put an unlit cigar into his mouth. ‘I’m Don f**king Astos. You mess with me, you messing with the best. You wanna play? Okay, let’s play! SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND!’ Astos shouted and let rip. The bullets fired ricocheted of Shadow’s armour, but they also managed to pierce the fleshy joints. Shadow was taking each blow, as even his armour began to crack. Astos stopped firing, and took the cigar from his mouth and put the end onto the barrel, where it lit up. He replaced it into his mouth. ‘Smokin’ he added. Shadow fell onto one knee. ‘We have to retreat Alex, they’re to powerful’ Shadow said. Alex roared loudly, but allowed Shadow to pick him up and fly off. ‘Awesome work Don Astos’ Keras said as the minigun vanished. ‘I know’ Astos replied. ‘But why are you here?’ Jason asked as he was shoved aside by Lydia, who hugged Dom. ‘More to the point as to why she’s here’ Lydia added. ‘You wanna take this?’ Dom asked. Naomi humphed loudly. ‘I was fired by that d**khead Dystopia. He claimed ‘I have the invincible Digimon Oblivimon now, your use has ended’ Naomi replied. ‘Yeah, so, I told her that we should join up with you guys, since there is nowhere else to go’ Dom added. ‘Are you, happy to see us?’ Charlie asked. ‘A little, I’m glad to see civilization, or what’s left of it’ Dom replied lightly. Drake was staring at his once friend. ‘You were reborn to teach me a lesson, do you want me to believe that, obviously Arcadia, and you are just tricking me’ Drake said. ‘Are you convicted that all Digimon are bad?’ Max asked. ‘Yes’ Drake replied. ‘And yet you allied yourself too two, and your sister too many, and she’s barely been hurt. Do you not find that odd?’ Max enquired. ‘Never hurt the prisoner, they’re more valuable alive’ Drake answered. ‘You can’t get it, can you? Digimon are wonderful beings, with feelings, some form of emotion and life. Why do you feel you can take that away?’ Max asked passionately. ‘Because, that was my destiny’ Drake replied sadly. ‘Your destiny?’ Max asked. ‘In my confinement, Reaper said to me ‘destruction is your destiny human, welcome it’. I heard that over and over again, and I know it truly is my destiny to destroy’ Drake stated. ‘That can’t be true, your destiny is with the other humans and Stephanie, you have to save the world’ Max preached. ‘It is too late, I am too far gone’ Drake said sadly. ‘Do you wish to hear it?’ Max asked. ‘What?’ Drake asked. ‘Do you wish you could hear your sister say ‘I forgive you?’ Max asked. ‘What does it matter to you?’ Drake replied. ‘It mattered to me, because we were friends, sure, she was annoying, but she’s grown stronger, she has fought hard, but she needs a brother love by her side’ Max added. ‘But destiny’ Drake began. ‘TO HELL WITH DESTINY! Forge a new one, from love and iron. Carve a destiny from the oldest tree alive, planted and tended with love and care. Destiny changes everyday, and your sister needs you’ Max grandly proposed. Drake turned away. ‘It is never too late’ Max added emotionally. A sword appeared in Drake’s hand, and he turned. ‘THEN LET THIS BE MY PARTING GIFT TO ANGER!’ Drake roared and impaled his friend. ‘That, was without anger or hate, no sense of malice whatsoever. Thank you Drake, as Arcadia fell, I have brought peace to your heart. Farewell dear friend’ Max said and faded. Drake looked at the blade, it was cobalt blue, with a purple gem fastened to the hilt. One final mirror appeared, in it, was a white Digi-egg with purple markings. The mirror shattered, but the egg remained. Drake looked at it, and took it. He walked into the hollow left by the mirror. Steph waited patiently, longing to know if it had worked. She heard footsteps, and the slit opened, to reveal Drake with a Digi-egg in his arms, and his eyes seemed clearer. Both brother and sister stood, carefully watching the other. ‘I forgive you’ Steph shouted and embraced him. ‘Max and I have waited eight years to hear that’ was his reply. [spoiler=Chapter 8 Bloopers][spoiler=IT WON'T TURN OFF!!!!]Aban and Keras volunteered after it was discovered that Dominic’s button was also wired to him. ‘Well, I am a philosopher of sorts. I am always thinking, such as the reason for the existence of worlds, and why the clouds are plotting to kill me’ he explained. Jiji immediately shocked him by pressing down the Aban and Dominic buttons. Aban screamed in agony as the volts went through him. His agonised screams continued as Jiji kept tapping the buttton repeatedly. 'IT WON'T TURN OFF!' Jiji shouted. An assistant races in and snips the wires. Aban and Keras smoking slightly and shaking. 'Coffee break' Dom announced. [spoiler=Moon Cherry]The door closed with a slam and Vixen walked over to stand behind Gaomon. She slowly lowered her head to his ear. ‘You know, we can get away with all sorts of naughty things whilst we’re alone, what do you think?’ she whispered. ‘I’m, I’m good, my heart only belongs to Miss Stephanie, I’m sorry to let you down this way’ he replied. Vixen turned the chair around and spread Gaomon’s legs. She slowly began to lower her head. ‘I didn’t say I wanted your heart Moon Cherry’ she said. Gaomon began to snicker a little. 'You said Moon Cherry right? It's mon cherie' Gaomon laughed. 'I know' Vixen replied and they kissed. [spoiler=Kinky?]‘You know, I had thought that this would seem simple enough, but Jiji, I must ask, why are we tied to the chairs and have these odd wires attached to our heads?’ Aban asked. All the tamers, their partners, Demi and BK were sitting on steel chairs in one of the meeting halls of the central tower. They were bound by ropes and had wires attached to their foreheads. ‘Simple, you see, I am a colossal pervert. No form of sexual depravation is too low for me. Be it human, animal or mineral, I'll doing anything to anything' Jiji declared. 'Kinky' Vixen replied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 great chapter Broken. I was hoping for someone's digimon to turn mega though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Aaaawww.... Destiny has given Drake a new chance, and the final scene with Drake and Steph was just......a masterpiece. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I guess you knew who Arcadia really was Kuja? And Fallen, the introduction of a new enemy and the redeming of another was not enough? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Godfather reference ftw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 It was enough Broken but i did hope to see another digimon become mega still. and Fenrir it's a Scarface reference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I always get mixed up >_> I blame my friend for forcing me to watch both Scarface and Godfather at the same time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Oh well, but, aren't you curious as to what Drake's digi-egg contains? And I hoped you enjoyed that moment Fenrir, hat's the Chain Gun modify. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I'm guessing Arkadimon. Has to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Dystopia is Arkadimon mega. You're being sarcastic right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I saw you applied to the Featured Fan Fic stuff. Too bad it wasn't accepted. And hope that Umbra Doesn't lock this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I edited that chapter, but honesty is a virtue, if I didn't tell him, he would've found out anyways. But it doesn't matter to me wehther or not it was accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 It's still a great fic to us, thats what matters. Besides Fenrir told me that Umbra isn't really into digimon so it may of been a biased decision. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 It's still a great fic to us' date=' thats what matters. Besides Fenrir told me that Umbra isn't really into digimon so it may of been a biased decision.[/quote'] Idiot, he wasn't biased. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 and how do you know that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Because then Kuja's wouldn't be up there. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 but kuja's is a mass crossover so it didn't really soully concentrate on digimon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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