.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 The chapter had a Survivor reference, but it was great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 what reference kuja? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 The name of the chapter is the name of a song that Survivor made, called 'Eye of The Tiger' ;) Anyways, great chapter. Is Steph up next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 "I've seen two year olds with more balls than you." Â This reminds me that Baihu is still my favorite Sovereign. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 yes she is kuja, all four trials are complete Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 I wonder how her's will go then. she might even have to question her own ablities as a leader. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 Well, DUUUH! As of now, she's acting like a communist dictator! Which isn't good as a leader... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 Well' date=' DUUUH! As of now, she's acting like a communist dictator! Which isn't good as a leader...[/quote'] Depends actually, but I won't go into the whole hitlerwasagoodleadertechnically speech. In any case, I hope something interesting happens next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 Well' date=' DUUUH! As of now, she's acting like a communist dictator! Which isn't good as a leader...[/quote'] Depends actually, but I won't go into the whole hitlerwasagoodleadertechnically speech. In any case, I hope something interesting happens next chapter. What Fenrir said^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 And something interesting may in fact happen......next next chapter. But isn't it amazing that I've almost reached 30 chapters? And not to seem arrogant, but I think this is the most popular digi-fic currently, sure, I have about 3 posters, but you guys are the best ones to have. [spoiler=Chapter 28: The Golden Dragon Lady] Steph was playing a card game with Demi, BK, Lop and Lydia whilst Gaomon was looking down the tunnels for signs of the others. ‘Go fish’ Demi said. ‘Demi, we’re playing black jack’ and I didn’t even ask you for a seven, so you can put it away’ Lydia said. Demi frowned as he looked at his cards. ‘Oh, do you have any threes?’ he asked. ‘Ugh, why did we let them play again? Their minds are like plates of warm jelly, totally gone. I hate the fact that they won’t remember their lives’ Lydia grumbled. ‘Yes, they were obnoxious little punks, but at least they didn’t act like toddlers, but there is nothing we can do. Kev said that there is an extreme few that regain their memories and these two obviously weren’t part of that few. They have to start again from the beginning, not good for helping destiny, but we were charged in guarding, which we shall do’ Lydia replied. ‘Hit me’ Lop said. BK made a fist but was stopped by Lydia and Steph. ‘But she said too, I don’t get this game. It’s called black jack, so why don’t we have maces?’ BK asked. ‘What?’ Demi asked. ‘You know, those mace things called black jacks’ BK explained. ‘Hey, stop playing your card games, I see a light from the western tunnel’ Gaomon shouted. Lydia got up quickly with Lop in her arms and ran to the platform. ‘That’s Jason’s Trailmon ride, White’ Lydia shouted. She watched eagerly as White rolled to the platform and the carriage doors opened. Jason and Ko stepped out of it. ‘Thanks for the exercise kid, I needed a run’ White said and moved to the central platform. It span and rose up into the roof. It then descended without White on it. ‘How was it?’ Lydia asked eagerly. ‘It was interesting. You see, I managed to evolve Ko to ultimate and we fought this giant white tiger that could turn things into rusty statues’ Jason explained. ‘We as in me human; you conveniently pointed out his weak spot and I beat him’ Ko added. ‘So what power did he give you?’ Lop asked. ‘Not sure, we got given a strange sphere, and that was it really. Oh, I was also given data to a powerful bug Digimon or something, I don’t get it really’ Jason answered. ‘I don’t either, but I assume it’s another mega form that I could utilize’ Ko said. ‘So, has anyone else gotten back?’ Jason asked. ‘No, you were the first’ Lydia replied and took him back to the group. ‘So, the only one short of ultimate is Lydia’ Steph said after hearing the story. ‘Yeah, how did you get Ko to ultimate?’ Lydia added. ‘Well, this mysterious voice told me that we both need to be willing to let go of weaknesses and embrace our courage or something. Ko evolved when I found that he was ready to become stronger but I wasn’t. so I tossed that aside and he evolved into this really cool golden beetle guy’ Jason explained. ‘Yeah, oh look, it seems we have some new guests’ Gaomon said and pointed to the northern tunnel. Green slowly trundled to the platform where Gaomon and Steph were waiting and stopped. Kevin and Magnet hopped off the carriage, and he was smiling. ‘Wow, that’s new make no mistake. So how was your journey Kevin?’ Steph asked. ‘It was interesting to say the least. I outwitted a giant two headed turtle named Ebonwumon and was given a digi-core in exchange’ Kevin replied. ‘Jason got a digi-core as well, but his was white’ Gaomon remarked. ‘Yeah, mine was green; at first I thought it was a coincidence but it seems that you receive a digi-core of the sovereigns colour. Therefore, Aban will get a blue digi-core and Charlie a red one. Oh, and a yellow one for yourself Steph’ Kevin stated as they walked back to the group. ‘Very clever, but what was the your sovereign again Jason?’ Steph asked. ‘His name was Baihumon, the most powerful sovereign’ Jason replied. ‘Still, I hoped you learned something from this’ Steph said. ‘Oh I did, I really did’ Kevin said as the image of him and Steph kissing crept into his mind. ‘The Trial of Illusion was an interesting experience, I was given a view of what could be in the future’ he added. ‘Really, what was it about?’ Gaomon asked. ‘We won the battle and saved the world, and I met a girl and married her’ Kevin explained, accidentally letting the married part slip out. ‘Who was she?’ Lydia asked. ‘I don’t know’ Kevin replied. Hey guys, good news, there are lights from the other two tunnels’ Gaomon said, looking from the group. Both Trailmon exited their tunnels and stopped at their platforms, Red had a strange look on his face. ‘I’m glad I don’t have vision in that carriage because those sounds you made frightened me’ he groaned as Charlie and Vixen exited their carriage, their clothes were ruffled. ‘SeeyaAbanandKeras, hopeyoudowellinyourworldquest’ Blue said as Aban and Keras exited their carriage. Both Trailmon made their way to the centre and vanished into the roof. Gaomon cast a wary eye to Vixen, but she barely gave him a glance as they made their way to the group. ‘We’re back now, so, how did you guys go?’ Vixen asked. They each spent some time to tell their tales until Steph intervened. ‘Okay, I know this is nice and all, but, t is time for the Central Pillar challenge, so come on’ she ordered.  They all walked up the stairs and saw an octagonal room with strange slits on each side. There were five pillars, four surrounding a central pillar. On the base pillars was an engraving of a sovereign, and on the central one was a large dragon. There was text below the image that Steph read aloud. ‘Destiny is a fickle thing, Leadering means power. Leadering means making a destiny. Can You?’ she read. ‘Just as understandable as the other pillars, but why do we need to be here for Steph’s challenge?’ Charlie asked. ‘Maybe because the digi-cores are needed to unlock the Trial’ Kevin pointed out as he held his core, it was glowing brightly. He walked over to the turtle pillar and held it up to it; it floated up and rested at the top of the pillar. ‘They granted us power, but we need them to help Steph access her challenge as evidence to her leadership status’ he added as the other put their spheres on their corresponding pillars. There was mechanical whirring and a golden octagonal pad appeared at the foot of the central pillar. ‘Good luck Stephanie, also, remember the message on the pillar, it will help you in the second trial’ Aban said. Steph walked to the pad with Gaomon and took another glance at her group. She smiled as she and Gaomon walked onto the pad. They were in a very familiar white void, with data particles floating about. ‘This doesn’t look like a Trial of Gold’ Steph said. ‘That is because there isn’t one. In the Central Pillar challenge, you face the Trail of Leadership, then you must fight Fanglongmon, the leader of the sovereigns’ a mysterious voice said. ‘Who are you?’ Gaomon demanded, raising his gloves. ‘Hush puppy, you will know in good time I assure you. And I hope you remembered the message on the pillar, as it will help here. Do you know WHY you are here for that matter?’ the voice asked. ‘Of course, I wish to obtain the powers to ascend Gaomon to mega to save the world from the Dark Council and Oblivimon’ Steph replied. ‘Really? Forgive my uncertainty but I was sure that the main reason was to get revenge on your brother Drake, who, is responsible for the deaths of a good many Digimon. Every day his casualty list grows. I know you want to stop him, and are merely using an excuse to get power’ the voice explained smugly. ‘That’s not true’ Steph said. ‘Oh but it is, but it is. You’ve wanted revenge on your brother since he killed your beloved Jijimon at the Holy City. You’ve hated him for that and want to end him, how pitiful do you find that?’ the voice questioned. ‘She doesn’t want to end him, you’re just trying to mess with her mind’ Gaomon growled. ‘Enough puppy’ the voice said cruelly. Gaomon was surrounded by data and he roared with pain as his eyes slowly turned red. He was hunched over a little and began to slobber. ‘What did you do to him?’ Steph demanded. ‘Just reverted him back to his primal instincts. This is your test, you must tame your partner to the point of obeying you without question’ the voice explained. Gaomon began barking loudly at her and held up his gloves. She barely dodged a sloppy punch thrown by him as he fell to the ground and got up again and swung at her, missing again. When she dodged again a split second happened were she reached out and held him by his throat with her right hand. Steph tearfully raised her left hand and a large whip extended from it. She prepared to strike when one thing stopped her. ‘Obeying without question. I don’t want that, I don’t want my partner to obey no matter what. I don’t want to make the mistake Drake did’ she cried. Gaomon managed to break her hold and bit her arm. She held back a gasp as trickles of blood began to flow. She merely put her arm around Gaomon in a hug and whispered into his ear. ‘I’m sorry I wasn’t strong enough to realize it before’ she whispered. Gaomon’s eyes returned to normal as he released Steph, her arm was unharmed. ‘I am touched Stephanie McPhilleas. You proved true leadership not through harsh language and force, but willingness to apologize and letting those who work with you make their own choices. You have moved on to the final challenge against I, Fanglongmon’ the voice said and the pair vanished. They were in a large sanctuary in the sky. Many of the rocks were floating in the sky, with Steph and Gaomon facing an enormous sphere. It shattered and a large dragon detangled itself from the remains of the sphere. ‘Your impressively large’ Steph said. ‘Indeed, and you rather small. Make this a fight to remember the both of you. I am the lord of the sovereigns and the mightiest there could ever be. Prepare to fight with all your might’ Fang roared. ‘If we fail here Steph, I want you to know that it has been an honor partnering with you’ Gaomon said. ‘Save it Gaomon, we’re not going to lose here. I made a promise to Jiji, and I intend to keep it. Initialize Digivolution’ Steph shouted. Gaomon Digivolved into MachGaogamon and Steph was on his shoulder. ‘Modify, Moon Glove’ Steph added. Mach’s right fist slowly warped into a large silver glove with spiked knuckles. ‘So be it, Yellow Circle’ Fang shouted. Eight beams of light were fired from his eyes and Mach immediately jetted away, avoiding the destruction caused. ‘It doesn’t help to destroy the battlefield’ Mach shouted. ‘Koutei no Kiba’ Fang shouted, firing a large blast from his mouth. Mach got out of the way and landed on Fang’s back. They couldn’t see it, but a smile crept up on the dragon’s mouth. ‘Tai Chi’ he roared. Mach and most of Fang’s back were encased in a large rotating sphere. Some of the spines on Fang’s back broke off, except one, which left a much thinner spine. ‘Tai Chi removes the light and darkness from a target, effectively destroying them, farewell’ Fang added. ‘Steph, I don’t think we can survive this’ Mach said. ‘Don’t worry, we can do this, we just need a way out and, odd, all those spines but one broke. Maybe we can stop Tai Chi if we hurt Fang enough’ Steph suggested. Mach had a worried look on his face, but moved through the void in the sphere to the spine, which was engraved with a large dragon. ‘Winning Knuckle’ Mach shouted and slammed the pillar with the Moon Glove. It shattered and so did Fang, their vision blurred. ‘You did it’ Jason shouted. Steph awoke and found she was back at the pillar, with her friends surrounding her. She looked to her side and found Gaomon as well. Steph grabbed and hugged him tightly. ‘We did it’ she corrected. ‘Indeed, never have I seen such devotion from tamer and Digimon. You are truly worthy of the power you sought and of being the leader of your group. I pray for your safety now, as one still needs to achieve their challenge, young Lydia, go froth to the Path of Twilight to seek your truth’ Fang said through a hologram. ‘And you?’ Aban asked. ‘The sovereigns and I can finally rest happily, knowing we have passed our powers to the right people. Farewell humans, till we meet again’ Fang said and vanished. ‘He was right, it is all up to me now. I just wish I knew where the Trial of Twilight was’ Lydia said. The room rumbled as one of the slits on a wall opened.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Stephanie's challenge seemed to be the toughest yet. I mean, If I had a Digimon who had been reduced to his more primal instincts like Gaomon was, I'm not sure if I could tame him. I'm just a regular teenager...:? But also; I Lol'd at Red's remark about Charlie and Vixen getting it on in his carriage!:lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 i knew you would, he has no internal cameras, you could get some really good porn off them two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 And something interesting may in fact happen......next next chapter. But isn't it amazing that I've almost reached 30 chapters? And not to seem arrogant' date=' but I think this is the most popular digi-fic currently, sure, I have about 3 posters, but you guys are the best ones to have.[/quote'] :oops: anyway, good chapter. Steph trials was surprisingly quick but that doesn't bother me at all. What did bother me was on the second paragraph you put Jason as talking about the trial of illusions instead of Kev, also you accidently put Levin instead of Kevin on the second paragraph as well. on a positive note, it is amazing that you've almost reached chapter 30. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 You sure could! But really, Steph's challenge was, according to me, the most important mission. It showed her that leading with brute force is not always the answer. You have to pay attention to your teammates, show them respect and, sometimes, love. Only then will you be a respected leader. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 did you see the mistakes i've mention, Kuja? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 exactly kuja, thanks fallen, i hate typos. they are fixed now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Sorry, I didn't. You and I posted at the same time. But yeah, there were some mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 i think Broken is going to fix the mistakes at some point, well, i hope he will.exactly kuja' date=' thanks fallen, i hate typos. they are fixed now[/quote']Â but you haven't fixed the other, more important, mistake of the 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 what other typos? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 on the second paragraph you put Jason as talking about the trial of illusions instead of Kev Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 i edited that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 ‘We won the battle and saved the world, and I met a girl and married her’ Jason explained, accidentally letting the married part slip out. ‘Who was she?’ Lydia asked. ‘I don’t know’ Jason replied. ^^still that bit Broken. sorry for being a pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 there we go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 good good. i'm still trying to work out who Lydia's opponent is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 you still can;t guess, besides the fact that it is obviously a trial of light or dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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