Fallen Hero Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 3 down, 1 more to go. Great chapter Broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 two to go fallen, steph is the central pillar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 yeah but she can only get to her's when the others have returned though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 yeah, now i get to put some personality into Jason, hooray for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 what personality? i thought he was just a following others type of person Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 Lydia dragged him along, he's pretty much another 'faceless', until his challenge, where I shall bring out some form of personality in him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 well i'll just have to wait and see what personality you give him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 yeah, that is true, course, he is facing the strongest sovereign, baihumon, and he doesn't have an ultimate, but we all know he'll get one before the battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 most probably during one of his first 2 trails Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 i think baihumon's element is metal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 i think it was metal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 yeah, it was. fire, thunder, wood and metal. then fanglong is......light i would think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 not too sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 Chapter 26 was cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 thanks for the input kuja Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 No problem. So, who's next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 This was a triumph, I'm making a note here, huge success, it's hard to overstate my satisfaction. I am singing because that assignment that was hounding me is finished, so many precious hors, it is finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Well, that's good. So that means that the chapter will be up soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 glad to hear that there's no more assignments (for now) thats stopping you from focusing on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 This was a triumph' date=' I'm making a note here, huge success, it's hard to overstate my satisfaction. I am singing because that assignment that was hounding me is finished, so many precious hors, it is finished.[/quote'] *Raises hand* Go Portal reference! Anyways, Blue is still epic win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Next chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 when was the last chapter up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Since long ago, and I hope the next will be up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 I'm soooooooooooooooooo sorry guys, I've been feeling a little lazy lately, but, I have a chapter right here, right now, and possibly another soon. BTW, do you like my chapter titles, I think the amusing ones are better right? [spoiler=Chapter 27: The Eye of the Tiger] Jason was sitting on the carriage chair and twiddling his thumbs, looking out the window nervously. ‘What’s wrong Jason, you look like you’re about to have a stress attack’ Ko said. ‘It’s just that, I feel lost without Lydia. She’s a presence in my life that I need. It’s not like I like her, but, it just feels normal with her by my side’ Jason explained. ‘It’s natural; you’ve spent a good deal of time with us in the Digital World. You were the only humans in Hospital Town until Dominic and his friends came. Although, once I look back on it, I hope everyone is alright. The town was attacked by both Dystopia and Enigma, the damage they would’ve caused was immense, and Dystopia himself killed both Demi and BK’ Ko said. ‘I know, but I’m also worried about this trial. I mean, I’m most likely fighting a mega level, as you call it. And I haven’t even evolved you to ultimate’ Jason stated. ‘I know, but I am sure you’ll help me to evolve when you need me most. Which would be during one of the trials, so don’t fret’ Ko replied. Jason smiled at him. ‘I hope so Ko, otherwise, I’m up doodie creek without a paddle’ Jason replied. ‘Tasteful kid, but, we’re five minute away from the Western Pillar, I took a convenient data stream that got us nice and close’ White said over the speakers. ‘Oh, well, thanks, I couldn’t wait to get there sooner’ Jason replied. ‘Well kid, it’s your funeral, not mine’ White countered. ‘He has a point, we could die Jason. I heard that the white tiger, Baihumon is the strongest of the sovereigns, but also the youngest. It would be impossible for a champion to beat him’ Ko added. ‘Yeah, but, is he a big Digimon? Cause, you’re a small champion, you can poke him a little’ Jason suggested. ‘I might as well use sticks and harsh language Jason, it’s a tiger, not a giant turtle or a budgerigar’ Ko said. ‘That sounds like a plan, as you’re here’ White said. Jason tried not to cry as he and Ko left White as he shut down. The station was like a factory, with machinery whirring and large gears in the walls were turning. ‘As they say, no time like the present’ Ko said as he and Jason ascended the staircase to find the pillar on a large gear that was turning. They had to time a jump onto it and found it hard to keep their balance on it. The pillar had a picture of a tiger inscribed onto it, and a short passage of text as well. ‘Courage is not fighting, or defending. It is knowing you can. With a Friend by your side. Open the gates of destiny’ Jason read. ‘Terrible punctuation’ Ko noted. ‘I wonder if it means something.’ Jason asked. ‘No, they probably just put it there to tell us how to find the best shopping” Ko answered. ‘No need to be sarcarstic about it Ko, but, let’s get this over with. Not as if I want to die any sooner in any case’ Jason replied as he and Ko stood on the pad. There was a flash or white light and they were gone. ‘You have thirty seconds to live, tick tock tock’ Ko said. ‘Stop that’ Jason snapped. They were in a large factory that was alive with conveyor belts, gears, saws and sudden death pits. ‘It’s like a mechanical version of pitfall’ Jason remarked. ‘I don’t know what that is. Does It involve falling to your death?’ Ko asked. ‘Sometimes it does. It is a game where you’re this guy and you have to jump traps and animals and stuff. It’s pretty old though’ Jason replied as he looked down a conveyer belt. ‘So, looks like if we take too long, a conveyer belt will send us to jagged rock junction or pancake land. If only we could find a way to stop all this machinery’ Ko stated. ‘Hmmm, if we could, that would be wonderful. But, what do you mean jagged rock junction? Why would there be rocks in a factory?’ Jason asked. ‘Dunno, why would a guy be randomly jumping about and avoiding them for no reason?’ Ko replied. ‘Okay Mr. Smarty, how do we get out of this?’ Jason asked, his voice had an edge to it. ‘Well, I could evolve into champion and fly you to wherever we need to go, which would most likely be that door up there’ Ko said and pointed to one of the floors, there was a large wooden door surrounded by several gears. ‘Okay, but, that would be too easy, wouldn’t it?’ Jason replied. ‘Maybe, do you want to go across this dangerous linear pathway to almost certain death?’ Ko asked. Jason shook his head. ‘Very good, now evolve me to champion and I’ll do the rest’ Ko added. After a quick evolution, Ko attached himself to Jason’s right arm and slowly rose. ‘You’re so small, but you can hold me up?’ Jason asked as they made their way to the door. ‘There are a lot of things anyone can do that we don’t know about’ Ko replied and they landed in front of the door. Ko de-digivolved and they entered it. ‘Water water everywhere, but not a ship in sight’ Jason sang. ‘Yeah, if there was anything here, we could see something too’ Ko answered. They entered a void of white, nothing but white. ‘There is something you should see, do you know what it is?’ a voice asked. Jason let out a scream and jumped in fright. A sweat drop appeared out of nowhere and then vanished. ‘Once Winona has finished screaming, what should we be seeing?’ Ko asked. ‘I thought you knew, that’s why I asked’ the voice replied smugly. ‘So what is it that we should be seeing?’ Jason asked after ending his fit. ‘Well, you seem lonely is all. Tell me, does Lydia kiss you good night before you go to sleep, or brush your teeth for you?’ the voice asked. ‘No, why would she? We’re friends’ Jason replied. ‘Good answer, shame though. If you had answered yes, I would’ve replied very smugly with ‘because she’s not your mother’. Albeit on further reflection that doesn’t really make sense either way. I guess I would’ve had a mental blank and then said weak’ the voice said. ‘Is there a point to this, or is it like when parents try to tell you something and ask ‘do you understand?’ I mean, you still answer yes, but you don’t get it’ Jason said. ‘You need help child, serious help. The point I am trying to make is that you rely too much on being with Lydia. I have seen two year olds with more balls than you kid. What I am saying is, you need self reliance, Lydia can’t always be there to pick you up when you fall’ the voice stated. ‘I don’t rely on Lydia, we’re just good friends’ Jason said. Ko snorted a little. ‘Yeah right Jas. You cling to her night and day, the voice is right, you don’t have any balls’ Ko added. ‘Why are you going on about balls? I’m only fourteen, I’m not even ready to have sex yet’ Jason protested. ‘No, we use the term balls as a metaphor for guts. You don’t have nay guts to stand up for yourself. Your partner isn’t even an ultimate’ the voice explained. ‘I can’t help that, I don’t know how to evolve him, we weren’t given any guidance, except I heard Dom make reference to a sort of ‘bond’ a tamer and their partner possess. But, Ko and I are good friends, so what can we be doing wrong?’ Jason asked. ‘The bond between a tamer and Digimon is sacred. They rely one ach other for strength, for that is what composes the ties that bind. You look to Ko with admiration and respect, and Ko reciprocates those feelings. However, you don’t think you’re good enough for your partner to become an ultimate. You must be willing to release your true feelings and be willing to fight’ the voice spoke. ‘You mean, I’m repressing feelings that could evolve Ko?’ Jason asked. ‘Yes, you must have the courage to face any new challenge, you must never be afraid to step out of your comfort zone to take on the hero’s journey and achieve your destiny’ the voice elaborated grandly. ‘Are you an inspirational speaker on your off days?’ Ko asked. ‘Be serious Ko, we must not keep joking around. The mysterious voice is right, we have been putting battles on hold for fun and games, but no more, I am willing to fight’ Jason cried and raised his sword. ‘Finally, you’re getting it, I’m with you buddy one hundred percent. Let’s go kick everyone’s butts’ Ko shouted, joining in and raising his hand. Both the sword and his arm crossed, triggering Jason’s Digivice to go ballistic. ‘Digivolve’ Ko shouted as the blue sphere surrounded him. It turned gold and shattered to reveal a tall golden insect. ‘MatallifeKuwagamon’ Ko shouted as his hand was clutched in Jason’s. ‘You’re looking great Ko. At least you’re actually bigger than me now’ Jason laughed. ‘Yeah, but no matter what size, I can still kick your butt’ Ko replied and crossed his arms. ‘Indeed, you have past the Trial of Courage’ the voice added. ‘This was a Trial of Courage?’ Jason asked. ‘It was, and you have now opened your heart to being courageous and ready, I am most glad. Now be ready, you will now face the most powerful sovereign, Baihumon’ the mysterious voice echoed and both of them vanished in a stream of data. Whirring and grinding was heard as large mechanized platforms hovered over a large pit. Jason and Ko were standing on one of the floating platforms and were facing the large white tiger on the central platform. ‘Good, you came, as I knew you would, are you ready to fight?’ he asked. ‘Yeah, but aren’t you at a disadvantage? These platforms are too small for you, meaning you’re stuck on the one you are on now’ Jason pointed out. ‘Maybe, but you never know. Kongou!’ Baihu roared, firing a brown energy blast from his mouth. Ko grabbed Jason and leapt to a different platform as the energy blast struck the platform and it rusted, falling into the pit. ‘Like it? The Kongou turns any victim into a rusted statue of their former selves. I don’t need to move at all, you can’t dodge forever when the last place you end up is right where I want you’ Baihu said with an evil grin and fired another blast. ‘Watch out, Homing Laser!’ Ko shouted and fired several large beams from his fingers. They clashed and created a small explosion. The Kongou went through in splinters and missed their platform. ‘Clever, your lasers scattered my blast, but that won’t save you. Especially not from my Gyokurin O attack’ Baihu replied and flicked his tail, launching the spiked ring at them. ‘I can and I will, Emit Blade’ Ko countered. Ko removed his horns, lobbed them like a boomerang, and dodged to a nearby platform as both weapons struck in the air and fell into the pit. ‘Your partner never ceases to amuse me Jason, but, you cannot last against me for long if you insist on dodging’ Baihu added conversationally and fired another blast, which the pair dodged. ‘He’s right Ko, we can’t beat him if you keep dodging and not attack. If you could fly, this would be easy’ Jason added. ‘You’re right, de-digivolve me to BladeKuwagamon’ Ko replied. ‘Okay’ Jason said and did so. Ko landed onto Jason’s right arm and attached himself. He immediately zoomed off and avoided Baihu with fast movement. ‘This is going to wreck my wrist you know? Ugh, we can’t hurt him as a champion Ko, despite the better dodging’ Jason said. ‘I know, but we need to find a weakness’ Ko replied in annoyance. Jason growled and looked at Baihumon, noticing something odd. ‘Do Digimon get tooth decay?’ he asked. ‘What? No, we don’t, data doesn’t rot our teeth, why bring that up anyway?’ Ko replied quickly. ‘Because Baihumon has a brown tooth, I just thought it was rotten’ Jason explained. ‘I know, that’s probably where his obnoxious Kongou attack comes from, if I attack it, then it should stop’ Ko deduced. Jason looked at his Digivice and remembered something Charlie had spoken about. ‘Modify, Seizer Blade’ Jason commanded. His Digivice began to glow as Ko’s blade began to lengthen and glow with golden energy. ‘Thanks, okay, let’s give fangy a lesson in dentistry’ Ko replied and zoomed at Baihu, actually cutting through a Kongou attack and facing Baihu. With a swift movement, Ko brought Jason’s arm back and struck forward, ending an inch before the tooth. ‘Psyche’ Jason said and the blade extending, breaking the tooth and causing them to white out. They were on the mechanical platform with the pillar in front of them, a white sphere was clutched in Jason’s hand. A hologram of Baihu appeared above the pad. ‘That wasn’t very funny you know? But courageous most definitely. You beat me and earned yourself an ultimate and the power to pass that, with that digi-core in your hand of course. Now, before you go, an old friend of mine, in his dying wishes gave me his data to one-day pass on to someone worthy of being called the Grandis. I believe you are worthy, so his data was downloaded into your Digivice. Now good luck to you and your friend facing the Central Pillar, are leader is mercilessly strong, she needs all the hope she could gather’ Baihu explained. ‘How do you know it’s a girl?’ Jason asked. Baihu winked at him. ‘I’m just that good’ was his reply as he vanished. They shrugged and walked down to White, who activated as they faced him. ‘You survived, as I knew you would’ he said. ‘You said we were going to die’ Ko reminded. ‘It’s called tough love you punks, now get on, we have a short trip back now’ White countered and the boarded. On the Digivice screen, was the face of a black bug. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Great chapter, cheesy title though. Also i didn't mind waiting a little longer than usual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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