.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 The theme for the good guys was great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 here's a question just because i'm bored.Which digivolution scene is your fav one? Mine's the tamers rookie-champion digivolution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 I think mine is these two: Paildramon to Imperialdramon Imperialdramon Dragon Mode to Fighting Mode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 interesting. well i guess all i can do now is wait for Broken to post the next chapter which i expect to be great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Where's the next chapter?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Have I ever displeased you guys? Also, I would like to point out that as of this chapter, I am past 50k words for the entire fiction. [spoiler=Chapter 24: Destination Unknown] ‘Final Stop, Central Pillar Terminus, everyone off’ Yellow said through a speaker. Steph opened her eyes and yawned as she saw a temple like complex outside the window. She shook Gaomon gently as his head was perched on her lap. Slowly the whole carriage woke up and departed the carriage onto the platform. ‘Well, see you punks later, I’m taking a nap in my shed now’ Yellow said and rolled forward onto the central turntable. It slowly began to rise and whirring was heard. It then descended and yellow was gone, replaced by a green Trailmon that looked like a turtle. The turntable rotated to a different track and it trundled to the platform marked with an ‘N’. ‘Hey there, I’m Green, the Trailmon that takes you to the Northern Pillar, all aboard if you possess the Black Turtle Pass. If you do not; then please go to the Central Pillar and obtain it. My friends Red, Blue and White will be with you shortly’ Green said slowly. ‘Right’ Kevin said and ascended one of the four spiral staircases. ‘I think we should follow him, to obtain our passes as well’ Aban suggested. He walked up the staircase with Charlie and Jason behind him. ‘Are you worried about your battle with the Dragon of the Center?’ Lydia asked, attempting to make conversation. ‘Yeah, I am a little. I think he is the mightiest of the five, a challenge to prove I am the leader’ Steph replied. ‘A test of bonds and friendship in times of trouble. And to think I have to prove if I am good or evil, it would seem I got the short end of the stick. I haven’t even gotten Lop to ultimate, and you’re trying to get to mega already, it is so god damn annoying’ Lydia said sarcastically. ‘There is no need for that. You forget the worst part is that we have to wait for these guys to finish their challenges; they could be weeks. You know how it is with guys and fighting, for instance Goku, he takes seven grueling minutes to transform when it takes about a second for our partners’ Steph countered. ‘Nice argument, but Goku is in fact fictitious’ Lydia pointed out. ‘We all are’ was Steph’s reply. ‘We all are what?’ Aban asked as he came down the stairs. He was holding a blue ticket with a lighting bolt on it. ‘Nothing, it doesn’t matter’ Steph said. ‘Well, I got the Blue Dragon Pass. Kev got his Black Turtle Pass, Charlie got the Red Phoenix Pass and little Jason here got the White Tiger Pass’ Aban explained, holding up his ticket. ‘Whatever, just get on the Trailmon already’ Lydia replied and began dragging Jason and Ko to the White Trailmon that appeared, it looked like a tiger. ‘You seem a bit young to take on the White Tiger kid. I wish you luck from the bottom of my heart, because you and your partner are going to die’ White said as Jason boarded. White slowly rolled down his tracks and out of his tunnel to the west. ‘Good luck Aban and Keras, don’t die on us’ Steph said as he entered the Blue Trailmon, it was shaped like a dragon. ‘Thanks’ Aban replied as he boarded with Keras. ‘Prepareforboarding, ohyou’reallreadyon? Gofigure, inanycaseprepareforyourjourneytotheEasternPillar, allaboardandwhoowhoo’ Blue said quickly as he raced out of his tunnel. ‘Be safe Charlie, and good luck’ Gaomon said to Charlie and Vixen. ‘Thanks for that little man, see ya soon’ Charlie said and boarded. Vixen lobbed a wink to Gaomon as she boarded as well. ‘Welcome to Red Phoenix railways, I am Red, prepare for your journey’ Red said calmly as he trundled out, he was shaped like a phoenix. ‘Now Kevin, good luck with your challenge, I hope it goes well’ Steph said with moderate discomfort. ‘Thanks’ Kev said dryly and boarded Green with Magnet. ‘Thanks for boarding, we’ll be at the Northern Pillar in no time, whoo whoo’ Green said slowly but left quickly. ‘Be safe’ Steph whispered as Green was out of sight. Kevin watched the underground scenery from the window as Green raced ahead. ‘How long is the ETA for the Northern Pillar?’ he asked. ‘Oh, about three hours I should think. We go underground because of the data streams allow us to warp across the world. The Northern Terminus has a warp three hours away’ Green explained slowly. ‘Okay, still, I can’t help but feel that there was something else in Steph’s message as I left’ Kev said. Magnet made some beeping noises and Kev looked at him. ‘No, she could never like anyone like me’ he said. Magnet made some more beeping noises. ‘That hug as just a little pick-me-up, she seemed so sad and I’m not made completely of stone. I had to display some form of compassion’ Kev protested. Magnet’s noises became more urgent. ‘Look, I will have no talk of that. I DO NOT LOVE STEPHANIE’ he shouted angrily. Magnet made a satisfied whirring noise and crossed its arms. ‘I will have none of that when we’re in the presence of the Black Turtle of the North’ Kev scolded. They arrived at the station, which was filled with lush greenery. ‘Welcome to the Northern Pillar, my master, the Black Turtle of the North, Ebonwumon awaits you above at his pillar. To meet him, you must pass through the Trial of Nature, then the Trial of Illusion. Finally, the Trial of Power awaits. Re you prepared?’ Green asked. ‘As always, I am prepared’ Kev replied. ‘Good, a stiff upper lip is just the thing you need for the Trial of Illusions, farewell boy of technology’ Green said as Kev ascended the staircase. Above was a forest with the same greenery as the station. In the centre was a large pillar, upon which was etched a large two headed turtle, beneath were four lines of text. ‘Illusion and Lies. Reality and Truth. Each the same yet opposed in Trial. For one is a lie and the other a truth’ it read. ‘Lame and contradictory’ Kev said and spotted a large octagonal pad. He and Magnet stepped on it and it glew, whisking them away. Kev opened his eyes to find he was in a forest. ‘The Trial of Nature young human. Where every step you make is two steps back. How do you find the door when you end up further than you think?’ a mysterious voice asked. ‘The practical thing then would be to hop, skip or any other form of movement that isn’t a step’ Kev replied. The voice didn’t answer, as if confused. ‘Would that be right?’ a mysterious Scottish voice asked. ‘I think so, smart kid, it would seem that we need to revamp our challenge of Nature’ a mysterious Irish voice replied. ‘Of course, I could say that the door is right behind me and the door ahead is also behind me, so it would seem that I am making no progress, when I’m just going in a circle. I could always turn my back to the door and walk in the opposite direction to get to where I want to be anyways’ Kev added. ‘We get the picture, but just you wait. The Trial of Illusion won’t be as easy’ the Scottish voice said, with a hint of indignity. Kev sighed and turned around, where he could the door again. He began jumping towards it, getting closer until he made it. Magnet followed suit and they were at the door. He smiled smugly as he opened it, only to reveal an empty whiteness. Kev and Magnet were confused by the whiteness of this Trial. The door slammed shut and they were alone as the White turned into Black. ‘Do you remember your life on earth?’ a voice asked. ‘Of course I do’ Kev replied. ‘Hmmm, then, why is it that your heart cannot remember?’ it added. ‘What do you mean?’ Kev asked. ‘This is a Trial of Illusion, I could be lying, or I could be truthful. Illusion and reality is a thin line Kevin Stout. You should do well to remember this, for it will save you later’ it replied. ‘Right, are you saying my heart has forgotten my world? Or that you’re assuming it has?’ he asked. The voice chuckled as the world warped to a scene from the human world. It was at a school and a little boy and girl were facing each other. ‘This was so long ago’ Kev remarked. ‘Erm Lily, I brought you these pretty flowers’ the little boy said embarrassingly. ‘Kevvy, these are beautiful’ Lily said happily. ‘But not as beautiful as you’ mini Kev said. The girl began to giggle. ‘Oh Kevvy, you’re funny’ she laughed. Kev tore his eyes from the image as it faded. ‘What does that have to do with now? Kev demanded. ‘Oh, I just thought you wanted to know that you still do have a heart, just as a reminder. But tell me, as you got older, what did you achieve? You always seemed average at everything, but then you peaked and became the best at the thing you hated, school, why?’ it asked as the scene warped to a classroom. A twelve-year-old Kev was sitting at the back of a room, staring out of the window at the playground below. ‘And the answer to this equation is, master Stout?’ the teacher asked. Kev didn’t turn his gaze. ‘Forty-two’ he replied. ‘Even in the face of distraction our prodigy does not answer incorrectly’ the teacher remarked. A small smile creeped up on Kev’s face. The image again fades, with the same smile on Kev’s face. ‘And that proved what?’ he asked. ‘I honestly stopped caring, but now; I will show you a new illusion, an illusion that exists in your heart, soul and mind. You can deny it, but I know this all too well’ the voice said smugly and the image churned into a nighttime scene. Kev was looking over a balcony to a city below; he was wearing a tuxedo and looked much older. ‘Well my dear, I cannot believe how swiftly the wedding ceremony went’ he said to someone in the room. The person’s face was masked, but it was a woman, in a fine silk white wedding dress. ‘It was Kevin, or should I say my darling? And to think I thought you didn’t like me, besides that one hug’ she replied with a giggle. ‘Yes, Thanks to you, me, Demi, BK and the rest, we saved both worlds, and our hearts’ older Kev said with a smile. ‘I know. I know it also hurt you to let Magnetmon go, but, I’m sure he was happy for you. Both of you together made whole a wonderful being’ the woman replied. ‘I know, it pained me, but he was happy, I can still feel him in my heart, his beeping reminded me I am never alone in this world, as he gave you to me’ older Kev said and entered the room. The woman was revealed as an older Stephanie. ‘I have waited for this day for many years, I guess I hid it by far too well’ older Kev remarked as he sat next to older Steph and they kissed. ‘Yes, and now we can be together forever, forever, forever, forever, forever’ older Steph kept repeating as the image faded. A single drop of sweat fell from Kevin’s brow; it dripped to the floor, which rippled. ‘That, you can’t, I would never imagine anything like that’ Kev said. ‘Oh, but you don’t imagine it. your heart dreams it Kevin Stout, ever since you laid eyes upon that girl your heart dreamed. And through my power, you can have her’ the voice said. ‘What?’ Kev asked. ‘I will give you the power to make you and that girl love, but you must forfeit the trial, can you do that? Let power go for the one and only chance for love? As you said on the Trailmon, she could never love anyone like you’ the voice echoed, sounding more evil. A small contract fell into Kev’s hand, along with a pen. ‘Just contract away Ebonwumon’s power, and I can grant you your heart’s desire’ the voice added. Kev looked at the paper, and then at Magnet, who was shaking its head. Kev smiled smugly as he wrote on the paper. It vanished. ‘You failed the challenge; now you will never have the power too……what does G F U mean’? the voice asked. ‘Exactly what it reads, go f**k yourself. You can’t just contract love away. This wasn’t even a challenge. The writing on the pillar read ‘Illusion and Lies. Reality and Truth. Each the same yet opposed in Trial. For one is a lie and the other a truth’. At first I thought it was pointless jabbering, but then it made me think. Why was the trial part capitalized? Then it hit me, one of the trials was false, and the other was true. At first I thought the Trial of Nature was a lie, but it wasn’t. It was telling me that no matter how many steps I take towards a goal, there would always be a step back for every failure, until you reverse your thinking and go in the opposite direction to review your goals. Nice try on the ‘Me and Steph’ illusion by the way, pure genius’ Kev stated. The voice made its light laughing sound. ‘We are very impressed Kevin Stout. Though you were our first challenger, we thought that you would fall to the temptation of love. We are very glad to see you had the willpower to resist, now, prepare for the challenge of the Black Turtle of the North, we, Ebonwumon’ Ebonwumon roared and the world evaporated. Kev was in an extremely large arena with Magnetmon by his side. Opposite was a gargantuan turtle, with two heads both facing him. ‘Your back was the first trial?’ Kev asked. ‘Indeed it was lady. Many are surprised by the vegetation on our back, but we couldn’t be the sovereign of wood without it ya know?’ the Scottish head said. ‘Indeed we couldn’t my lad. Now prepare, we are fighting two on two, us versus you. If you succeed, we will grant you the power of the north, now try to win’ the Irish head roared. ‘Fine, Digivolve Magnetmon’ Kev commanded. The data sphere surrounded Magnet and it shattered to reveal ElectroMagnetismon. ‘Soul Jogress’ Kev shouted and was surrounded by the crimson aura. He leapt and fused into Electro. ‘The way of soul Digimon is a mysterious path, now taste our Double Dragon Wave’ the Irish head said and they both fired streams of green energy. ‘Pathetic, try and stop my Pulling Force’ Kev replied. Both of his hands glew with red and blue energy and he fired them at Ebonwu, who wasn’t budging an inch. ‘You’re not very smart are you laddy boy? We weigh over five hundred tones, and no week magnetic trick will catch us off guard. Black Hail’ the Scottish head stated and they both roared. Large chunks of black ice began to rain down. Kev tried to dodge as best as he could, but was caught by one of the chunks and slammed to the ground. He groaned as it vanished and he got up. ‘Come on wee man, you can’t get power by lying on your arse’ the Scottish head mocked. ‘Fine then, modify, Negative Ions’ Kev shouted. The right and left arms began to warp, a strange device molded to it. ‘You can’t say much for sitting on your arse when you walk on four legs’ Kev countered and a large red beam sword extended from the right arm and a blue beam from the left. ‘Impressive, Black Hail’ the Irish head shouted. The familiar black ice began to rain down but any chunk even nearing Kev was sliced apart. ‘I will end this now Ebonwumon’ Kev told him and flew straight at the tortoise (or turtle). He dodged the snapping heads and ice, flying into the forest until he found the pillar. ‘Farewell’ he said and slashed it. The whole scene began to flicker. Kev was back at the pad, in his normal form with Magnet by his side; in his hand was a green sphere. A small hologram of Ebonwumon appeared over the pad. ‘You did well laddy boy, how did you know the pillar was there and was our weak point?’ the Scottish head asked. ‘Because, the pillar, the Trial of Nature, the Trial of Illusion were all on your back. Obviously your weak point was as well’ Kev explained. ‘Very clever’ the Irish head said. ‘Yes, but tell me now, how long have you slept?’ Kev asked. ‘Many years wee human. We have slept until the day you would come to seek one of our digi-cores, which is in your hand by the way. Use it well, for it will grant you the power when you need it most’ the Scottish head said and the image vanished. Kev just chuckled as he descended the stairs, where Green was waiting. ‘How was it?’ he asked. ‘Refreshing’ Kev replied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 SWEET CHAPTER!!!!!!!! i guess you changed your mind then about having the fight in a later chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Your character completed the trial very nicely, Fallen. I salute Kevin and Magnetmon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 i found it most interesting with the illusion with him but it did give me a heart attack with Magnetmon not being there at all, i somehow doubt Kev would ever want Magnetmon to disappear. anyway, i think charlie is up next so i hope he and Vixen complete theirs as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 like it then? so, do you like the negative ions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 yep that was very cool as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 beam swords, still, did you like the possible 'future' for kevin and staphanie? oh yeah, i have thought of making an episodic non-canon side-story for the CFM after it is finished, and wanna know the stars? btw, it will be, movielike, so short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 it was very interesting except for the part with Magnetmon not being there, that gave me a heart attack with the thought of him not being with them but then the question is: How does he die/disappear (i ain't to sure which it is) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 yeah still, kev might in fact know that it isn't right to keep his soul fractured like that, but i put sentimental value in that magnet is always with him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 i did like the sentimental value bit but if Magnetmon does go, i hope it will be epic. even though a soul shouldn't be fractured maybe it will become more broken if he lost Magnetmon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 it still was an illusion brought out of kevin's heart, not the actual future, but a possible one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 i would have thought that he would want Magnetmon to live if it was an illusion brought out of Kevin's heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 beam swords' date=' still, did you like the possible 'future' for kevin and staphanie? [b']oh yeah, i have thought of making an episodic non-canon side-story for the CFM after it is finished, and wanna know the stars? btw, it will be, movielike, so short[/b] I wanna know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 beam swords' date=' still, did you like the possible 'future' for kevin and staphanie? [b']oh yeah, i have thought of making an episodic non-canon side-story for the CFM after it is finished, and wanna know the stars? btw, it will be, movielike, so short[/b] depends on how the story goes right now. We can't exactly pick characters in case they die in the future chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Blueislikesototallyepicamiright? Somehow I figured Ebonwu would be scottish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 well i think he was given a scottish accent in the anime. oh, Broken, i forgot to mention i hope this Lily person that was shown in Kev's past doesn't mean that she will appear in the fan fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 *Shrugs* I didn't watch the anime much, and when I did it was more for the evolution stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 well i didn't see that bit either, i just read it somewhere that he was given a scottish accent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Makes sense though ;D Somehow I think Dom will go up against a Demon Lord <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 maybe but i ain't to sure what path of conquest means for Dom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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